CHILZ..that was awesome..& only you could do that for PIYA..yes..I am very much with her too..poor soul..She was shattered but ABHAY was no less..shattered either..sweet heart..its just that he dosent want to feel confused & scared..and he wants you to be yourself..not conscious of yourself..but actually he is in the bargain torturing himseld & you..YES ABHAY ITS HIGH TIME YOU TRUST ..the girl who trusts you more than herself..!!FOREVER..!!
Love how you portray piya ..she already started thinking in that direction . She do find abhay behaviour different when it comes to sid and yes she finds abhay is hiding again .
Hope abhay really trust her and tell the truth but as sid said if piya finds sid is vampire ..then he is not going to hide himself behind the good look . Wonder what abhay should do ....but again in end truth will def keep her on safer side .
Loved the way u always pen down about piya thought ( read earlier too) . Awesome writting
dolzieeeeeeee ....loved it <333 loved the way u penned down the story...u wrote really well...the story was all about piya and her POV ....luved the way u described her feelings towards abhay .....it was beautifully written ....piya is really confused what is happening with her life....why is abhay behaving so strangely....there must be many questions in her mind....whose answers she want to know....she really wants to know that what is the connection between abhay and sid....hope she gets out of this complication soon.....and i really loved it <3333.....didn't knew that my frnd is amazing writer.... luv yaa