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Originally posted by: _Akanksha_*Reserved*
-EDITED-Such a beautiful OS, Kanky. 🤗 I, myself, have written about 1-2 OSes about Kabir from his and Pia's POV. But they surely didn't turn out to be as beautiful, serene and precise as this one. 😳Don't keel me if I say that this looked more like Riddhima's POV when she had to choose between Sid and Armaan, a person who she loves, && a person who taught her the meaning of love. And this looked more like, a battlement of two one-sided forces, and is her love really one-sided enough? And, in the end, her feelings, her love for Abhay won over her guilt for Kabir. But I liked the suppressed, hurt version of Kabir more than the egoistic bratty version of Kabir. So, yeah, I loved him here. Wonderful job. And thanks for the PM + the Facebook reminder! 😊
Originally posted by: Auroni.92Wonderfully written kanks...Im speechless...
Originally posted by: -Sharmila-~RES~
Edited:Ms. Kankshita DewanWhen will you stop surprising me? I was lost in the OS when I read the introduction itself. 😆This is seriously one OS that will be in my mind and heart forever. I've read it thrice till now. 😛 Yeah, you are right Kabir has been denied of a lot of things. But he knew from the start that Pia wasn't truly involved in that boyfriend-girlfriend thingy, didn't he? Its like Jake and Bella now ( your FAV one-side lovers) . . . .P and K love each other, but P doesn't love him like she loves A.Btw, I li'l angry with you about the length of the OS. I was going deeper and deeper when DANG! it got over. Yeah I know that it had everythng that you wanted to convey and short OSes are more heart-touching. . .A brilliant OS!Kudos to ya!LoveSharmi
Originally posted by: Angel-PebbyThat was superb Kanks. I don't really know what's happening in the show, I'm not an ardent viewer, that was really great. One sided love... well, i'm kinda familiar with the topic... (like, i love KSG... he doesn't even know i exist =/) Okay, are Kabir and Pia portraying the Jake-Bella relationship, here? That would be really intriguing to watch. One hell of a one shot, or should i say, half one shot... i was really into reading it and all, and bam, it was over! ...
So, great one. I just the love the way you play with words, its fabulous! I'm absolutely in for reading something more on this very theme from you, umm... like from K's POV? i maintain high hopes on that one!Thanks for the PM and this wonderful piece, that would be in my mind and heart for long... which is very LOOOOOOOONG. :)Love,Garima
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