happy valentines day!! A monaya os!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey guys...happpy valentines day to everyone...!!!! here is a os on our januable... sweet lovable couple monayaaa!!!! guys..this is my fist os on monaya...i've written many os on sajan...... but this is first os on monaya.....its quite sad n heart wretching...but i had this idea..so thought to write it on monaya!! plzz forgive me if there is any mistake... if u like it..plzz press like..n do comment!!
HAPPY VALENTINES DAY......
"agar usne mujhe kaal propose nahi kia na....tum dekhna ratiii..i'll just kill himmm" said sanaya...sitting upset on her bed....rati holding tissues for her....her bestest buddy everrr!!! was trying to console her..
rati=sanaya...chal na..ab bass kar...im sure sorry damn sure ke woh tujhe zarur propose karegaa....aur esa wase nahi...mohit ke style mee!!!
sanaya=shut up ratii..im damn serious..n damn angryyy!!!! mohit jaisa boring person mane apni life me nahi dekha..aur jab mane usse aj pucha ke kaal ek bohot special din ha.. kya ha??? to woh kehne laga ke..ke kaal kya ha??? i dont remember...idiot kahika....
rati=are agar usse yaad nahi tha..to tu usse yaad dila detiii...
sanaya=ma kyu yaad dilau?? kya uska dimag nahi ha???? itnisi baat yaad nahi ke kaal valentines day ha.....lovers ka dinnn!!!!! pichle ek saalse humara affair ha...we love each other so muchhhh.....par harbaar...ma shadiki baat karti hu..to woh kehta ha..abhi nahiii..badme.,.abhi puri lifeee baki ha...are esa kehte kehte...dekh na..usne kitna bara empire bana liaa...tu super singer ban gayiii....arjun bhii to superstar ban gaya.. aur ma bhi fashion designer...par abtak usne mujhe shadi keliye propose nahi kia...aaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!......
rati=are are......sanaya..plzz pllzzz yaar...
sanaya=i hate him...i hate himmmm...i hate himmm!!!!!
rati=u hate him????
sanaya=ha...i hatee....no..i just cant hate him...i loveee him u noooo!!!!!!! i just love him so muchhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
scene shifts to a room...were to boys were playing video games in the tv....n laughing... they were arjun n mohitt...buddizzz foreverr
arjun=mohitt.....tune to sanaya ko bara gussa kardiya..
mohit=are....usse gussa karke mananeme jo maza ha na..woh aur kisi cheeze me nahi ha..aur jab usse mere kaalke surprise ke bareme pata chalega to woh to.....ekdam khushise jhumne lagegiii...
arjun=surprise?? what??? jaldi boll..jaldi bolll.......
mohit=sunnn...
mohit tellls something to arjun...arjun was hearing it attentivelyy..
mohit=samjha???
arjun=wooohhhh!!!!!!!! superbb.......agar mujhe pehle ye idea ata to..ma rati ko bhi esehi propose kartaa....
mohit=ye sare ideas sirf mohit ko hi ate ha u noo...
arjun=wase mujhe lagta tha..ke tujhse zyada romantic ma hu..par no wayss...
mohit=yaar..jab baat sanaya ki ati ha...to ma har cheeze best karna chahta hu....kyuki shes the best...uske lie har cheeze best honi chahiye..koi kami nahiiii..peechle ek saal se woh isi umeed pe ha...ke ma usse kab ring deke propose karunga???? aur ma humesha usse dalta raha..kyuki ma kalka wait karraha tha....valentines day..aur tu dekhna.. kaal hum humesha keliye ek hojayenge......
arjun=awesumeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sanaya n ratii
rati=dekh sanaya..ab chup hoja...dekh sare tissues khatam hochuke ha..gharke sare tissue boxes empty hogaye ha..par tere asoo ha kii..
sanaya=ratii...ma itni upset huu..aur tu ha ke...tu bhi uss dumbo ke jaiseee!!
rati=accha accha...sorry meri maa...sorryyy!!!
sanaya=ratii..tu to kitni lucky ha...arjun ne tujhe college ke time hi propose kia tha... aur mohit,.t....thiss idiottt!! grrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!
rati=accha ek baata...agar woh itna hi unromantic ha...idiot ha..dumbo ha....stupid ha.. to usse itna kyu pyaar karti ha???
sanaya=pata nahii..but i love himmmmm...woh itna pyaara...itna sweett sabse alaggg.... itna januable...college ka topper...thorasa buddhuuu..par itna intelligant......caring..adorablee.. thorasa unromantic...par mere sath jab akela rehta ha..to kitna romanticc....goddd!!!! aur bhi bohot lambi list ha..jiski wajase...i cant stop myself.....but fall for himmm..
rati=mujhe pata ha...aur ek baat kahu???
sanaya=i think ke mohit ke pass..tere liye koi surprise ha....aur woh jaan buchke tujhe sata raha ha..taki badme tujhe surprise karsake...
sanaya=r u serious????
rati=hmmmm...i think..tujhe yaad nahii....college me..tere birthday ke din...woh partyyy... pehle ese acting ke jaise kuch pata nahii..par phirr...pura disco usne tere liye book kia tha... diwali ke dinnn.....tere gharpar tujhe surprise karnekeliye hum sabko leke agayaa... jabki pehle tujhe kaha tha..ke hum sab goa jarahehthe..aur tu nahi jasaktiii..tu kitni khush hui thiii...yaad ha..
sanaya=ha....
rat=sanaya sochhh..woh tujhe satane keliye ye sab karraha ha..he wants to give u a surprisee.....
sanaya=how daree hee??? har baar theek ha..par is baar...my feelingss...mera sabse baara sapna....ke kab woh mujhe meri favourite ring dikhake propose karegaa?? kab?? kab ma aur woh ek hojayengee????kab?? n he...damn itt....woh mazak karraha ha mere sath?? theek ha...ma bhi dekhtii hu..woh mujjhe surprise karna chahta ha na..to theek ha...ma bhi esi acting karungii ke mujhe kuch pata nahi ha..par i swear ratii..agar kaal usne mujhe propose nahi kia..aur mujhe ring nahi dii..ring ke badle kuch aur dena chaha to ma reject kardungiii!!
rati=what????
sanaya=uske ek ring keliye mane bohot wait kia ha...aba agar usne mujhe kaal ring ke bajar valentine me aur kuch gift diya...then i'll rejectt...!!!!
rati=tu serious ha???
sanaya=ha..mohit ko shadikeliye mananekeliye..aur usse propose karwanekeliye yehi karna parega..tu dekhna...esa karneke baad...woh zarurr ring leke mujhe sabke samne propose karegaa..
rati=i hope soo....
just then there was a sms on sanayas phone...
sanaya=rati zara dekhna kaun ha....
rati=ok...
rati checks it was sms from mohit...
rati=sanaya.....mohit ka sms..
sanaya=kya likha ha...parna..
rati="kaal theek subhah baara baje..mujhe lake veiw park me milna...i'll wait for u.." mohit...
sanaya=park me?? dekha tune..usse yaad nahi ha..yaad hota..to kaal private moment koi park me spend karega?? aur woh bhi subhah??? sham ko kya karengee phir?????
rati=tu jake dekhlenaa...aur daat bhi lena ussee..
sanaya-i no mujhe kya karna ha....
she takes a knife from the table...rati was scared..
rati=tu kya karrahiha??
sanaya=isse leke..kaal uske samne usse daraungiii..agar usne mujhe ring deke propose nahi kia toooo......ha...!!!!
rati=ur crazyyy....
arjun n mohit
arjun=tujhe lagta ha woh ayegi???
mohit=lagta nahi im sure....woh ayegii..yeh dekhnekeliye..ke agar ma bhul gaya to kaal kyu milna chahta huuu...i swear yaar arjunn.....usse kaal esa surprise karunga...ke humesha kaal ka din yaad rakhegiii...
the next morning....
sanaya was getting ready to go to the parkk..according to mohiitt...she weared a nice...red sleevless dress...with black borders..mohit gifted it on her birthdayy... she was praying...that today he would propose himmm...
sanaya=ok san....ur readyyy...chall..ab dekhte ha..mohit ne kya plan kia ha..aur ha yaad rakhna...woh chahe jitna bhi hot handsome lage..aur tere samne...tere sath jitna bhi sweetly behave kareee.e..agar ring nahi diyaa..to tu usse gussa hoke chali jayegaiiii...aur jo gift woh tujhe degaa...woh tu nahi legii..ha...chall..ab chalte ha...
park...
mohit was waiting for her.....he was sitting on a bench n waiting for her..he had a gift packet beside him..he was wearing a white shirt..with black pants..looking hot as alwayss....mohit was smiling n thinking about sanaya...when he saw infront of him...sanaya coming towards him,..with a smalll smile on her lips....mohit stood up seeing her...she was looking as usual....beuatifulll....shyness on her eyes...blushing eyes.... pinky lipss..n silky hair coming on her face......seeing her mohit was already fainted.. sanaya was too feeling the samee...he was looking too hott to handlee...she thoughtt...n his eyes not moving gaze from her was making her more blushhh...but sanaya controled herselff..
n tried to be normaall..not melting infront of him...finally they came to face to facee....
sanaya=hii..
mohit=hiii...looking awesuem as usuall.
sanaya blushed...
sanaya=ur also loooking very handsomee....as alwayss...
mohit=thankss...mujhe laga ke tum nahi aogiii..
sanaya=kyu???tumhe esa kyu laga?????
mohit=nahii..kaal jis tarahse tum beechmehi club se chali gayyii...to....mujhe laga.. ur still angry with mee..
sanaya=nahii..woh mujhe kuch kaam yaad agaya tha..rati ke sath to usse milne chali gayi thii..anywayss..happ....
mohit=what????
sanaya=kuch nahiii...mera matlab ha ke...what happened??? aj yaha kyu bulaya??
mphit=tumhe kuch dena tha....i mean...kuch kehna tha...kuch dena tha...very speciall..n kuch kehna tha...jo shayed tumhe accha lage..
sanaya(in mind)=thank god...finally he'll propose me....pure park me sabke samneee!! gossshhhh...hes too sweeettt.....lovee himm
sanaya=kya??? dena tha????
mohit took the gift packet...n gave it to her..sanaya was surprised..
sanaya(in mind)=ring ke liyee..itna packing...hes tooo sweett...
sanaya took the gift packet...n started to open itt....she oepend it...it was a cute teddy bearr..with a heart holding...it was too cutee...gunjan at first was happy..but then she realized that it was not the ringg....he didnt propose her...another year wasteddd!! she thoughtt.
sanaya=ye??? ye ha mera giftt????
mohit=ha..par...sanaya...tum..
sanaya=mohiit...tum mujjhe mere ek sawal ka jawab doge???? akhir kab hum ek hongee??? kab tum mujhe for godss sake...shadi keliye kahoge??? shadikeliye kahogee?? kab??? kab woh din ayegaaa???????? god damnn...tum ajka din valentines day bhul gaye???? love dayyyy...damn it..mane kitna intezaar kia tha..is din keliye..ke tum mujhe shadikeliye kahogee.....agle mahine rati aur arjun ki shadi ha..humari love story unse pehle start huii..par abtakk..hum sabke samne apne relation ko name nahi desaktee...for what??? u......mohit agar tumhe mujhse shadi nahi karni ha..to kehdoooo.. plzz...par mujhe is tarahse upset mat karooo...
mohit=sanaya...ek baar ye teddy..
sanaya=teddy my footttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sanaya became very angryyy n she threwww it on the roadd.....n started to cryy,....mohit wanted to console her..but the teddy was more imp for him..as the surprise was in itt... so he ran to pick it...sanaya sat on the bench...sad n upset....after sometime..she saw mohit still didnt returnn...that was starngee..
sanaya=ye kaha chala gayaa??? ek teddy keliye...
she turned around to look on the road...n the first thing she was a huge crowd... sanaya was confused...she slowly went to the crowd..an accident took placee...sanaya went inside the crowdd...n got the biggest shock of her lifeee!!
sanaya=mohittttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it was mohitt..who was lying there on the road....blood allover his bodyyy...n he taking his last breaths....sanaya sat on the roadd..n put his head on her lappp...it didnt take long n tears started to flowww..
sanaya=tum....mohittt!! someone....call the ambulancee.tumhe kuch nahi hogaaa....
mohit was smiling..
mohit=sanaya....plzz...ek baar....ye teddyyy...iss teddy ke centre pee........push karooo......heart pee...
sanaya took the teddyyy..n pressed it on its tummyy....a beautiful tune started to playy..n after thattt...."hey sanaya..happy valentines dayyy......ur everything to me.. the whole worrlddd....i just cant leave without uu....but feeling too nervous to say thiss... so used the teddyy..ur afvourite soft toyyy....so...plzz tell me..will u marry me????? if u say yess....the ring is in my pockeeetttt...."
sanaya was shockedd..the biggest n sweetest surprise of her lifee...she looked at mohit with loving eyes....tears were flowing from her eyes...continuoslllyy...
g=tum....
mohit managed to take out the ring from his pockett...n gave to herr.....
mohit=happy valentiness day sanaya....
n with this...mohit took his last breathee....he was holding sanayas hand...it fell down on the road....sanaya was also almost deadd...she took the ringg...n screammeddd
sanaya=mohittttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u cant leavee me.e...no i cant let u goo like thiss....no mhitttttttttt!!!! dont leave mee...plzzzzzzzzzzz...no i cant leave without uuuuu.......ma tumhare bina nahi jeepaunggiiii....tum mujhse alag nahi hosaktee....no wayy!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nahiii..agar hum sath jee nahi saktee....to sathme....marjayengee..par ma tumhe khudse alag nahi karungiii!! kabhii nahhhiii..........ma tumse juda nahi rehsakkktiiii!!
the people in the crowd was trying to pull her from there...but sanaya pushed them alll.. she took out the knife from her bagg.....all became scaredd....they moved from there...
sanaya=mere passs mattt anaa........yahaparrr sirf ek saas nahiii...do do.,.saasse band hogiiii..
n with a minutee...she put the knife on her wrist...n cut it 3 timess......some people snatched the knife from her.r....it was late for her to savee..they tried to control her bleeding...but sanaya didnt let themmm....her eyes became red.....n soon she felll down... on mohitt.....she somehow looked at mohiitt....n holded his handd.....n cclosed her eyes saying...
"hapy valentines day mohiitt..."
two bodies.s..one soul...one heartt...took last breathe togetherr....n united foreverrrr in the heaveennn!!!!!!!!
HOPE U GUYS LIKEDD IT....COMPLETELY MY THOUGHHTT.....PLLZZZ COMMENT IF U LIKED ITT...N HAPPY VALETNTINES DAY TO EVERYONEEE!!!
 
 
 
Posted: 11 years ago

nice 1 bt endind was so sad....

Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dear awsm updt.
it ws vry beautifuly writen.
u made me cry dear but it ws vry diffrnt cncpt n idea .
luv d os yar.
i thnk u shud rite mre os on monaya.
u realy write well dear.
luv u
vritika
Posted: 11 years ago
its was awesomeClap
but very very very sad ending Cry
Posted: 11 years ago
lovelyyy os...n d teddy thng was sooo sweet..
bt it was tragic 2...:((
thnx 4 d pm
Posted: 11 years ago
Happy valentine's day..
Lovely OS..
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome ,lovely OS
Posted: 11 years ago
mindblowing os.....the teddy bear thing was soo cute....but ending was really sad

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