arjuhi ff: KHUDA bhi hme kr na pay judaa

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Arjun pov:
i felt a slightly touch on my cheeks,ya i knw who she is,i opnd my eyes wid grt difclty,my eyes met 2 her,bt i ignored &turn my face.she hold my chin & said"naraz ho,bat bhi nhi kroge"i looked at her,she smiled.i wnts 2 move bt cnt,maybe bcoz of da needles of drips,dat injectd 2 my hands.i just said wid lot of effort:dnt wana talk wid u,u alwyz do dis 2 me,alwyz u left me"she smiled & says:janaa zrori he,me:hmesha ki trah"she presd my cheeks &says"jb tk tum bye nhi bolo ge men nhi ja paoungi" i:to mt jao.she:nhi ruk skti,plz. i:lot k kb aao gi? i:jaoun gi to shayd"I:promise me tum aaougi,promise"she lookd at me wid teary eyes& u promised me u nevr cry"ok pka,i said like always.she nod her head in yes& saysbent down on me while sitng on a bed.her hairs fall on my face,our nose touch,i cn feel her breath on my lips.i closed my eyes bt sudenly i wake up.i m alone in da room.only moon light,i m feelng uncncious due to lot of injuries,i tok out all nedles,i shouted"arohi,arohi"i standhardly & reach da hallwy.my eys r only searchng 4 her.bt i saw,whch i cn nvr expectdshe is here,bt not alive.her dead body iz kepng in btwn of people.i bcme senseless,hw?hw?hw cld dis posible?she ws just here wid me before a minute,hw cud?tears roll down my cheeks,hw cud i da most unluckiest man of da wrld,i fel on my knees"i...i lost her"
Dad said to slil"wht is he doing here?docter injectd him,he must wke in 24 hr.slil:maybe dis iz better,he nvr 4gv us.dats good 4 all,he found out,she iz no more.
Dad:bt see his face,my poor son,only God knws wht wll he do"
hun,wht cn i do,nw wht cn i..."i wsnt respondng 2 any thng only her those words"i"ll come,bt prmise u nvr cry"
ps:chp1 dat i hd posted earlier was from arjun's dairy,his past"
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AAKMH2 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i knw,its so slow bt if u like it i"ll update soon& plzzz comenttt.whtevr u thnk like,dislike,wnt chnges in writng style,any criticze,most welcme.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oye...yar mahi...how come we never saw this??
nice...but how could you kill arohi??? without her how could story exist yar??
just tell us that all this is a lie!! please ..please...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mahii yar it was very lovely update. Very emotional continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yea...continue soon...sry...din't notice this ff before...
aparna4karanika thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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uye mahi dint c dis one..
btw i hope arohi s still alie
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aparna4karanika

uye mahi dint c dis one..
btw i hope arohi s still alie

Originally posted by: sandrav


Mahii yar it was very lovely update. Very emotional continue soon.


guys...you hve got to thank me...i was the one who found out this ff 🥳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Arohi dead!😔
I'm wondering how the story is going to go[:S]
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Varsh thanx a lot swthrt 4 discovrng it. M jst speechles. Ye mahi v na,itna acha likhti hai.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oye mahi ye kb likha??
Arohi ko kya hua? Plz dn't do nythng wid her..ab ise b update kro jaldi..:P
Thnx vrshn 4findng it:D

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