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Os:Chahat, vo tumhare papa hai

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Posted: 13 years ago
One Shot: Chahat, vo tumhare papa hai.



Heer was writing a letter to her Prem.

Prem,

Today is valentine's day. you remember 3 years back we met with each other this day.You gave me a big bouquet of red roses. I still remember you wore me a ring and told "I love you Heer, will you marry  me? Will be my life partner for ever and ever." I said yes. You just hugged me. I knew how much happy you were.Everyday  you sent a gift to me and a letter. I never wrote letter to you. but today i am writing because i want to tell you something, something important. Tumhe yaad hai hum dono ghar se bag gaye the. We married each other but our family didn't accept us. I was crying on out suhaag raat but you said " Don't cry Heer.What if whole world doesn't accept us but i am with you and always will be" and you made me yours forever. You are an army captain Prem, you armies are not allowed to marry before being 26 years but you married me because you loved me. Your captain was so angry on you but you were still with me. You just showed your  captain a lovely smile of you and he forgave you. You could hardly give time to me because you were a army captain but i never told anything to you because i loved you and still i love you. You loved kids that's why when i found out that i am pregnant and told you i knew your happiness knew no bound. You know Prem you wanted a girl, yeah Prem we have a girl. She is exactly like you. She is now just 3 months old. I named her Chahat because you are my Prem and she is my Chahat. She never saw you but when she sees your photo she understands that you are her father. She is proud of you. I know when she will be adult she will tell everyone proudly: "My father was a captain who sacrificed his life for this country".

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Your Heer

Just then the calling bell rang. Heer went to open the door. She opened the door and saw.........................she shouted: "CHAHAT TUMHARA PAPA AAYE HAI..............................."
Prem just gave his millon doller smile at her.😊

So guys how is it?





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Surreal_Dreams thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww...superb!!👏

fantastic os....plzz continue....😍
Surreal_Dreams thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx for the valentines spl..os....
plzz try continuing..😍.gr8 concept!!👏
Edited by premiti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow...thnx for the valentines special OS luved it!!

Do write more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Add meee to pm list! Sounds intresting :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic !
I loved it !
But Plzz yaar update soon !
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesomeeeeeee too good lovelyyyyyy oneshot
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely!!!!
bt pls exaggerate it a li'l more!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely and fabalous one for Valentines day
thank you please continue intersting
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow.......... it was lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyy