Originally posted by amail1601
It's beautiful Neethi!!!
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Well, you have depicted all the confusion in Pia's mind very clearly, and that is what makes this diary page so real. All the conflicts, the despair in one sentence, the hope and determination in another, that's what really goes on in the mind of any human being. And I may be wrong, but I detected (or maybe I myself think Pia must be feeling that way) a hint of guilt in a few places...especially in the way she is questioning herself.
Really very well written!
Aww!! Adi, thank you!! That's such a lovely comment. Yes, Pia is feeling guilty. She knows she is at fault, nonetheless, she is not exactly blaming herself, rather, she's trying to figure out why she reacted in a way that she has to regret now. She's guilty but she's not wasting time feeling guilty. And the best part is, she's not blaming Abhay either! She knows that the circumstances aren't with her but she has to make up for what she's done. Right or wrong, doesn't matter. She was unfair to Abhay. Period!
Originally posted by saphira7988
very nice...πu've described pia's feelings for abhay so well..loved d end where u've shown pia's love for him to be strong enough to overcome all her doubts n fears...pia will not rest without breaking all d barriers btwn her n abhay n bringing him to d light n giving him d love tht he so rightly deservesπlovely post dear...ππΌ
Thanks a lot. Yes, this was a basically an introspection I wanted Pia to have, a monologue with herself which was necessary for her to understand the situation and where exactly Abhay stands in her life.
Originally posted by TOTAL-ROMANTIC
Chillz..perfect timing to have posted this dear, the new promo is an extension of your post,,Wonderful ..What beautifully you have explained all her fears & passion for Abhay and his dual identity..Lovely & what a greta effort..Its a privelage to have you with us..as a ABHIYA & PKYEK lover..Thank you.God Bless..!! π€
Thanks, TR! Lol! Rather I thought I was too late in posting it now that the time is gone. Aww!! I love being with most of you guys! Thanks a lot for always being such a sweetheart!π€