A short Os for U... Updated pg ..10

Posted: 2011-02-02T13:50:25Z
Haii Guys ... Watching Pkyek made me to write this ...

Hope You like it...

                                       ~~ As Long as you love me ~~

   Abhay is sitting alone in his room ... closing his eyes ... thinking the words of Piya.. 
" Bachao Bachao "  ... Disapprove

Abhay by resisting the tears in his eyes .. speaking to himself ...

"Everything is over .. Mah lyf is over .. Pia finally found out who am i.. Why ? Why?? This happens only to me ...Why am i alive? For whom i have to live??" Unhappy

 Remembering the past incidents ... He is questioning ...

"Why Pia ... Why did you came into mah Lyf ... ? Did I asked you to take interest in my things? Did I asked you to be nice with me? Whats wrong ? Why you approached me like that and leaving me alone now..."Cry
Whos the reason for all this .. Unhappy

Pia sitting in her room on her bed .. she slowly falls into the past memories ...
She remembers exactly what had happened in the night before ...
She is speaking to herself .. 
"How can I be in love with such a vampire? How disgusting it is ?"
"But why i am still thinking about him? "
"Pia go to sleep .. Jus do stop thinking about those things ... forget him.. and U can do this"
She sleep down on to her bed ... closes her eyes  ...
In the dark .. she can only see the charming,lovely face of her Abhay ..
She again wake up and 
"Pia .. Why ? Why are you thinking about him? He is not the one for you.. Go to sleep "
Suddenly Light flashes into her room .. She woke up say "Abhay!"
Nah but its jus air flowing into her roomm ... cool breeze touches her ...
She cries a little bit and thinks again ...Speaking to herself ..
"What are these feelings ? wht is it called ? Is this love? "
"Oh no.. I shouldnot do this... I have to resist me coz he is monster .. ok .." and  
she scolds and scolds her and slowly fell asleep....

Next day in the college...

Mish comes to Pia .. and asks "Pia why are you so upset?" 
Pia :"Nothing Mish"
Mish:  " Arre Plss say yaar .. Whats wrong with U?" "Why are you going mad about            Abhay ?" 
Pia : "Shut up Mish ! Nothing like that ... "
Mish: " Arre oh no ... ok then say me why are you so dull? What happened say me reason Why are so dull after the leaving of Abhay from our college ? "
"Why are Scribbling his name on benches ? and on ur heart ? "
Pia shocks and says ... 
"Mish Nothing like that ... I was jus angry on him and unfortunately wrote it thats all .. I had to leave now Bye .. "
Mish says "Ok ok leave ... U have to decide whether its angry orrr ishqvishq?? ... Ok bye... "

Pia thinking Herself ... 
"Oh no Why i am doing this ? Is Mish right? Why I cant be normal? 
What the helll these feelings are? 
I will ask him only...
But Why ? "

She finally wants to see Abhay and goes to his place ...

Abhay seeing Maithili photo and talking... Pia saw that stop by window and listen ...

" Maithili ... Why did you leave me alone? (tears in his eyes) ... 
I cant even imagine what my life now... 
I have born again .. when I saw Pia ... But now even she is also not there...
Everyone left me ... I have found U in Pia... I thought U again came for me ...
But only resemblences cant do anything ... U are not Pia ... If U are Pia ... U haven't left me Like this ... I really miss U ... I lost U ...I am sorry Maithili  "

Pia enters into the room and calls "Abhay !! " (with tears in her eyes)

Friends am stopping here.. if U like this Please press like button I would be delighted If u leave a comment ...
I will continue upon ur views ...
With Love ,
Urs cherry Smile

Updated in pages 3,6,10(today update)
Edited by Sweetzcherry - 2011-02-07T07:52:37Z
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Posted: 2011-02-02T13:54:46Z
pray continue Embarrassed
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Posted: 2011-02-02T13:55:03Z
Awaiting for ur comments ..Smile
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Posted: 2011-02-02T13:55:54Z
Originally posted by cutemug

pray continue Embarrassed

Thank uuu soo much Smile Will update soon..  Smile
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Posted: 2011-02-02T22:48:53Z
Thanks for liking .. Smile
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Posted: 2011-02-02T23:01:05Z
Awaiting for more comments .. Smile
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Posted: 2011-02-02T23:15:44Z
wao...plz continue
i am looking forward
do update soon
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Posted: 2011-02-02T23:17:25Z
i am not a regular visitor of this forum
but after reading such a cute os i'll definitely visit this forum everyday.....Tongue
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