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.Jane..
Neetz @.Jane.. IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 13 years ago


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Ritzie
Ritzie Ring'gghania @Ritzie IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yessss... You seem to be in writing mood these days and very creative mood too. You get a line of a news article and you make the whole story out of it. I liked the way you showed Abhay still being in his senses for planing the whole kidnap scene from writing a note for D's to waiting for there call. 

He was still nicer, he can't be very harsh to anybody, forget Pia. isn't it? 

And Pia, again, the sweet version. She felt bad for all that she did to him. I wish to have this sweet Pia back in the show too. I wish somebody listens.

Loved this one too. 

By the way, I didn't get your title...
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cutemug
Mugdha @cutemug Senior Member
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chillz🤗
u r a dear!!
Loved this one too...⭐️
Since that article,even i've been thinking bout the kidnapping part,😉😆
and you wrote it so well,👍🏼

Again one of my fav's:

"See stopped,but when will you Piya?!" 😆
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TOTAL-ROMANTIC
A.hemalatha.kini @TOTAL-ROMANTIC IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏Awesome is the only word..Chilz..God..I think the jungle scene  will be  same way..!!👏
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Charu21
YekChaturNaar @Charu21 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow Neethzy!!! U r in a writing mood... i m loving it.. 
Simply superb yaar!!! Loved it...... 👏 Just speechless.... 👍🏼
I really wish u remain in this writing mood forever!! waiting for da next one yaar!!! 😛 Keep it up....... 
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ka7eela
Kaheela @ka7eela IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow Neethi this was lovely.. me totally love it😳 i can sense the tension and the pain!

i hope they do it this way in the show and not make it a drag! like the way the show has become nowadays
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TheBlackJaguar
TheBlackJaguar @TheBlackJaguar IF-Stunnerz Inactive
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Posted: 13 years ago
I loved the Abhay that i saw in here! Yes, this is the pain , the grief that we saw in Abhay yesterday and you have translated it so well on paper. This is how he is should logically react today - STUNG and VENOMOUS. I loved how he threatened to dig his fans into Piya's neck and threw her 'love and concern' back in her face. 

Piya's sorry is genuine but the state that Abhay is in as depicted in your FF , he is in no position to even consider Piya's side. You underlined Piya's helplessness so well. It is no mean feat loving someone like Abhay.

Love and luck always,❤️
GOD bless everyone. 🤗

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kaushiki9
Kaushiki @kaushiki9 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 13 years ago
its great buddy
wow i was kind of in some dream sequence
like i m seeing d next episode

well written 

& u know i think d epi would not b that different from ur post

so 4 u ....
👏
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--AROMAL--
Aromal saxena @--AROMAL-- IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 13 years ago
well ur writing this for many days you deserve clap 👏
well written just loved it so much ...
keep writing for me and otherz 😊

love u !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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shruthiR
shruthiR @shruthiR IF-Rockerz Inactive
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Posted: 13 years ago
Woah!Another OS,so soon?!Well keep it coming coz I really enjoy reading them.This one was fab!⭐️Pls do continue writing more OSs😊
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