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Posted: 13 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago
U reserved a whole topic? πŸ˜³

Okay then; My reply is reserved, too. πŸ˜ƒ

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First of all, I am so happy that I reserved the first spot. Now, I'd get to ramble as much as I want, and everyone would get to see it before reading any further comments. πŸ˜ƒ

And, secondly, I am so happy, again, that you decided to continue your OS, after all. I loved the Pia you portayed in your previous OS, and I love her even more, now. I love this emotionally strong side of Pia. πŸ˜³

And thirdly, Mwah mwah mwah. I loved it, right from the beginning to the end. The best thing I liked about this part was that no matter how much Pia acts strong, builds a wall around herself, tries to suppress her feelings, in the end, everything came out - the tears, the pain, the confusion, the loss. She's vulnerable and only Abhay got to see that side of her. And I loved the way Pia confronted Abhay about his feelings, the way she confronted him about the way he cares for her; Was that concern that she wants to be alone, Or was that concern that she musn't be left alone? And I loved the way she fainted in his arms right when the clock striked twelve. πŸ˜³

All in all, A lovely OS, and a treat to read. πŸ‘πŸΌ Have a lovely 2011, Neetz. πŸ€—
Edited by Akanksha0701 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Akanksha0701

U reserved a whole topic? πŸ˜³


Okay then; My reply is reserved, too. πŸ˜ƒ


🀣 πŸ€£
Sorry! I'd posted it by mistakeπŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
SUPER AWESOME AS ALWAYS πŸ˜ƒ
 
Happy New Year !!
Edited by Spaarkles - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Sparkles: Thanks a lot!πŸ€—

@Akanksha: Aww! Did you really like it that much?! I love love love you!!! That means so much!πŸ€—
Anyways, I'm still in the proof reading phase. Didn't think anyone would read right now because its past 5 here but I forgot we have people from all over the worldπŸ˜† Btw, it must be past 12 there also na?? 
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!❀️
Edited by Chill_Out - 13 years ago
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@Sparkles: Thanks a lot!πŸ€—


@Akanksha: Aww! Did you really like it that much?! I love love love you!!! That means so much!πŸ€—
Anyways, I'm still in the proof reading phase. Didn't think anyone would read right now because its past 5 here but I forgot we have people from all over the worldπŸ˜† Btw, it must be past 12 there also na?? 
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!❀️


I really did, trust me. And most of it is because of the way you portray Pia. πŸ˜³

Ahaa, it's not 12 yet. We still got half an hour to go. =]

I wanted to write something, too. I needed to write. But everytime I opened a blank page, I couldn't figure out what to write. I wrote a half page about a girl's lost love. But then I erased it all, because I had this nagging feeling that this wasn't what I wanted to write about, at all. And then, I still don't know what to do. πŸ˜•

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I really did, trust me. And most of it is because of the way you portray Pia. πŸ˜³

Ahaa, it's not 12 yet. We still got half an hour to go. =]

I wanted to write something, too. I needed to write. But everytime I opened a blank page, I couldn't figure out what to write. I wrote a half page about a girl's lost love. But then I erased it all, because I had this nagging feeling that this wasn't what I wanted to write about, at all. And then, I still don't know what to do. πŸ˜•


Same with me! I first wrote something as Pia's diary but then I erased itπŸ˜† Writing this one was a lot tougher than the previous one! 
I like this OS because of the way I portrayed Kabir. For me, the KaPi moment is my favourite. I know I'm the writer, so I can't have favourite parts but its special to me because I've really been hurt by how they ruined Kabir today 

P.S. Never mind. HNY in advance then because I should really get sleeping now! Hopefully, no one will read it till I properly proof read it tomorrowπŸ˜†
Edited by Chill_Out - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww...i loved loved you OS more than the before one...
i really wish piya would confront abhay just like this in the show too..and make him realize tht wat he feels for her it love too...beautifully written...you portrayed piya in a very nice way..she is strong, kind and confident..loved it
HAPPY NEW YEAR to you too!!!! πŸ˜Š
Edited by kiranni - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
just simply loved.........
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG this was just so cute...so wait wat did happend to piya at the end??did she just fainted and why??? i mean she could have atleast heard him say i love u to her before fainting..lol..but seriously this was so emotional, i was so touched by the way u explained and pan down this whole secen it was just so cute....really well done...hope u write more OS soon....
 
❀️MONA