(Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... - 2 - Page 43

oooo im excited for some *wild* parts 😈
Wonder what Shiv is going to do w/ Gauri....

er erm erm Devi *flutters eyelashes*

Hubby is sufficiently out of the house so I have a moment of peace and quiet.  Here goes... Edited by saomom - 13 years ago

loving the way the story is going, you have the best twists of the world..i didn't realize it during 'love and despair' because i read it in one go and din't stop to consider or guess what's going to happen next....................

happy new year.....

      When a woman set out to seduce, she lowers her inhibitions in many ways and presents herself to the man she is seducing.
      Taking this potion should have made her more desirable to him, if she had let her inhibitions go with the rising heat, like what Gauri did when she was affected, but instead she was cringing and withdrawing at his touch or the thought of his touch. Her first reaction was to call out for Shaan. Makes me think her reaction would have been like Gauri's to shiv if it was Shaan present instead of Shiv, she would be craving his touch.
     Why do i keep on getting the feeling that Gauri might have consciously or unconsciously know about the fact that this would happen. She knows of the chemistry between the 2 because of her observation regarding shaans reaction at the party when Thalia kissed Shiv, and coupled that with the facts that he always went to her when called, even if its his wedding day, maybe Gauri has the couple a little more figured out than they themselves have.
     I kind of find it hard to believe, she does not believe enough in Shiv to think that he would fall for something like this.
    Either way, i really look forward to the next update.
 
Edited by blueangel13 - 13 years ago

Let's have some ranouk shaunak
Let's have some party now
Let's have some roula rappa

Sorry Tishuu darling... 

I was listing all the good things that happened to me in 2010 and your stories are definitely in the list. I have never enjoyed reading anything but  I always waited for your updates. I thank you for the bottom of my heart for giving us such wonderful stories. Apart from the entertaining factor, there is much to learn from them, at least for me. If nothing, I'll improve my vocab for sure :-)

Happy New Year Devi. Hope this new year brings the best for you and those around you.

Heyy Devi,

omggg okay i have to say this cuz this is the always the first thing that pops in my head when i read your updates😆....you manage to make every update, whether it be intense, romantic, depressing or anything soo freaking amazing with the oh-so-brilliant diction you use....seriously, the level of sophistication with which you write....heck, i feel as if I am reading some top class best seller....though, if you do decide to publish your stories, which you TOTALLY should😳, this would be the outcome!😳....omgg i really hope you understood atleast half of what i wanted to say😆....like Dol said, i don't think I have ever learnt soo much awesome vocab in my life willingly!😆

 

omgg where has gauri's idea taken all four of them?....she is in soooo much trouble now....i can already imagine our angry, young and most importantly, HAWTT shiv almost pouncing towards her😉....you know i try really really hard but i just can't seem to take my eyes and thoughts away from SG to care about ST😆...*sowiee*

 

looking forward to the next update!

Edited by macho_muffin - 13 years ago

fire works of new year for oldest couples!!!!