MELA: My first short FF(Avitha)-completed - Page 2

Suhana6

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Posted: 13 years ago

This content was originally posted by: komalSingh
Like ur FF suhana very sweet

tnx komal...trust me nxt part is much more sweeter...

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Suhana6

@Suhana6

Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

This content was originally posted by: _nandini
Nice one Sunaha 👍🏼

Congrats for ur first ff n thanx for posting the first one at this forum. 😃

Plz continue.. 😊

awww nandu...thnku yaar....i myself am pretty excited.....
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Sara

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Posted: 13 years ago

great yaar👍🏼. but please let Avi 😳 come fast in Mela with his 4 goons.

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Suhana6

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Posted: 13 years ago

This content was originally posted by: sara212
great yaar👍🏼. but please let Avi 😳 come fast in Mela with his 4 goons.

thankx sara.........he is on his way.........dagad dham dagad dham.......😆😆😆

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Suhana6

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Posted: 13 years ago

sryy😭😭............i made it better and posted it on page three.....😊
Edited by Sunaha6 - 13 years ago

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Gaurishah

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Posted: 13 years ago

Well written Sunaha, waiting for the next one.

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Suhana6

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Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Gaurishah
Well written Sunaha, waiting for the next one.

tnxxx gauri...... i already put the next one... check it out and tell me... how it was......😊
Edited by Sunaha6 - 13 years ago

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571386

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Posted: 13 years ago

woww....yaar the second part is also good.. :) i'm trying to imagine it all...vivid colours appearing in front of ma eyes...well done 👍🏼

take your own time...do post the third part ASAP...waiting to read it :)

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Gaurishah

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Posted: 13 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Sunaha6

tnxxx gauri...... i already put the next one... check it out and tell me... how it was......😊

This was good too. Its nice and simple. Looks like both of us were trying to post at the same time but yours got posted first. 😆 Liked the bubble scene very much.

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Milii

@Milii

Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

Heyy Sunaha....2nd part too was very well-written.... 👏
Loved the equation between Bhaiyaji and Chulbul....
Chulbul and his Sheela was hilarious 😆

Continue soon dear... 🤗

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