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|My Archive of Emotions| ~ K! . .

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Posted: 13 years ago

Greetings!

I have decided to just maintain one single thread for all my write ups and poems that I frequently post. I am not sure if this suits, but I'd go with Jaee's suggestion and for now . . . this is called 'My Archive of Emotions' . . . =)

And people, this is the link to my blog. I'd be honored if you follow me here, thank you.

www.sinistersoul-k.blogspot.com/

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Poem: Rendezvous With The Real Self - Page One
An Untitled One Shot - Page Five
One Shot: Set Me Free - Page Six
Edited by -Kanky- - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
Rendezvous With The Real Self

Beneath an expression unbelievably fierce,

Lay urge to flow out all the bitter tears,

She screams in pain,

Looking about if somebody hears,

But she essays in vain.

 

Engulfed in fear,

Her heart thuds in the throat,

The institution of plastering courage seems remote,

Letting out a fearful cry,

She grimaces with no hope of its passing by.

 

And now that the heart sinks,

Her burning eye blinks,

Giving way to the tear that had formed,

She'd been waiting for it all to come out,

For it, she'd longed.

 

In her mind the thoughts that had been regulating,

Over the same she had been contemplating,

Now that she is encircled by black,

She seems to have lost her wit and knack.

 

Thunderous sounds echo in her ears,

She mourns, she screams, she fears,

Her sneak out in the night displays a smudge,

She decides to get up and make way out in a trudge.

 

The winds chill her to the marrow,

Though her heart continues to burn in sorrow,

As she tediously moves on,

She realizes there were things that mattered,

And they are all gone!

 

Enough mistakes, she has rectified,

There is still room for more,

She wonders if she indeed was that pained and sore,

She wonders all night,

Upbringing each second, a fresh emotion to fight!

 

She lets out a sigh confused,

Over the feeling of nothingness in her that has induced,

She wishes if away she could flee,

On her own, isolated,

She could always be.

 

The sky starts to get unruffled,

This time, the winds leave her a trifle soothed,

She figures out she could make up a bit through freshening up and a stroll,

The dreariness of her life was immortal to stay, after all!

 


Edited by -Kanky- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
It's a shattering truth and so real ... It makes me ponder over all the past events and I realise, somewhere down the line - these were the emotions, I had felt ... 
I should not say it's beautiful because sometimes beautiful is surreal ... It's subtle and perfect ...
Brilliant job indeed .... 👏👏
Edited by -jaee- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Kanks 🤗

First of all congratulations on the gallery 🤗

And OMG! This poem is just absolutely beautiful. The outlook so vague yet the feeling was so deep. The whole feeling was that of confusion, pain, sadness yet it was so touching and deep!

Absolutely incredible piece! BRAVO!
Looking forward to reading more =]
 
Love
Daania
 
  

 

 

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Posted: 13 years ago

congo kanks!!!!

bravo did u write dis?!?!?!?!?!?..its awfully brilliantly..really...so deep ..altho refloects a really fogged state of mind....
will write more..in a rush abhi..tc
Posted: 13 years ago
⭐️ |-Reserved-| 😆

Sorry, I need sleep! Kal exam hai 😉😆 
Btw, classy name huh! love it. And the picture you have pasted...totally classic!! I went wow looking at it!! 😊

Poem par comments later on, kay? 
Sorry again. 
Ciao. 


*Edited* 
Hello!! :D Sorry for the late editing of my comment (You know me....😛 lol...😆) And plus, my exams are still going on...🥱 
Hmmm chuck that! 😆 The poem, about that..I had read it on the day itself. It was just that I dint comment, coz it was late 😳 Sorry! 😃 
Urm, Oh my goodness..it was deep, really deep.. 


Thunderous sounds echo in her ears,

She mourns, she screams, she fears, 


My my...this is seriously good!! Loved this line...I mean the way you have put it with the thunderous sounds and she mourns screams and fears...I literally went 👏 

That definitely shows how well your write...:) 


The winds chill her to the marrow,

Though her heart continues to burn in sorrow,


Again, whoa. ⭐️ How do you fit in words perfectly? I mean chills her to marrow...just perfect. No no!! 😆 Its beyond perfection. 👏

Plus, the contrast here is bravo!! ⭐️ Can totally understand she must be going through. 😛


The sky starts to get unruffled,

This time, the winds leave her a trifle soothed,

She figures out she could make up a bit through freshening up and a stroll,

The dreariness of her life was immortal to stay, after all!


Even if I go searching with a microscope also na...😆 I wont get an ending better than this one!! 👏

It makes me ponder about some stuffs in my life too 😕 and trust me, none of the poets are able to do that till now 😆 

Hmmm...lemme explain! 😳 I don't really like poetry and stuffs...😳 I never read them or understand them...too much of depth for me 😆 (PS. Not that I'm too shallow huh!! I'm just a science student...I know you will get me....😆😆 Well, hope so! 😃)  Anyways so, yeah..I never bother to read poems..😃 Buh I read yours, coz i knew it'd be brilliant!! And I'm glad you dint let me down...:) Infact, you raised my expectations a lots more 😃 Badhe chalo!! 😆....


-touched- 😊

Your poem conveys a hell lot to me...😃 thank you for such a wonderful piece. I'm honored to read it, seriously. Do write more...😊 



Ahem...who else....😳 

Deby....🤗❤️

Edited by jeflkjfkljfkj - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey kanky, beautiful words, great poem
"clouds unruffled" was my favourite metaphor here 
the poem is really long but critically i'd say the rhyming changes na half way? it effects the way the reader reads the poem slightly, because of the rhythm...was there a particular reason for the change in the pattern or were you just going with whatever felt right :)
very deep, keep it up! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
the story of everyone's life!lol
i really liked this cuz i could relate to it on the diff situations i have to through everyday(starting with just waking up)lol
    pm me to lemme know hwen u add something!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Kanky.. Congrats on opening your new gallery.. and the Poem.. Deep feelings conveyed beautifully.
Posted: 13 years ago
Res!! 

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Hiya Kankz!! 😊

My Archive of emotions. . . . Whoa. . . kya naam hai!. . . Perfect!.  . You are so good with titles ya!. . . Main lakh koshish karu toh bhi dhang ke titles nhn rakh pathi. . .

Good you opened a single thread .. . this is more manageable. .  i'm doing the same at present!. .😆

Coming to the poem. . . 

Its Awesome!. . . And this is the reason I get inspired!. .  Samjhi?? !! 😆

I love the way you've written. . . it has such a deep imprint on you when u read it. . . Wonderful!! . .. 
I'm always in awe of your work. .  and this is no different!. . .

Great job Kankz!. . .👏

-Sharmila
Edited by -Sharmila- - 13 years ago