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Direct Link Posted: October 30 2010 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
hello every one i'm fiza u all may know me from the pkb , bhasker bharti, n geet forum this my 4th ff hope u like it
Kheenche Mujhe Koyi Dor Teri Ore
Dobriyal's
Mr. Dobriyal: A rich successful business man a wonderful husband and a awesome dad , he feels he is very lucky to be blessed with 3 daughters and a beautiful wife.
The royal Singh Rathore's
Raja Singh Rathore: from the royal family very nice man whos is rich yet has kept a balance for his kids taught them not use there influence ,name and money to get there way but only for good and helpful reasons
Kunwar Daanish Singh Rathore: eldest son loving bro and dutiful son who helps out at mount college drama club but works in his fathers business full time , very close to his bro kabir and his friends Misha and pia and loves his fiance panchi .
Kunwar Kabir Singh Rathore: The younget very chilled out mr. cool who is the perfect example of the meaning chocolate boy the heartthrob of college all the girls have their eyes on him but he has his eyes only on pia he loves pia she is his best friend but he feels they our actually unofficially together always flirts with her truly cares for her but never told he loves her cuz he doesn't want lose her very close to his friends misha and going to be bhaabi panchi .
Raichand's
Mr. Raichand: they are new in town very very rich business man who has bought some many properties , universities, lands uses his influences, name ,money to get his way at any cost
Mrs. Raichand: : very two faced infront of people nice sweet woman behind rude arrogant feels they are the best and money buys everything
Abhay Raichand: a strikingly handsome boy with a mysterious disposition new in town but has taken over the college as the new hunk not affaird to use his fathers name, influence,and money to get his way has met pia for first time and feels their is something that connects them .
Teaser
I slid the pink Chudiyan"
into my hands The mehndi on my hands dark as ever, that was a sign he would love me forever. I smiled, and as usual i could feel a gut feeling that what was happening is not right i felt a tears run down on my cheeks. I got up from the bed and walked over to my dresser taking a seat on the small chair in front of it. I observed my self in the mirror, whiped my tears My face, showed a smile but my eyes showed the sadness inside of me, the love i felt for him but no my destiney wouldn't lead me to him but to kabir instead and become kabir's forever.
"Pia Wow, baby you look awsome." My sweet and rocking sister Misha "Turly bohat achi lag rahi hoo." Panchi placed her kajol on me as i faked a smiled. "But she has to, look to way better than our jiju kabir and she does or anyways I telling you dude who even looks at the dulha every ones eyes are always on the beautiful bride which is our pia" Misha . Panchi fixed my bindi. "In my opnion you look like an angel sweety." She said placing her hand on my cheek. "You seem a bit too down today. You don't look as happy as most brides our " Misha just shut up replyed Panchi, ofcourse she is a little sad today is he bidaai haan Panchi di Why wouldnt i be, my life would change andi will be married every girl feels like this on her wedding.
Misha oh wow the baraat is here panchi lets go pia will come in a bit
I looked back at the mirror and turned Abhay tum
He covered my mouth and pushed me to wall(they have a eye locking session).
Abhay: tum yeh shaadi nahin kar sak thi ,you can't marry him
Tum sirf aur sirf meri hai aur I wont let it happen
Pia( pushing his hand away): no tum aisa kuch nahin kar na why did come here
Misha aur panchi di can come back any minute tum pagal ho jao yahaan se
Abhay : no I will not why are you torturing yourself
Pia: what I'm doing I'm for my family papa mama like kabir
I've known kabir since I was 3 and he was 6 for the past 17 yrs he loves me and I trust him.
Abhay(grabing pia's arms ):What do you mean loves u and trust him, I love you I never let any thing harm you for the last time if you don't stop the wedding I will and leaves.
Few mintues later Pia looking completely gorgeous in her wedding dress walked down the Stairs with her sisters around her. Panchi to her right , and Misha on the left. Today was her wedding day the day that every girl waits and dreams for, but instead of being thrilled she was terrified. The reason being that Abhay showed up and threathed her not marry a guy she didn't love someone but doing it only for the family Pia's mind: Come on Pia get a hold of yourself be strong, today your life will change for ever your getting married ,you have to do this for your family. Just thing about papa,mama panchi di and misha and kabir he's your best friend he a gem of guy you cant back out now papa well be so embarrassed.
pia's heart: Main aisa kaise kar sakthi hoon. I don't know why but I cant get my self to forget abhay, even though I know papa mama hate him I have this gut feeling that keeps telling me he is the one for me the right guy for me not Kabir. I just want to scream and run away from this situation(closing her eyes) ya Rabba please let abhay not create a scene and let this new chapter in life be the beginning of the most beautiful journy of my life please help me please. Sitting at mandap .
Kabir: pia you look beautiful I promise I will always keep u happy I'm the luckiest guy in the world. (They stand for the phere) but before the could start abhay grabs pia and puts sindoor in her maang when abhay does so she close her eyes and takes a deep breath when she opens them she has tears in her eyes's then abhay put the mangalsutra on pia, kabir runs but Abhay pushes kabir and tells him don't you dare come near my wife. That it for now don't forget to comment.
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