FF (Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... -pg. 140, 142 - Page 77

I feel like Love and Despair was nothing in comparison to this....
girl...this is awesome !!!!

2 updates in a day....and that too so much that it's left me speechless :)

OMG i randomly checked to see if you had updated before going to bed and there it was..yet another update!!that was amazing work..*sigh*..it totally made my otherwise sucky day..👍🏼

Sri, amazingly hott updates!!

And i have to say this about ur warning.. do u mind explaning exactly what its purpose was?😉

I mean, after all those hours of torture u put us(and ofcourse poor shiv) through, did u really expect ur readers to suddenly turn all shareef and "wait until we are good and married and save this post until after "??

Well, am glad i am 21, so i don't have to feel guilty about reading it.. and reading ur updates have miraculously increased my tolerance levels, thank u very much..😳😉 And i really mean it!!

PS: It is supposed to be a proof that i was just an innocent bachchi before-- Would u believe me if I told u that i didn't know the meaning of the word 'aphrodisiac' until u introduced it to me? And i must tell, u have explained it quite well, i didn't even have to consult a dictionary..

If my parents found out what i am reading now, they might as well confiscate my laptop, and better yet, sue you for contaminating this sweet innocent child's mind!!😆

As naughty and nice and as spicy and racy as that it was ..

Devi..You keep getting better and better...I used to think I have read it all when it came to romance but you have quickly disabused me of any such notions😆... Edited by -pixie- - 13 years ago

Your writing is just impeccable, which raises itself to the peak!

Edited by sridevi27 - 13 years ago

I think m already out of words to appreciate, its a unique story dealin wit lots of human psychological nature, it simply proves at every updates tat u may love some1 truly madly n deeply in disguise of pure hatred n aftr readin ur updates m jst doubtful tat may b i cant say any1 tat "I HATE U" b'coz hate can b a conceald emotion of love.

Devi that was soo amazing stuff, could i suddenlt feel all hot even with the nonstop snow we are having