FF (Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... -pg. 140, 142 - Page 46

ooh la la....

they are soo cute.... lovely XD can't wait for ur next update

Wow! Amazin, i knw u cn write passionate scene so sensualy to an extent tat very few can reach, bt aftr todays update u provd u can excel in bringing out love n emotions by simple potrayal of gratitude n undrstandin b/w a couple. Lovd it

Ummmmm..sweeter than candy floss😊

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excellent!!

it was sooo sweet of shiv to type all that 4 gauri, while letting her sleep... wish i had someone like that who would complete my machine-drawing sheets while i enjoyed my beauty sleep...*sighs*

and... gauri was sweet too... lying to get shiv to sleep...

and i liked the line, "no amount of thanks would be enough..." i can see, the things are changing gradually, and i like that very much... way to go sri!!

just loved it yaar...............

awesome update
very very sweet
i had a huge smile reading it and i was getting wierd looks from mom and dad
lolz ur writing is very intoxicating!!!

Awesome update

D old luv stories were gud. D update clearly proved that SG r made for each other.

Gauri's actions mirror Shiv's. Her excuse & d parting line were really gud.

Pls continue soon

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