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FF (Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... -pg. 140, 142 - Page 33

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Posted: 13 years ago
This content was originally posted by: sridevi27


patience dear... all in due time...

Edit: I hate doing this, overexplaining that is... but here goes... if you look at the personality of these two, "emotions" - at least those deep ones and not the surface ones that is in every serial and movie - are not going to come easily... well, let me rephrase... even if they are there, God forbid that they will admit it... that's the personality of these two.. they are very different from Geet...  and also, why does every emotion have to be verbalized... 
why can't it be how he blocked her from the worst of it when they got caught in a downpour, quite unconsciously too, 
or.. how she checked to see if he had a fever when he looked exhausted... 
or how he knows exactly what she is studying...
or how they both remember what happened to them when they were 5 and 7...
 sometimes it's really just the simple things... the details... rather than any grand proclamations...
 
so, give it time... 
emotions are much more deep that physical stuff... (at least in my humble opinion...) so, to get there is also a hard road.... 
that's my two cents....
I hate breaking my cardinal rule of not overexplaining... ;)

-Devi


Didn't realize you added more to your post, you know I enjoy reading your "over explanations" as much as your FFs,it adds to the story. 

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Posted: 13 years ago
A tear strained kurta ....a memory stashed away. I have come across many such memories stashed away...collected...cherished. But this is by far the most profound....specially so as it comes from Shiv. Waiting for the day when Gauri comes across this side of him. Or maybe....Gauri may just surprise him first.
Posted: 13 years ago
OK this is where I'm going to keep track of all their hidden feelings:

Shiv
- when he lost himself feeling her legs during the swimming episode
- When Gauri's mom passed away and she stained his kurta with her tears which he has secretly preserved as his own treasure.

Gauri
- When she felt his lips on hers when he gave mouth to mouth to save her during the swimming episode
- The eventful night at the formals 10 years ago...when she secretly enjoyed his necking...

If you think I missed something, let me know. Of course, everyone can chip in...

Edited by dolphinUSA - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago

wonderful update hun.... ⭐️

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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww he didnt wash it hes sooo adorable like that aww, and this is gunna be a very interesting couple!! i love it.......muah
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Posted: 13 years ago
he is sooooooooooo sweet....n ur update was beautiiiiiiiiiiful
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow, just wow.

The only thing I am frustrated about is the fact that he never says any of this..and i know that's stupid cuz that's the last thing HE would do. but still..i want her to somehow find out and KNOW those memories ..it's like ahhh. 

i make NO sense. i know -__- sorry about that, but i just wanted to let my frustration out..lol

can't wait for the next :)

Snehaa
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Posted: 13 years ago

thts an adorable side of shiv we get to witness....

loved the update
 
kweep writing
 
reva
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Posted: 13 years ago
i dont get how composed they are after wht almost happened at nigth
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Posted: 13 years ago
fabalous!!!!


update ASAP!!!