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FF (Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... -pg. 140, 142 - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic....m luving da way their relation is progressiNG!!!


continue ASAP!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
great update! thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
"Walk out"...why does he do that?😉😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh man i can't wait to see who wins
i hope shiv does
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Posted: 13 years ago
I swear ur evil ;p
u got me all hot and bothered and leave me hanging
poor shiv wht the hell just happened
i'm not sure how to react to this
plz update ASAP
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part 😳😳....why the hell he walk out....u r soo evil  😈
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Damn!! crap....I had read your warning....And after a lengthy debate decided to read it right now in morning rather than leaving it for night time -read.....as night time reading would have invaded my dream-realm...and that dear girl does not work well for someone who is still waiting for her the 'one'!!!

Yet I am still cursing you...because the day has yet not started...my folks had left me a list of things to do....and try as I might I just can't seem to remember them anymore. So I am going back to sleep...and now my father has to wait till Monday for his bank work to be done.

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Everyone is right!! You are a Devil!!!!
Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


it was hot............

love the way both abusing each other........


Posted: 13 years ago
This content was originally posted by: crazilycrazy

"Walk out"...why does he do that?😉😆


If he stayed, the story would be progressing at quite the rapid pace, no?  ðŸ˜‰
Posted: 13 years ago
This content was originally posted by: jazzerette

Damn!! crap....I had read your warning....And after a lengthy debate decided to read it right now in morning rather than leaving it for night time -read.....as night time reading would have invaded my dream-realm...and that dear girl does not work well for someone who is still waiting for her the 'one'!!!


Yet I am still cursing you...because the day has yet not started...my folks had left me a list of things to do....and try as I might I just can't seem to remember them anymore. So I am going back to sleep...and now my father has to wait till Monday for his bank work to be done.

----xxx-----

Everyone is right!! You are a Devil!!!!


Lol... 
sorry Jazz.... I hope at least you can handle the stuff I write... I almost want to put up one of those signs that says "Enter At Your Own Risk" ðŸ˜‰
Edited by sridevi27 - 13 years ago