FF (Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... -pg. 140, 142 - Page 16

Posted: 13 years ago
Omg girlie that was sooooo fun!!
i loved the update muah!
hmmm so they do know alot about each other!!!
cant wait to read more!!
Posted: 13 years ago
loved it to the core....and want to read more
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by scorpiobhavika


erm i think u missed the update on pg 16 on the index ..myt want t check on dat
nd yea ...d part ws fab ...u're updating dis ff, is dis d reason for ur slow updating fr love nd dispair ?!
any which way, keep updating !!


ps. is sridevi ur real name, or its jst another username ?
cuz u noe i nevr really lyk addressing ppl wid those ..i luv to greet b4 posting anything bt im afraid i wudnt call u sri, devi or sridevi if dats nt ur name ..dis also being d sole reason for nt putting up any header at all in both of my replys :)

nd yea i chanced upon dis update ...hope u wud soon b pm-ing me wid d same !

Devi is good ;)
Posted: 13 years ago
NICE!!!!!!!

Facts are easy to win...but they just learned something very private about the other. Simply beautiful. This is how people grow fonder of one another...little by little...working like a snail.

You know, I get bored of people very easily if I get too close to them in little time. Because then, there is nothing more to know about them....You know what they are. And no matter how much more you talk to them, it won't change.

This makes me sound like a jerk, no? Eh..who cares anyway.

The drowning bit was a surprise...and I loved how the other 3 answers revolved around 1 incident in their lives.
Edited by dolphinUSA - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
hey
 
just came across dis ff..its really nice..
 
can someone pls give me links of anyother FF's dat have been written by u..
 
thnks in advance๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 13 years ago
so they have Daadi's seal of approval, so if you had any doubts, you now know this couple is gonna rock (not that I had any)
 
I loved the game, I'm interested to see their reactions afterwards
Posted: 13 years ago
great update.......you sure do have some wonderful ideas up your sleeve. 
Posted: 13 years ago
Hey,
 
Another wonderful update........
 
I guess both of them are surprised or I would say Gauri even more.....to know that Shiv knows her well or notices and has noticed stuff about her......loved it....
 
Rachana
Posted: 13 years ago
wow...4m the few epi i hav watched on shiv n gauri....didn particularly like thm...but i'M, absolutely LOVING yr FF.......
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by tanya_vi


Whoa! That was hilarious๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Adonis in diapers??๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†  Shiv- Gauri love story = alien vs Predator๐Ÿ˜† Good lord..I was laughing my head off while reading..missed Maan's one liners though..Dunno how he managed not to give any smart remarks after listening to Shiv- Gauri๐Ÿ˜Š
๐Ÿ˜†

Lol :)  You know how Maan is... his one-liners typically come out when he is in familiar company.  This is with Mr. and Mrs. Kapoor and the newlyweds (and he's not entirely all that familiar with Gauri... he does have some social inhibition, you know ๐Ÿ˜‰  So, he let Gauri take over for a night ๐Ÿ˜‰)


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