FF (Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... -pg. 140, 142 - Page 14

Posted: 13 years ago
that was awesome....really loved it
great one it is....keep writing
Posted: 13 years ago
Lust can be like Rust covering up the true picture of the piece .......when clean it's beautifull........
 
Posted: 13 years ago
awssuuMMM!!!

m luving iT!!!


continue ASAP!!!!
Posted: 13 years ago
i nevr saw any iqbal khan shows previously (yea no kyph fr me ) and neither hv seen gauri newhere ...bt i wud luv t b pmed fr dis one ...cuz its nt abt d familiarity wid d characters but abt being able to read yet another set of ur superb work . .. love and dispair jst provided d former too wid geet and maan in our blood now .. bt yea i cn c its abt t end soon ssooo ..tis amazing how befire wrapping dat up uve already got smthing to keep us glued
thanks
 
nd yea pm me ...highly interested :))
 
 
 
ps.  y is dis titled ' d oldest story' ? not that i mind it ...m jst curious !
dis shiv and gauri character, deyve been in a show b4 ?
 
pps. oso luv d way uve entwined ur 2 stories ...posting each one's POV in d respective ffs
dis is d way i got t noe abt dis one ..through d link u got there in love nd dispair last part ;)
Edited by scorpiobhavika - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Aww man.. seems Shiv is gonna really do some torture on Gauri 😈 cant wait ..to see this lub game on between Shiv n Gauri..!! 

Rocking update dear..👏
Posted: 13 years ago
love it
awesome.....
thnks 4 the pm ...
pls update ASAP
Posted: 13 years ago
excited for the next part. i just want to read more and more
Posted: 13 years ago
hell i still don't know who shiv and gauri are....
apart from how they look...
but i am loving this FF ⭐️
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by yasu09


hell i still don't know who shiv and gauri are....
apart from how they look...
but i am loving this FF ⭐️


Same! I'm not quite sure who they are either 😕

The last two updates were really good BTW and I love the way Shiv secretly craves the attention of Gauri...
Now, I wonder if Gauri is really as oblivious of Shiv's presence as she portrays herself to be...😉

Thanks for the PM, Devi and continue asap ⭐️

Posted: 13 years ago

can't believe shiv lusted on her for 12 years.

that really was very long.

so update soon yaar

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