Prithvi - Rajat and Mugdha FF

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Posted: 13 years ago
"Prithvi, Prithvi! Utho.." cried Prithvi's mother Kamalawati. She had tears streaming down her wrinkled face and heart squeezing with worry. Pratha, Prithvi's sister stood beside her mother trying to resolve the situation as she looked worriedly at the Vaid who was busy examining and feeling Prithvi's heart pulse. It had been hours now since Prithvi had been injured by an arrow struck against his left arm and the poison had welled up to his heart by now but the Vaid still seemed to have told them that the survival was definite but not Kamalawati nor Pratha thought Prithvi would survive until a strange movement was made by him as he moved his hand towards his mother who was sitting beside him.

"Maa.." Prithvi chocked gulping again and shutting his mouth. Heavy breathings were made by him as Pratha and Kamalawati both opened their eyes and paid all their attention to Prithvi who had finally come concious.

"Beta, beta! Beta, yeh sab kaise hua?" Kamalawati gulped clutching his son's palm and placing it in her two trembling hands. "Beta, aap Kannauj gaye the na?"

"Maa..woh..Sanyogita.." Prithvi spluttered as he remembered Sanyogita had told him painfully to leave him and had begged him to leave her alone but he had not gone to Kannauj but to a wedding Sanyogita was attending. "Maa..Sanyogita.."

"Naam mat leejay aap uska! Hum nafrat karte hai Jaichand aur uski beti se!" cried Kamalawati releasing his son's palm and standing up. "Beta, yeh aap ne theek nahi kiya..aap jante hai na keh Maharaj Jaichand neh humara kitna apmaan kiya tha?"

"Maa..Sanyogita..katre..mein..hai.." Prithvi finished relaxing as the Vaid got up to pour some more Jadi buti with Kadhaa.

"Beta, Sanyogita koh kya katra ho sakta hai jab unke saat itne saare sainik..?" asked Kamalawati sitting down again and looking into his son's painful eyes.

"Maa! Mujhe Kannauj jaana hai..meri Sanyogita.." Prithvi spluttered at mentioning his mother about the love he had shared with Sanyogita.

"Aapki Sanyogita! Aapki Sanyogita kabse ho gayi woh Prithvi beta?" Kamalawati exploded angrily which made Pratha retrace her steps a bit. The only thing she was scared of the most was her mother's anger.

"Maa mein usse bohut pyaar karta hoon..mujhe jaana hai.." Prithvi cried sitting up fire bolting up against his chest. "Maa aaj mujhe meri Sanyogita se koi door nahi kar sakta!"

"Beta, agar aap neh aisa koi kadam utaya toh hum apse sab rishte tor denge.." Kamalawati warned. Prithvi sighed and leaned back on the pillow as the Vaid poured some medicine in his mouth.

"Maa, yeh aap kya keh rahi hai!" Pratha cried finally bolting up the courage to speak. But her courage disappeared as her mother showed her those angry bolting eyes.

"Pratha tum chup raho! Jao yahan se!" Kamalawati cried and Pratha ran off before she got more told off.

"Maa! Mujhe jaane deejay! Mein Sanyogita koi nahi koh sakta.." Prithvi whispered as his eyes started closing and he leaned back in bed going into deep sleep.

"Beta! Beta! Uthiye!" cried Kamalawati looking at Prithvi. "Vaidji! Yeh Prithvi koh kya ho raha hai.."

The Vaid immediately checked his pulse and started pressing his chest only to the worst of Kamalawati's fears.

"Maharani woh..Maharaj ab nahi rahe.." the Vaid stammered releasing his pulse as his wrist landed on the bed lifelessly.

"Nahi! Prithvi!" cried Kamalawati. "Prithvi uthiye nahi!"


"PRITHVI!!" cried Sanyogita getting up and to find that she was in her Tamboo with two beds which one lay Vaishali and the other her. She had gone on a Yatra with Maya Maa as she temporarily shifted to the Ashram with Vaishali. She had tried to drown herself away from Prithvi but the memories kept on haunting her in some ways..

"Rajkumari Sanyogita kya hua?" whispered Vaishali crawling off her bed and walking to Sanyogita's to find her sweaty and trembling.

"Vaishali..humne dekha keh Prithvi mar gaya.." Sanyogita stammered and started crying as she sobbed in Vaishali's shoulder.

"Aap bhi nah.. woh bilkul theek hai..aap kyun aise roh rahi hai.." Vaishali whispered wiping away her friend's tears. "Aap unse mil na chahti hai?"

"Nahi Vaishali..hum nafrat karte hai usse!" Sanyogita cried standing up and walking to the window where heavenly breeze made past her sweaty milky skin. "Ab hum sirf aur sirf usse nafrat karte hai.."

"Par aap kyun aisa kari hai..aap koh nahi pata ki woh ab bhi aap se bohut pyaar karte hai.." Vaishali whispered as she placed a sympathetic hand on her shoulder. "Aap bhi unse bohut pyaar karti hai.."

"Nahi.." Sanyogita whispered looking away at the moon wondering if Prithvi still cared for her, missed her, remembered all the cherishing moments they spent together, her wildness, her craziness everything..did he even remember her name..

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"Bhaiya aap yahan?" asked Pratha walking towards Prithvi who had his hands encircled on the railings and was staring up at the moon.

"Pratha tum yahan?" asked Prithvi turning around and facing the petite and small sized Rajkumari who was his cute little sister. He bended to her height and picked her up in his arms.

"Bhaiya..aap Nandini koh yaad kare hai na?" Pratha asked. "Bhaiya aap koh pata hai keh Rajkumari Sanyogita pichle saat maheeno seh Kannauj mein nahi hai.."

"Kya, yeh sab tumhe kaise pata?" asked Prithvi worriedly putting down Pratha and asking her with a serious tone. "Tum kab Kannauj gayi?"

"Bhaiya, hum Kannauj nahi gaye. Humne aek sainik koh chupke seh beja keh woh pata lagaye keh Nandini kahan hai," Pratha revealed without giggling at her naughtiness which proved some help to Prithvi.

"Phir Sanyogita hai kahan pe?" Prithvi stammered grabbing his sword and rushing towards the door. "Sanyogita koh kuch ho toh nahi gaya?"

"Bhaiya woh aek Yatra par hai..koi Ashram mein Maya Maa hai woh unke saat Yatra mein gayi hai aur yeh baat kisi ko Kannauj mein nahi pata.." Pratha sighed.

"Par..woh Kannauj kyun nahi jaa rahi.." Prithvi asked leaving for Sanyogita.

******


"Rajkumari Sanyogita! Rajkumari..Rajkumari.." cried Vaishali as tears streamed down her eyes and as she looked around in pitch black darkness in the dense forest where Sanyogita and her had separated due to a heavy storm. She looked here and there, every where but no sign until she collided with someone stiff and strong.

"Maharaj Prithviraj Chauhan?" Vaishali gasped stepping back and looking at his handsome and worried face. "Aap yahan kya kare hai?"

"Vaishali, Sanyogita kahan hai?" Prithvi asked stiffly looking around and then at the tearful scared shivering girl who had turned her eyes red.

"Woh kahin nahi mil rahi mein kya karu!" cried Vaishali as more tears poured down her eyes. Then suddenly both Prithvi and her heard a scream...

"Sanyogita!" cried Prithvi running to where the scream had come from..
Posted: 13 years ago
amusing plzzz update the next part soon.............
Posted: 13 years ago
Hi vishakha !!!
Very nice update dear !!!
Actually there is already one Rajat-Mugdha Fic with the name "PRITHVI"
Its not that i have problem with your fic having this name...but it will lead to confusion...
so i guess if you will think about the NAME of ur fic..
Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry Guys This FF is going to close because I thought of doing a better FF. Really sorry to those who enjoyed it but I will be opening another FF on Rajat And Mugs :)
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by Vishaka_love


Sorry Guys This FF is going to close because I thought of doing a better FF. Really sorry to those who enjoyed it but I will be opening another FF on Rajat And Mugs :)
hey this is a good FF how can u close it plzz dont close it just give it a short end but end it otherwise i well keep woundering what happens at last plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😭
Posted: 13 years ago

dear...its an amazing story...

would love to read further so dont stop here....

n do continue plzz.....

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