Is This Love???? kshitij kumud fan-fic

Posted: 18 years ago

this is my 1st fan fiction. i got inspired by many writers so i thought lets give it a try. if u guys didn't like it then u can definately tell me i'll stop then...

KSHITIJ N KUMUD ARE HIGH SCHOOL APPROX GRADE 11 STUDENTS.

KUMUD:- a middle class girl living in India  with her family. she has great thoughts and wishes to do something inovative.

KKUSUM:- kumud's mother

ABHAY :- kumud's father, loves her more than his other daughter

KALI:- kumud's younger sis, very mischevious but loves her family alot

KSHITIJ:- living in Canada with his family. He is very intelligent. But likes 2 show off as a cool dude.

GARV:- kshitij's best friend. he knows kshitij inside-out.

this was just a character sketch.

if i get atleast satisfacory replies then i shall positively continue.

plz do reply.

Edited by karan_ranveer - 18 years ago
Posted: 18 years ago
oooooooo soudns gr8!so they're young huh?cant wait!!!!
Posted: 18 years ago
11th graders????????????....lol....thats funny!!!!!! πŸ˜† ....intresting story....plz continue!!!!!
Posted: 18 years ago

hey karan wellcome to our most funny & lovely gang! πŸ€—the fiction base on this lovely couple i m alwyes there...πŸ˜›

All da Best 4 ur fictionπŸ‘πŸΌ

Posted: 18 years ago
11 graders lol. they are younger than me and i am only 17. lol. this is funnnny. πŸ˜†
Posted: 18 years ago
they are young!! thats good!!!!! The more younger the more romance... come on you guys!!!!!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Posted: 18 years ago
Originally posted by guli444


they are young!! thats good!!!!! The more younger the more romance... come on you guys!!!!!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†


no i m serious. kshitij doesn't look 16. kumud sure doesn't look 16. well if they failed their classes 6 times, then it plausible. u know they are in love and dint concentrate on studies too much. lol. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Posted: 18 years ago
Originally posted by guli444


they are young!! thats good!!!!! The more younger the more romance... come on you guys!!!!!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†



gulli, you are becoming very naughty day by day!!! lagta hain, aunty ko batana padega...πŸ˜†
Posted: 18 years ago
here it goes!!!!!! thanx 4 replying plz continue 2 reply

In India
Its 7:30.
Kkusum (Kk): kumud (K) wake up dont u hve 2 go 2 ur college?
K:just 5 minutes plz
Kk: ur 5 minutes will never get over
K: then why r u asking???? πŸ˜†
Kk:stop cracking jokes wake up? god knows what will happen after her marriage
K: marriage? wat marriage? whose marriage?
Kk:my marriage...!of course yours
K: oh i see i thought you r planning 2 divorce dad and marry someone else before that plz let me know i shall help you in making preperation
Kk: k... you... now get up or else i'll...
K: mom i am already in the washroom r u sleeping with your eyes open
Kk: just wait let me tell your dad about this he shall do something...

At breakfast

Abhay (A): so Kali(Ka)how is your last year in school? r u working hard? u need 2 top in your school just like your sister.
Ka: dad no one is like my sis. do u remember jassi jaisi koi nahi which comes on sony, i shall say kumud jaisi koi nahi and ofcourse that includes me too. πŸ˜†
A: you 2 sisters are just like each other. EK SE BHADKAR EK (i hope my hindi sounds correct)
Ka: ok bye dad see you in the evening... i hope my test goes good or else that nakul will go ahead of me which cannot happen.
K: bye dad
A: so soon... what about your breakfast...
K:dad u know me i am getting late i'll have it in college.
A: bye then
she has already left
Kk: this girl... what should i do of this girl... again she went without having breakfast
A: she was getting late
Kk: beti gaye toh ab uske pyare dad chalu hogaye(after her daughter left her father started)
A: did i tell u that you are looking very hot today
Kk: what???
A:nothing (talking to himself) i should leave or else i'll have to sleep in the hall tonite
Kk: did you take all your stuff?
A: ya wallet is there , bag is there, lunch is there.. everything is there
Kk:padel chalne ka erada hai kya (are planning to go walking) πŸ˜†
A: oh i forgot my car keys
Kk: if i would have not been then wat would have happened?
A: nothing... there would have been someone else in your place... nothing new
Kk: what did you say?
A: nothing...nothing what will i say in front of you... ok then bye
Kk: bye

i hope u all like it. plz bare with my mistakes since this is my 1st ff i like 2 know from each n every1 who read my ff 2 reply atleast say good or bad or anything u liked or disliked in my ff. Edited by karan_ranveer - 18 years ago
Posted: 18 years ago
nice!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please cont soon!!!!!!



And bolly... grow up!! πŸ˜†

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