Maine pyar kiya-fanfic 4 Kshitij-kumud

PART-1......Kumud Kapoor is a typical
                                                      middle class punjabi
                          girl....very simple....wears
                                                      ordinary short salwar...wears
                          glasses,long hair...she
                                                      plats it.she is attached 2 her
                          parents,dadi & her
                                                      dearest brother Abhay
                          she joins a new
                                                      college.she was teased by all
                          the guys.bcoz she was an
                                                      exception in that college of
                          fashionable girls.everyday
                                                      she was getting embarassed.one
                          day she was crying under
                                                      the college tree.suddenly a
                          girl comes & touches
                                                      her:kumud Kapoor ...she looks
                          at that
                                                      girl.tall,fair,short
                          hair,tight jeans,short top.she
                                                      smiles at her:hi,i'm a khusum. kumud smiles.
                                                      Khu:1st u wipe out ur
                          tears.then smile. she did so.
                                                      Khu:kumud kapoor ,du u hav
                          any pet name? she:the ppl
                                                      who r close 2 me call me
                          kumud. Khu:wow,i'll also call
                                                      u kumud.bcoz i'm ur friend.see
                          kumud,yellow flowers...r
                                                      falling on us...u no yellow is
                          the color of
                                                      frienship...khusum takes a
                          yellow flower:it proves that
                                                      we r gud friends.is'nt rite
                          kumud? kumud smiles:yes.
                                                      khusum was thrilled:that means
                          u 'll be my friend?
                                                      K:i'll not be just a
                          friend,i'll be ur very gud
                                                      friend. Khu:really? both of
                          them smile. khu:this
                                                      smile shud there on ur face
                          always.shud not cry when
                                                      stupid guys tease u. kumud
                          becomes shy.

WOW, Brilliant... 👏 Dat's kool....Plz cont. as soon as possible...
I'm sure it's going to be marvelous like ur others.... 😊 Coz It's so diff....

So keep posting.

Edited by Day_Dreamer - 18 years ago

great job plz continue soon!!

Part-2....khusum:kumud,u hav 2 change.i was like u b4.now

                                                      see my change.u hav 2 be
                          smart. khusum teaches her how 2
                                                      walk in stylish way....she
                          changes kumud's
                                                      dressing.kumud starts wearing
                          western clothes.she makes
                                                      her hair short. slowly slowly
                          she adjusts & becomes a
                                                      smart girl.evey1 was surprised
                          at her change. there is a
                                                      raksha bandhan party in a
                          hotel. khusum invites kumud 2
                                                      come with her brother.
                          Khu:many brothers & sisters
                                                      will come.we'll tie rakhi
                          2gether.how nice it will be!    
                                                      kumud goes there with her
                          dearest brother Abhay.
                                                      abhay was surprised at the
                          high class ppl's party.
                                                      khusum comes near kumud:hi
                          kumud.abhay falls 4 her at
                                                      the 1st sight itself.
                          Ku:bhayya,this is khusum. he
                                                      smiles at her. ku:this is
                          my brother abhay.
                                                      khu:hi. abhay was
                          flattered:hi. ku:ok,i
                                                      introduced my brother 2
                          u.where is ur brother? khusum
                                                      shows her only brother garv.
                          garv falls 4 kumud at the
                                                      1st sight. all the sisters tie
                          rakhi on their brothers'
                                                      hands. abhay tells
                          khusum:khusum....his voice was really
                                                      cool,soft & romantic.he:i came
                          2 thank u. khu:2 thank
                                                      me?4 what? A:my sister
                          was very shy,reserved...but
                                                      u changed her.now kumud is
                          very happy.u made her really
                                                      beautiful. khusum laughs:i
                          did'nt make her pretty.she was
                                                      already very pretty. khusum
                          smiles.abhay was serious&
                                                      looks at her eyes deeply.khusum
                          becomes shy 2 look at
                                                      him. A:ur smile is so
                          beautiful....luvly... khusum
                                                      smiles :thank u.     abhay
                          thinks:coming 2 this party
                                                      was not a waste.infact it was
                          very useful.   garv
                                                      always about kumud.khusum finds
                          out his secret luv 4
                                                      kumud.she teases him. she
                          reveals it 2 theirparents.they
                                                      come 2 kumud's house. kumud
                          comes out.garv's parents
                                                      liked her very much.they
                          did'nt care that kumud is a
                                                      middle class girl. garv's
                          dad:we came here with a
                                                      proposal.we wud like 2 get
                          kumud as our bahu. they were
                                                      surprised. khu:my bayya luvs
                          kumud very much. abhay
                                                      says in his mind:kumud's
                          brother luvs u khusum. the
                                                      wedding gets fixed.but
                          Mr.kapoor told them 2 wait till
                                                      her studies get over. they
                          agree. when they were
                                                      going,without their
                          knowledge,abhay winks at khusum.
                                                      khusum did'nt expect it.she
                          feels funny.     do not 4get
                                                      2 write ur comments....       
                          

Arre yeh kya jasmine yeh fan-fic toh ku-ks ke liye hai.. aur tumne toh 2nd episode mein uski shaadi fix kardi...
😲
I realy lov de ending bit where abhay winks at kkusum 😆 😆 😆
Anyways it's a fantastic start...Now keep writing...

Aur dekha na tumhari Fan-fic pe sabse pehle comments send karne aur perhne wali main hi hon...
MAIN HOON NA...Iss liye Likhte raho likhte raho.. 😆 😆 😆

                                                      Part-3....bOth abhay-khusum
                          at the icecream parlour.
                                                      he was looking at her.
                          K:abhay,why r u looking at
                                                      me like this? he smiles.gets
                          embarassed.understanding
                                                      his embarrasement she laughs.
                          he:u look very beautiful
                                                      when u smile. K:u always talk
                          about my smile.i'm
                                                      getting bored of that. abhay
                          gets embarassed.
                                                      K:tell me why did u call me
                          here? A:that u
                                                      did'nt understand? she:if u
                          don't tell me how can i
                                                      understand?tell me why did u
                          call me? he: khusum,when
                                                      does a person becomes
                          silent&wordless? khusum laughs:how
                                                      rubbish ! he:this not
                          rubbish.its connected 2 luv.a
                                                      person struggles 4 words when
                          he has 2 open his heart b4
                                                      his beloved.yes khusum i luv
                          u.u also luv me no?   khusum
                                                      smiles:no...he:no,u luv me.
                          she smiles:no...he:if u luv
                                                      me,u shud come 4 2day
                          evening's party.   she smiles. in
                                                      the party,abhay was searching 4
                          khusum.
                                                      kumud:bhayya,whom r u
                          searching 4? he did'ntt get words.
                                                      later ppl started
                          dancing.suddenly khusum comes....in
                                                      short top & parallels...with
                          lots of bead work. abhay
                                                      dances singing....ajave
                          mahi....{FIda}.khusum also join
                                                      with him.every1 was shocked 2
                          see their intimacy.
                                                      kumud's dad's voice was
                          raised:whats this? A:i'm
                                                      sorry papaji,we luv each
                          other. suddenly every1 laughs 2
                                                      their surprise. bcoz of the
                          horoscope,abhay-khusum
                                                      wedding was conducted early.
                          khusum becomes an ideal
                                                      bahu. kumud's college life
                          gets over.they get ready 4
                                                      the wedding.but unfortunately
                          b4 the wedding garv meets
                                                      with an accident.his car falls
                          into big river.his car
                                                      was fully damaged.they did'nt
                          even his body. every1 was
                                                      sad.kumud was heart broken.she
                          takes months 2 recover.
                                                      months passed.when khusum
                          forces kumud starts going 4
                                                      modelling.4 that she shifts to
                          another city. she goes 4
                                                      a shoot. they call 4 the
                          photographer.he comes.he was
                                                      well dressed.he was very
                          handsome.he smiles nicely. he
                                                      was touched by kumud's
                          presense.he falls 4 her at 1st
                                                      sight.he is none other than
                          KSHITIJ. he runs 2 dadi.he is
                                                      her pet. he was
                          thrilled:dadi,i met the girl of my
                                                      dreams. dadi:what? he:i told u
                          no,i see a girl in every
                                                      dream.2day i saw her. dadi:who
                          is she? he:she is
                                                      kumd,the upcoming model.
                          kshitij's mind tells:1 day
                                                      kumud will come b4 u. she'll
                          admit that she luves u.    
                                                      kshitij goes 2 a dream world. he
                          dreams having pretty
                                                      moments with
                          kumud.song....nazar..nazar...{FIda}
                                                         

keep it up and plz continue fast...

part-4....kumud's work was greatly appreciated. she:1st
                                                           of all i wud like 2 thank my
                            photographer Mr.Kshitij. she
                                                           smiles at him:thanku kshitij. he
                            smiled as if her
                                                           complement is the gr8st
                            achievement of life.kumud joins
                                                           that company as the chief
                            model. Lter kumud was
                                                           surprised 2 no that kshitij is
                            not only an ordinary
                                                           photographer ,but also the
                            owner of this company.he has
                                                           no parents ,only his
                            dadi.actually due 2 the craze of
                                                           photograghy,he works there as
                            the photogragher.kumud
                                                           thinks how garv was
                            interested 2 take her photoes. 1
                                                           lady of the company tells
                            her:kshitij sir does
                                                           photograghy only if he likes
                            the model.u r his fav
                                                           model.    kumud simply smiles.
                            kumud's co-star was not
                                                           performing well.so the
                            director ot angry & puts him
                                                           out.he becomes upset:in this
                            last moment whom will i
                                                           try?   suddenly kumud looks at
                            ronit:Mr.kshitij,why
                                                           don't u try?kshitij was
                            shocked:me?no way...it will harm
                                                           ur name too kumud.i don't want
                            that 2 happen.     
                                                           Ku:it'll never happen.i think u
                            r the right
                                                           choice.just try. ever1 forces
                            him & finally he stands as
                                                           the model. that work becomes a
                            gr8 success. he thanks
                                                           Ku:its bcoz of u,we cud
                            achieve this success. kumud
                                                           smiles :no Mr.kshitij...he:plz
                            kumud...don't call me
                                                           Mr...just call me kshitij.
                            she:ok kshitij...he:how sweet!
                                                           she:what?i did'nt hear u.
                            he:nothing.kumud,can we become
                                                           ud friends?   kumud thinks
                            about her 1st meeting with
                                                           khusum:whats the need of
                            asking that?we r already
                                                           friends.   kshitij becomes
                            happy. Ku:i no a sister &
                                                           brother who giv a lot of value
                            2 frienship.i learnt the
                                                           value of frienship from them.
                               kshitij was so happy
                                                           about kumud's frienship that
                            he runs around like a mad
                                                         person dreaming...song..koi
                            milgaya..{koi mil gaya}.
                                                         kshi-kumud go 2 a
                            r estaurant.kshitij becomes
                                                         emotional.he looks at kumud's
                            eyes deeply.kumud
                                                           r emembers that lady telling
                            he r that kshitij's fav model
                                                         is herself. Ks:kumud,i luv
                            u.will u marry me? kumud
                                                         was shocked. Ks:kumud,will u?
                            kumud gets upset:u'rs
                                                         is not luv kshitij.its just an
                            attraction 4 a model.u r
                                                         luving my beauty,not me. kshitij
                            cud'nt bare it:no
                                                           kumud .kumud plz don't take it
                            funny.i'm
                                                         serious.kumud,i'll tell u a
                            truth.i used 2 see u in my
                                                         dreams b4 i saw u.that day
                            onwards i started luving u.
                                                           kumud does'nt believe it.kumud
                            gets fed up & she goes
                                                         away.he follows
                            he r:kumud,don't go.plz listen 2 me.i'm
                                                         madly in luv with u.believe me
                            kumud . tears started
                                                         coming from his eyes. Ku:ok,i
                            believe u kshitij.but
                                                         what du u no about me. she
                            tells him about ashmit. she
                                                         thot ashmit will change his
                            mind hearing that.but he
                                                         continued walking behind
                            he r.he even goes 2 kumud's
                                                         house with his dadi with the
                            proposal when she was not
                                                           the re. after they return,kshitij
                            comes 2 the house.her
                                                         papaji tells:2day a guy called kshitij came here.he was
                                                           not alone.his dadi came along
                            with him. kumud was
                                                         shocked. Abhay:what
                            r elationship u r having with
                                                         kshitij? kumud becomes upset.


                              

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Brillaiint....
sorry i could't post earlier coz I was making my homepage..
Butr, plz cont.

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME....great job...cheers 2 u!