Garv aur Kumud as Veer aur Zara

Part-1.....Kumud is quite rich.she has got a cousin
                          sister called kali who lost her parents earlier.they
                          stay in the same house.they r very close 2 each other.
                          kali cumes 2 kumud's bedroom. K:kumud,wake up..kumud
                          under the bedsheet:kali,plz let me sleep. K:see,there
                          is a surprise 4 u.ur poem has been published. kumud
                          cumes out of the bedsheet fast & takes the magazine from
                          kali.she was so thrilled that she jumps with joy.hugs
                          kali:kali,i'm so happy. K:but kumud,why r u not
                          using ur own name,afterall u've a gud mame. K:yes,my
                          name is gud.but my pen name is sweeter...'Zara'.i want
                          me 2 be known as Zara. K:but why r u hiding ur pen name
                          from others? Ku:right now,i don't want publicity.let the
                          correct time cum.i'l reveal my pen name. K:ofcourse zara
                          is a sweet name.how did u choose this name?   Ku:i got
                          impressed by this name from the movie VEERZARA.what a
                          touching luv story.i really admire Veer & Zara 4 the
                          true luv.they sacrificed everything 4 their luv. K:plz
                          sing ur poem kumud. kumud smiles & sings with dance
                          steps:hum to bhai jaise hain...{veerzara}. Kali:we'll enjoy
                          this happy occasion,lets go 4 a party. Ku:but
                          kali...K:no excuse,u hav 2 cum 4 the party.   
                          kali-kumud go 4 the party.kali was surprised 2 see a
                          glamorous face there. WHOSE FACE?

This i'm sending 4 Angad-kripa too.

Part-2....kali tells kumud:kumud,just look at him,the
                          rock star garv. Ku:ya...ur fav. K:i was longing 2 see
                          him.i'm so lucky 2 see him. kumud smiles. garv
                          performs:woh lamhen....every1 dances.kali 4get herself
                          & dances. every1 claps their hands. K:how
                          beautiful!luvly voice.rite kumud. KU:his performance was
                          nice.but i like Veer's poems more. K:veer? Ku:yes,how
                          many times i've told u about Veer who writes poems.
                          K:ya...now i remember. Ku:like u were longing 2 see
                          garv,i'm longing 2 see Veer.its my gr8est dream. all
                          the fans around garv.kali takes kumud there. K:hi
                          garv,i'm kali & i'm a gr8 fan of urs. G:thanku.
                          K:this is my cousin kumud. G:nice 2 meet u.r'nt u my
                          fan? Kumud simply smiles. g:this smile itself shows that
                          u r not my fan. kumud felt embarassed. Ku:ur song was
                          gud. G:thanks. K:can u giv ur autograph. he givs it with
                          a naughty smile. K:when will we meet next?   kumud
                          whispers:kali,don't be after him.he'll think that u r
                          mad. G:we'll see at 2morrow's party. K:sure.we both will
                          be there.   G:very gud,so that i can enjoy the partywith
                          2 pretty girls. they all laugh. Ku:sorry,i cannot cum 4
                          the party. kali looks at kumud. G:why? Ku:actually u may
                          feel that its a silly reason.but 4me its really
                          imp.2morrow at 8pm on sony tv,my fav film will be shown.
                          G:which is ur fav movie? Ku:Veerzara. G:wow,its my fav
                          too.i did'nt no that its there on sony 2morrow.thanku 4
                          informing me that.its a powerful luv story.i've seen it
                          many times. Ku:the same here.   G:u like luv stories?
                          Ku:yes,i luv it.how can ppl 4get powerful luv cuple like
                          Veer-Zara? G:thats true kumud.sorry kali,i can't cum 4
                          the party.i'm also going 2 see veerzara. kali becomes
                          moody. when kumud-kali go out,K:why did u tell angad
                          about veerzara?i lost a nice chance 2 spend sum time
                          with him. Ku:i never thot a rock star like garv likes a
                          soft luv story like veerzara. i'm sorry. kali
                          smiles:its ok. Kumud buys a magazine.she was happy 2 go
                          thru it. K:why r u so happy kumud? ku:Veer's poem is
                          there.she was eager 2 read it. Ku:what a romantic poem!
                          kumud sings that:tere liye..{VeerZara}.at the same time
                          garv was singing it at home.
                          

thanks for your post it is similar as angad and kripa's veer aur zara
but you are doing super job
please write soon

its great!!
i just caught up today.....plz cont soon its really good! 😊

Part-3....kali:kumud,why can't u learn singing? Ku:i
                          want 2.but i'm shy..        & K:due 2 shyness plz
                          don't waste ur talent. now u've 2 agree that u'll learn
                          music.    Ku:but who'll teach me?     K:i've noted 1
                          person 4 u.       Ku:who is that unlucky person?     
                          kali smiles:i'll show u that person.but u've 2 cum 4 a
                          party.       Ku:oh,party? ok...   kali-kumud go 4 the
                          party.    kali sees garv & calls him:hi agarv .    
                          G:hi kali...garv cumes near them:how r u?    K:fine!how
                          do u like kumud?is he gud 4 u.   Garv observes her
                          deeply.    Kumud feels irritation:whats this?     
                          garv-kali LAUGH.      K:SORRY kumud.actually this is
                          ur music teacher.      Kumud cud'nt believe:what?G:Why u
                          don't like a rock star teaching?    Ku:not bcoz of
                          that.G:then? Ku:nothing.i'm ready.      kali-garv
                          smile.       G:then in this happy occasion do u like 2
                          dance with me?     Kumud hesitates.K:well,i'm ready
                          garv. kali gives her hand 2 garv & they dance
                          2gether.    Kumu d thinks:if Veer was there with me,i
                          wud've danced with him.will i be able 2 meet him?will
                          that moment cum in my life?if it cums......kumud feels
                          sweet of thinking that.       kumud-kali uat home. K:i
                          really doubt whether my music class under garv will cum
                          well.     & nbsp;  K:why r u having stupid doubts about.. Ku:i
                          don;t no why?i feel so.     K:just stop ur rubbishness
                          kumud.i'm predicting that it'll be a turning point in
                          urs & garv's life.    WILL KALI"S PREDICTION CUM TRUE?

                           

its sooooo awesome!!
plz cont soon!
isnt this kinda like your iqbal and neha one.

Part-4....Kumud goes 2 Garv's's house. Saakshi opens the
                          door.she smiles.garv hugs her. G:this is my dearest mom
                          . K:namaste auntyji..G:mom,this is my student kumud
                          kapoor. S:garv has told about u.cum inside. kumud goes
                          inside. Aryaman cumes. G:this is my cute dad ..K:namaste
                          uncle. G:dad,this is kumud who has cum 2 learn music
                          from me. A:ok..carry on.. garv-kumud get inside the
                          room. Aryaman tells saakshi:nice girl no? S:yes,very
                          sweet.she looks gud with garv. A:ya.. garv starts
                          music class. after the class got over garv:1st
                          impression is the best impression.our 1st class was very
                          interesting..u sing very well.i've a gud impression
                          about u. kumud becomes happy:thanks a lot.i was tensed
                          whether i'll be able 2 sing. G:don't hav stupid
                          doubts.bcoz u r a gud singer. Kumud smiles:actually i
                          never expected a rock star like u 2 be a gud teacher.
                          Garv sniles:that means u've accepted me as ur teacher.
                          K:ya...Garv-kumud get out of the house. G:there is
                          another person who has 2 be introduced 2 u. K:who? G:my
                          dearest younger brother. see,he is cuming back...A guy
                          was cuming 2 the house. WHO IS Garv"S BROTHER?

definitly kshitj!
awesome plz cont!

Part-5.....Garv's brother cumes near them. G:this my
                          student kumud bhai. he:hi,i'm kshitij.nice 2 meet u.
                          they shake hands.   kumud was writing sumthing. kali
                          cumes:what r u writing kumud? Ku:i'm writing a letter 2
                          Veer. K:wow!but how did u get his home address. Ku:its
                          not his home address.in the magazine a separate address
                          is given 4 his fans. K:a lot of fans will be sending him
                          letters.will he notice urs specially? Ku:no idea.but i
                          wish that he'll understand my interest 4 him.i've
                          expressed everything in this letter.i've written that
                          i've started learning music.when i reach a stage 2 do a
                          stage show,i'll surely sing his poem.thats my gr8set
                          dream,will it happen kali? K:yes.kumud,is it an
                          ordinary craze or u just luv him? Ku:i dunno.but i really
                          doubt whether i'm in luv with him.if i get him
                          4ver..i'll be the most luckiest person in this world. A
                          few days back,kumud gets a reply.she opens the cover. "i
                          think u r a special fan of mine.i'm glad that u'll sing
                          my poem 4 ur 1st stage show.when u do ur 1st stage
                          performance,inform me,i'll be there,sure evif i'm
                          busy.bcoz u r special 2 me. with luv Veer." kumud was so
                          happy that she jumps with joy. kali cumes:why r u so
                          excited? Ku:kali,veer replied.god heard my prayer.
                          K:really? Ku:ya.. kumud looks into the leeter.
                          "kumud,this is my new poem.this i'm sending it 4 u.no1
                          has read it b4.u the 1st 1 2 read it." kumud sings
                          Veer's poem:pehla nasha.....At the same time garv was
                          singing it at home.