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AAYA MAUSAM DOSTI KA 

Character Sketches

Mayank :- Band ka lead singer. Gana achcha gaata hai, per inhhe gussa bahut aata hai. Padhne me bhi over intelligent hai. Isliye ladkiya to inper marti hai per yeh kisi ko bhav nhi dete.

Samrat :- Band k guitarist hone k sath sath band k co-singer bhi hai. Ab co-singer hai to gaana bhi achcha hi gaate hai. Bahut baatein banate hai. Per mayank k ek dum ulte hai inhe hamesha ladkiya ghere rehti hai.

Benji :- The drummer. Band k sabse naughty personality. Yeh drum bajate hai aur  band members inhe bajate hai. Agar yeh band se bach gye to inki gf inhe bajati hai

Uday :- The Key board player. Inhe hamesha apni dreamgirl ki talash rehti hai. per inki bewakufi bhari baato ki wajah se abhi tak inki koi gf nhi hai.

 

Nupur :- Yeh morena se padhne aayi hai. Badi muskil se inki family ne inhe Mumbai aane ki permission di hai. Yeh apne sare sapne sach karna chahti hai. Yeh bhi achcha gati hai per inhe iss baat ka khud bhi pta nhi hai

Gunjan :- Mayank ki younger sister. Waise to band ki kafi help karti hai but sari help back stage hoti hai. Yeh kam bolna psnd karti hai. Yeh gaana gaane me help kar sakti hai per gaa nhi sakti. Band ki sari practice mayank k ghar per hoti hai to gunjan ko hi band ko jhelna padta hai. isliye iski band me entry allowed hai aur ek aur cheez gunjan band k liye lucky mani jaati hai. gunjan ki present me band ka show always superhit hota hai to who band ki lucky charm bhi hai. yeh band k har member ka man na hai.

Shilpa :- Yeh mayank aur gunjan ki mom hai. jo abhi out of city hai. aur apne bachcho se bahut hi pyar karne wali maa hai. Haan yeh bhi chahti hai k inke bache jo bhi sapne dekhe wo pure ho.

Diya :- benji ki gf aur uday ki sister. She is sweet & salty also. Yeh fashion designer ka course kar rhi hai to yeh hi decide karti hai k kisko kya pehan na hai aur stage per kaisa dikhna hai. apni personal aur professional life kabhi mix nhi karti

 

The Band :- Pure group ki ek hi khawish hai k wo on the stage kuch aisa kar paye k unki family kabhi unhe yeh na kahe k music ko choice karke unhone koi galat faisla liya tha. Band me sabki brabar jagah hai. koi ek band ka owner nhi hai. The band name is "Friend Forever"

 
( Pura stadium logo se bhara pada hai aur tabhi announcement hoti hai k next stage per aayenge "Friend Forever" group. Pura stadium taliyo se gunj uthta hai. Pura band stage per aata hai sab apni position lekar gaana start karte hai

 

Yaaron Jee Bhar Ke Jee Le Pal
Lagta Hai Aajkal Daur Apna Aayega ?
Yaaron Jo Khud Pe Ho Yakeen
Toh Zindagi Haseen Tujhe Kal Bulayega

Hai Junoon ?
Hai Junoon Sa Jeene Mai
(sa Jeene Mai)
Hai Junoon ?
Hai Junoon Sa Seene Mai
 
Kahin Jaise Koi Dhun Baje
Raahon Mai Dekho Hai Manzar Saje Saare
Humein Hum Jahaan Mein Har Jagaah
Sapne Saajane Ki Humko Mili Wajaah

Kahin (kahin) Jaise Koi (koi) Dhun Baje
Raahon Mai Dekho Hai Manzar Saje Saare
Humein (humein) Hum Jahaan Mein Har Jagaah
Sapne Saajane Ki Humko Mili Wajaah

Yeh Agar Jo Sach Nahi
Toh Sach Bhala Hai Kya?
Yaaron .. Apne Hisaab Se
Dil Ki Kitaab Pe Kuch Toh Naya Likhon

Yaaron Unchahon Cheezon Karo
Na Karti Yeh Umar
Na Karti Yeh Umar
Phir Kyun Bhala Daro

Hai Junoon?
Hai Junoon Sa Jeene Mai
(sa Jeene Mai)
Hai Junoon?
Hai Junoon Sa Seene Mai
 
Kabhi Jo Milenge Raastein
Pal Mai Hi Chamkegi Hasi Purani
Kaho Kya Kahoge Phir Humein
Kese Chupaoge Nami Yeh Palkon Ki

Kabhi (kabhi) Jo Milenge (milenge) Raastein
Pal Mai Hi Chamkegi Hasi Purani Toh
Kaho (kaho) Kya Kahoge (phir) Humein
Kese Chupaoge Nami Yeh Palkon Ki

Yeh Pata Hai Kya Hua
Hua Hai Kyun Pata
Yaaron Jee Bhar Ke Jee Le Pal
Lagta Hai Aajkal Daur Apna Aayega
Yaaron Jo Khud Pe Ho Yakeen
Toh Zindagi Haseen
Tujhe Kal Bulayega

Hai Junoon?
Hai Junoon Sa Jeene Mai
(sa Jeene Mai)
Hai Junoon?
Hai Junoon Sa Seene Mai

 

(stadiam taliyo ki awaz se gunj uthta hai aur mayank apne bed se niche gir jaata hai. Itne me gunjan uske room me enter karti hai moring tea k sath)

G :- fir se wahi sapna. Mayank sirf sapne dekhne se kuch nhi hoga

M :- haan pta hai. Per karu kya. Samjh me nhi aa rha.

G :- per kuch to karna padega na.

M :- haan kuch to karna hi hoga

G :- achcha utho aur taiyar ho jao. Band k baki member aate hi honge

M :- tum kitni achchi ho. Hum sab k bare me kitna sochti ho. Jabki band se tumhara kuch lena dena nhi hai

G :- kaise nhi hai. Aakhir tum mere bhai ho aur band ki sari practice bhi ghar per hi hoti hai to sab kuch jhelna bhi mujhe hi padta hai. to band k bare me itna to soch hi sakti hu

Tum jaldi se taiyar ho jao. Main yeh nhi sun na chahti k mayank aaj time se ready nhi hua

M :- thik hai, Main abhi ready ho kar aaya. Waise aaj tak tumne yeh sab suna nhi hai

G:- aage bhi nhi sun na chahti. Jaldi aana. Aur haan maa ka call aaya tha. Aaj station jaana hai unki friend ki friend ki beti ko lene

M :- nhi yaar, aise mat bolo

G :- per yeh sach hai. maa ne pehle hi bataya tha na

M :- haan . per maa ne kaha tha syad. Mujhe lga na hoga

G :- syad me 50% haan bhi hota hai.

M :- yeh to maine socha hi nhi. Per usse pehchanege kaise.

 G :- wo tum mujh per chod do? ab jao

(mayank ready hota hai tab tak band k sare members bhi aa jate hai )

S to M :- hi mayank. Aaj fir wahi dream

M to S :- haan. Bas yahi sab chalta hai mere dimag me

B to both :- kaun se spno ki baatein ho rhi hai. mayank kaun si ladki ka spna dekha

S to B :- aaj tak mayank ne kabhi kisi ladki ka spna dekha hai kya. Mayank band k bare me soch rha tha

B to both :- haan yeh bhi thik hai. waise mayank k liye to koi pari hi aayegi. Isse hum logo jaise aam ladkiya kahaan psnd hai

M :- mujhe kisi pari me bhi koi interest nhi hai

U to M :- to kis me interest hai mayank tumhe

M :- mujhe music k siva kisi me koi interest nhi hai

(Gunjan enters)

G to all :- aaj practise nhi karni kya tum logo ko. Baatein kar rhe ho

D to G :- Correct gunjan. Aaj in logo ka mann nhi lag rha

S to G :- gunjan g. Hum to yahaan practice karne hi aaye hai. bas apka chehra dekh liya ab practice bhi start kar denge.

M to S :- Samrat yahaan aa jao aur guitar bajao. Ab to gunjan bhi aa gyi hai

S to M :- haan bilkul. Abhi aaya

(& then everyone take his position & start practice aur jaise hi practice finish huyi )

S to M :- practice to achchi rahi. Waise tumne shukla ji k purposal k bare me kya socha hai. Dekh purposal me koi burai nhi hai. iss se apne band ko hi fyada hai. agar wo competition hum jeet gye to apne band ki life ban jayengi. Bina extra effort lagaye

U to M :- haan mayank purposal achcha hai. sab ki life set ho jayegi aur mujhe bhi ek ladki mil jayegi jis se main shadi kar saku

M & S together :- shadi? Ladki? Wo kaise milegi tujhe?

U to both :- dekho jaise hi hamara band hit hoga to jahaan sari ladkiya hamare piche pagal ho jayengi. Wahi kisi achchi si ladki se main shadi kar lunga

B to U :- beta din me khuli aankhon se aise sapne nhi dekha karte hai. din k sapne kabhi pure nhi hote hai.

U to B :- tumhe to di mil gyi. Iss samrat k piche ho hamesha ladkiya padi rehti hai aur yeh mayank isse to pariyo me bhi interest nhi hai. main hi to reh gya hu

D to U :- dodo. Tum aise hi chup hoge ya mujhe kuch kehne ki zarurat hai.

(uday chup ho jata hai )

B to M :- mayank purposal achcha hai per itni jaldi female singer layenge kaha se. uss show k liye female singer ka hona band me complusary hai.

M to all :- yahi to main soch rha hu. K yeh hoga kaise

M to S :- tum itni ladkiyo k sath rehte ho koi to achcha gati hogi.

S to M :- sab achcha khati hai gati koi nhi hai. per sabko lagta hai k wo hamare band me aane layak hai. un me se koi bhi nhi hai.

M to all :- ab to kuch karna hi hoga. Warna band ka future kharab ho jayega. Itni achchi opportunity hum log miss nhi kar sakte. Hum sab mil kar kuch sochte hai tabhi kuch hoga.

(achanak se gunjan ko kuch yaad aata hai aur wo mayank ko batati hai )

G to M :- mayank bhul gye na. Railway station jaaana tha

M to G :- oh no gunjan. Agar maa ko pta chala to hum dono ki khair  nhi hai

S to both :- kya hua bhai. Aisa kya ho gya. Aur kaun aa rha hai

M to S :- aa rha nhi hai rhi hai. mom ki friend ki friend ki beti. Aur hume usse lene station jaana tha. Maa ne pehle hi kaha tha practice me yeh kaam mat bhul jaana.

S to M :- cool down mayank. Meri gadi leke jao jaldi pahuchoge. Aur waise bhi Indian railway hai train time se nhi hogi

M to S :- thanx samrat. Kash aisa hi ho

M to G :- tum aa rhi ho

S to M :- isse kaha le ja rhe ho. Yeh yahi rahegi hamare sath. Warna tumhara ghar kaun dekhega.

M to G :- yeh bhi thik hai tum ghar per raho. Main jaldi aata hu

G to M :- thik hai. aap jaldi jao.

(mayank ghar se to nikal jaata hai per jise lene jaa rha hai uski tasveer le jaana bhul jaata hai aur aur mayank ne pehle se tasveer nhi dekhi hoti hai gunjan ko jaise hi tasveer k bare me yaad aata hai waise hi wo mayank k piche jaati hai per samrat usse rok deta hai)

G :- arre mayank to tasveer lejana hi bhul gya. Ab wo usse pehchanege kaise

S :- tasveer hi to nhi hai. mayank handle kar lena

D to G :- haan dear. Mayank itna to handle kar hi sakta hai

G to both :- mayank handle to kar lega per tum logo ko to pta hai na mayank aur ladki ka ek sath hona khatre se khali nhi hai. aur wo maa ki fav friend ki beti hai. kuch gadbad huyi to achcha nhi hoga.

S to G :- aisa kuch nhi hoga. Tum tension na lo.

G to S :- just hope.

(on the other hand mayank railway sation pahuchta hai. train bhi ussi whqt aayi huyi hoti hai. mayank conuter per pta karke station ki taraf badta hai tabhi wo kisi ladki se takra jaata hai)

G : dekh kar nhi chal sakte kya

M :- sorry. Maine dekha nhi tha

G :- wahi to keh rhi hu. Agar dekh kar chalte to takrate nhi

M :- main jaan bujh kar aapse nahi takraya hu.

G :- by god. Jan bujh kar takraye ho ya anjane me. Per takraye to ho na

M (with anger ) :- maine ek baar apse sorry kaha na. Apko samjh me nhi aata kya

G :- dekho yeh gussa kisi aur ko dikhana. Nupur bhushan hai naam mera. Main kisi se darti nhi hu

M :- to aap hai nupur bhushan.

N :- haan koi problem hai kya. Main nupur bhushan nhi ho sakti kya

M :- Main aap hi ko lene aaya hu aur jo main yahaan takraya hu aapse wo isliye k mujhe lga k aap kahi kisi ko na dekh kar station per rone na lag jaye

N :- by god. Main kyun rou roye mere dushman. Aur jab mujhe lene aaye ho to chalo ab main to mil gyi na tumhe. Ab kiska intzaar kar rhe ho

M to himself :- yeh bhi sahi hai ab mujhe kiska intzaar hai.

M to N :- haan chalo.

(dono ghar ki aur chal dete hai )

 

 

TO BE CONTINUED ...

 

 Index


PART 1 - PG 1

PART 2 - PG 3

PART 3 - PG 5

PART 4 - PG 7

PART 5 - PG 9

PART 6 - PG 11

PART 7 - PG 12

PART 8 - PG 14

PART 9 - PG 16

PART 10 - PG 18

PART 11 - PG 19

PART 12 - PG 22

PART 13 - PG 24

PART 14 - PG 26

PART 15 - PG 29

PART 16 - PG 31

PART 17 - PG 34

PART 18 - PG 36

PART 19 - PG 39

PART 20 - PG 42

PART 21 - PG 44

PART 22 - PG 46

PART 23 - PG 48

PART 24 - PG 50

PART 25 - PG 55


PART 26 - PG 57

PART 27 - PG  59

PART 28 - PG 60

PART 29 - PG 62

PART 30 - PG65

PART 31 - PG 67

PART 32 - PG 69

PART 33 - PG 72

PART 34 - PG 75

PART  35 - PG  77

 PART 36 - PG 81

PART 37 - PG 83

PART 38 - PG 85

PART 39 - PG 89

PART 40 - PG 92

PART 41 - PG 92

PART 42 - PG 93

PART 43 - PG 94

 PART 44 - PG 95 (LAST PART)

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