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Dilwale Dulhania Le Jayenge: update pt4/p

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Posted: 15 years ago
Okay guys, I in my spare time can't stop thinking about bidaai and possible scenarios, as i suspect many  people on this forum also do. Anyway, I finally decided to put one down on paper (sort of, you know what I mean), but i've been really intimidated to put it up since the level of the fanfics on this forum are so high and i'm not usually that creative.
So, i started writing something (a great way of procrastinating by the way) and it ran a little long but once i started i couldn't stop. Anyway, if i get some positive feedback i might continue it, otherwise please just consider it a one off.
Here goes, and guys, please be gentle with your commentsπŸ˜•πŸ˜Š
P.S forgive the horrific hindi but i know what it's supposed to sound like in my head, i just have trouble spelling it out!πŸ˜†
 
 

Dilwale Dulhania Le Jayenge:

        
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Ranvir apne office mein baita tha. Voh apni ek file ko parne ki koshish kar raha tha par uska kam mein man nahi lag raha tha. Voh sirf Ragini ke bare mein soch raha tha. Ab jab Vinu ji ke sir se fraud ka ilzam hat gaya tha toh Ragini ki engagement paki ho gayi thi. Kuch hi dinno mein voh kisi aur ki mangetar hone jaa rahi thi aur yeh baat Ranvir ko andar hi andar se khaye jaa rahi thi.

 

Voh apne khayalon mein itna dooba hua tha ke usne notice hi nahi kya jab uske office mein uska ek employee aya. Usne Ranvir ko poocha 'kya hua sir, aap kis soch mein par gaya'

Ranvir chaunk gaya kisi ko apne office mein pa kar aur usne kaha, 'kuch nahin voh bas kisi project ko leke tension mein tha. Aap kahiyen, kya hua?'

 

'Voh, sir, naye project ke kuch engineer aap se milne aaye hai. Aap ki unke saath meeting thi'

 

Ranvir ne kaha 'Han, aap unhe conference room mein bitaayien, mein abhi atha hoon.'

 

Ranvir jab conference room mein gaya toh vaha engineer unka intazaar kar rahe the. Vaha main

engineer Shishir tha, Ragini ka hone vala mangetar, lekin Ranvir is baat se anjaan tha. Voh aage bara aur usne Ranvir se haath milaya.

Ranvir ne phir sab ki taraf dekh kar kaha

'Hello everyone, mera naam Ranvir Rajvansh hai aur mein hi is project ko manage kar raha hoon. Isilye maine soncha ke aap sab ko yaha bula kar aap se miloon. Hum ab bahut der ek saath kam karne vaale hain isilye agar aap ke man mein koi bhi sawal hon toh mujhse be jhijhak pooch lijye ga.'

 

Meeting khatam hone ke baad sab ek saath baat kar rahe the. Ranvir, Shishir se baatein kar raha tha. Shishir aur Ranvir ke bahut se interests milte the aur Ranvir ko bahut acha laga Shishir se baat karke.

Ranvir Shishir se pooch raha tha 'Toh aap ki shaadi ho rahi hai? Yeh toh bahut achi baat hai. Aap jise pyar karte ho, us insaan ke saath agar aap ka jeevan bhar ka rishta joorne ja raha ho tho isse aur khushi ki baat kya ho sakti hai.'

 

Ranvir ko achanak Ragini ki yaad aagayein aur voh mayoos ho gaya.

Shishir ne yeh dekh kar Ranvir se poocha 'Kya hua sir, aap itne sad kyun ho gaye?'

 

Ranvir apne khayalon se bahar aya aur usne kaha 'kuch nahin, bas aise hi kisi ki yaad aagayi. Toh kab hai aap ki shaadi?'

 

Shishir ne muskurate huye kaha 'Sir, abhi tho engagement bhi nahin huin aur aap shaadi ki taariq pooch rahein hai!'

 

Ranvir haasne laga 'Aacha toh bataayein ke engagement kab hai'

 

'Purson hai sir, aur sach boloon toh tab tak ek, ek pal kaatna mushkil ho raha hai. Mujhse yeh intazaar nahin ho raha hai.'

 

Ranvir phir se haasa aur usne kaha 'Aap tab tak apni hone waali mangetar ke meethe meethe khuwab dhekiye, waqt kab nikal jaaye ga aap ko pata bhi nahi chalega'

 

Ranvir koh phir se Ragini ki yaad aagaye, jab voh Delhi mein Anamika se milne ke liye taras raha ta aur Sadhna bhabhi ne usse yahin kaha tha.

 

Shishir ne Ranvir ko apne khayalon mein se nikala yeh kehekar ' Sir, main jaanta hoon ke hum abhi abhi mile hai, lekin phir bhi mujhe bahut khushi hogi agar aap meri engagement mein aaye toh. Aise mein humari jaan pehchan bhi bar jaayegi aur mera manna yeh hai ke isse kam bhi zyaada acha hota hai.'

 

Ranvir ne bhi socha, ke ab usse bhi aur dost banane chahiye aur apna man lagane ke liye bahar jana chahiye thake voh Ragini ke bare mein itna na soncha.

 

'Shishir ji, apne mujhe apni engagement mein boolake apna pan jathayan hai. Main bhala na kaise kar sakta hoon? Aap bataayien ke engaement kahan hai, main vaha paunch jayoonga.'

 

'Sir, engagement mere ghar par ho rahin hai. Main janta hoon ke aam thor par engagement ladkivalon ke yaha hothi hai, lekin meri maa ki icha thi ki engagement humare ghar ho. Uska manna yeh hai, ke agar ladkivale shaadi ki saari zimedari utha the hai toh ladkevalon ka farz banta hai ke voh sagaayi ki zimadari uthaye.'

 

Ranvir ne muskurakar kaha ' Achi philosophy hai. Toh main aap se purson milta hoon.'

 

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Engagement ke din Sadhna aur Alekh, Rajvansh house mein tayar ho rahe the.

'Ache se tayar hona dost, aaj tumhari behen ki engagement hai na.'

 

'Ha Alekhji, aaj jiji ki zindagi ka bahut hi bara din hai, lekin...'

Sadhna Alekh ke kapre nikal rahi thi ki achanak sonch mein par gayi. Alekh pas aaya aur uske shoulder koh poke kiya.

'Kya hua dost, tum achanak chup kyun ho gayi? Kya sonch rahi ho?

Sadhna ne Alekh ki taraf dekha aur kaha

'Kuch nahin Alekhji, bas yahin sonch rahi thi, ki jaha, jiji ki zindagi sambalne ki, aur Mamiji ka sapna pure hone ki khushi hai, vaha dukh bhi hai, is baat ka ke ab Ranvirji aur jiji kabhi ek nahin ho sakte.'

Alekh bhi achanak sad ho gaya. 'Ha tum theek kai rahi ho dost. Ranvir bhi aaj bahut sad lag raha tha. Aur tumhari jiji bhi aaj kitni sad hogi haina?'

Sadhna ne Alekh ke shoulder par haath rakha usse hosla dene ke liye.

Tab hi vaha Ranvir aaya. Usne function par jaane ke kapre paye huen the lekin uske chehre pe ek udasi si thi.

Sadhna ne poocha 'kya hua Ranvirji, aap itne tayar hoke kaha ja rahe hai?'

Sadhna ke man mein achanak ek daar aaya ke kahin Ranvirji, jiji ki engagement par jaane ki toh nahin sonch rahein.

'Voh bhabhi, mere naye project ka head engineer ki aaj engagement hai. Usne mujhe invite kiya toh maine soncha ke ab mujhe bhi bahar jaana chahiye, logon se milna chahiye. Shayad mein bithi hooyin baaton se bahar nikal sakoon.'

Voh chup ho gaya aur Sadhna samajh gayi ke voh Ragini ki baat kar raha tha.

Sadhna koh pata nahin lag raha tha ke voh Ranvir se kya kahein. Alekh un dono ko dekhe ja raha tha, kabhi Sadhna ko toh kabhi Ranvir ko, phir usne kaha 'Yeh toh bahut achi baat hai, ke tum bahar jaa rahein ho. Pata hai, hum bhi aaj bahar ja rahein hai, aaj na, dost ki jiji ki bhi...' Alekh achanak se chup ho gaya, usse yaad ayya ke usse Ranvir se yeh sab baatein nahin karni chahiyen. Sadhna bhi Alekh ki taraf dekh rahi thi.

Thodi der ke liye sab chup the, phir Ranvir ne kaha, 'Acha bhabhi, aap log tayar ho jaye hum sab saath niklenge' Yeh kehkar voh vaha se chala gaya.

 

Sadhna, Alekh aur Ranvir sab tayar hoke niche aarahe the. Voh bahar ki taraf ja rahe the ke peeche se Vasu ne avaaz di. Unhone murke dekha toh Vasu unke peeche hi kari thi.

Sadhna kabra si gayi, ke kahi mummyji usse Ragini ke engagement par jane se rok na de aur Alekh bhi uncomfortable ho raha tha, lekin Vasu toh sirf Ravir ko dekh rahi thi. Voh sochne lagi ke kahi Ranvir bhi Ragini ke engaement par toh nahi jaa raha. Voh Ranvir se kuch puche, is se pehle Sadhna ne kaha 'Voh mummyji, main aur Alekhji, mamaji ke yaha ja rahe the, aaj jiji ki...' voh Ranvir ko dekh kar chup ho gayi.

Ranvir toh Vasu ki taraf dekh nahin raha tha, voh neeche dekh raha tha. Vasu ne phir poocha 'Aur Ranvir, tum kaha jaa rahe ho?'

Ranvir ne apne maa ki taraf dekha aur bare hi cold andaaz se kaha 'Ek dost ki engagement par, aap phikir mat kijiye main jald hi ajaoonga.'

Phir usne Sadhna ki taraf dekha aur kaha, 'Bhabhi main chalta hoon, mujhe dher ho rahin hai.'

Yeh kehkar voh bina Vasu ko dekhe chalagaya. Sadhna Vasu ko dekh rahi thi, itna sab kush hone ke bad bhi usse bura lag raha tha ke maa aur bete mein yeh daraar aagayi thi. Voh yeh bhi jaanti thi ke mummyji ko kis baat ki phikir thi. Usne phir kaha 'Aap phikir mat kijiye mummyji, Ranvirji humare saath nahi chal rahe.'

Sadhna kuch aur kehna cha rahi thi lekin Alekh ne usse rokh dia. Alekh Vasu ko gusse se ghoor raha tha. Voh kehne laga 'Chalo dost, ab hume bhi to der ho rahi hai. Chalo chalo.'

Usne Sadhna ka haath pakra aur darwaze ki taraf chalne laga. Sadhna ne murke Vasu ko dekha toh Vasu ke aakhon mein asoo the aur Sadhna bhi Alekh ki vaje se kuch kai nahi saki. Jab Sadhna aur Alekh chale gaya toh Vasu kuch der waha kari rahi. Phir usne apne asoo ponche aur chup chap vaha se apne kamre mein chali gayi.

 

Ranvir raste mein sirf aur sirf Ragini ke bare mein sonch raha tha. Yeh jaante huen ke voh issi waqt, kisi aur ki ho rahi hai Ranvir phir bhi usse apne khayalon mein se nahi nikal paya. Voh Ragini ki har choti se choti baat yaad kar raha tha, uski muskurahat, uski sharmili andaaz, voh har pal jo usne Ranvir ke saath bithayan jab voh jaanta hi nahin tha ke Ragini uski Anamika hai.

 

Ranvir Shishir ke ghar ponch gaya aur bahar charo taraf ujala tha. Shishir ke family ne tayari mein koi kasar nahin chori thi sab taraf bas lights, phool aur diye nazar aarahe the. Voh door ki taraf gaya toh dekha ke door khula hai aur kaafi log already aagaye the, bahut hi khushi ka mahol tha, lekin phir bhi voh khushi Ranvir ke dil tak nahi ponch rahi thi.

Andar Shishir kuch guests ke saath baatein kar raha tha jab usne Ranvir ko dekha aur dekh kar bahut khush hua. 'Are sir, aap aagaye, bahut acha laga'

Ranvir ne smile kiya aur kaha 'Main aa toh gaya, lekin agar tum mujhe sir hi kehte rahoge toh main vapas bhi chala jaoonga. Hum office mein nahin hai, aap mujhe mere naam se bula sakte ho.'

Shishir ne bhi muskuraya aur kaha 'Are, aap abhi aaye hai aur jaane ki baat kar rahe hai. Theek hai, main aap ko Ranvir kahke bulaoonga, khush?'

Phir Shishir ne apna haath Ranvir ke shoulder par rakha aur usse andar lejane laga

'Vaise bhi, main abhi aap ko jaane nahin de sakta, aap ko kisi se milana hai'

 

Yaha Shishir Ranvir ko andar le ja raha tha toh vaha peeche se darwaze par Sadhna aur Alekh bhi aagaye the. Alekh ko saari sajavat dekh kar bahut khushi ho rahi thi, 'Kitna acha hai na sab kuch dost? Very colourful, i like it, i like it!'

Sadhna ne Alekhji ko dekha aur muskurane lagi unke innocence ko dekhkar, 'Ha Alekhji, sab bahut sunder hai, abh ander chale, main jiji se milna chahthi hoon, aur aap bhi unhe yeh phool dena chahthe na?'

'Ha dost, tum theek kai rahi ho, chalo.'

 

Yaha Shishir abhi bhi Ranvir ke saath tha, uski nazaare kisi ko doond rahi thi.

'Kya hua Shishirji, aap kisse doond rahe hai?'

'Voh main... Ranvirji... usse doond raha tha!'

Achanak Shishir ki nazar ek ladki par aayi aur voh ussi ki taraf ishara kar raha tha. Uski back Shishir aur Ranvir ki taraf thi aur voh kisi se baathein kar rahi thi. Uske lambe baal khule the aur usne pink colour ka lehnga paya tha. Shishir Ranvir ko leker uski taraf gaya. Vaha Sadhna aur Alekh bhi aaye aur Ranvir ko Shishir ke saath dekh kar Sadhna ek dam chaunk gayi. Uske kuch kehne ya karne se pehle Shishir us ladki ke paas paunch gaya tha. Shishir ne uske shoulder par haath rakha aur voh ladki ghoomne lagi Shishir ko dekhne ke liye. Phir Shishir ne kaha, 'Ranvrji inse milye, yeh hai meri mangetar Ragini Sharma.'

 

Ragini aur Ranvir ki nazare mili. Aise laga jaise waqt hi dham gaya ho aur duniya mein sirf voh dono hi the. Dono itne hairan the ek dooje ko vaha paakar aur unke bheech kari thi Sadhna jiske samajh me kuch nahin aa raha tha.

 
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Posted: 15 years ago
As soon as she comes to the most interesting part she ends it. Well atleast in one way ur better than the creators atleast u let them meet.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† Now u better write the next part or else.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by: just_in

As soon as she comes to the most interesting part she ends it. Well atleast in one way ur better than the creators atleast u let them meet.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† Now u better write the next part or else.

 
Yeah sorry about that! It was just getting so long and I wanted to spend some time on the cute future scenes of Ragvir and even put in some cute Salekh onesπŸ˜³πŸ˜†
I just hope other people liked it and they're just silent readers otherwise i'll have to put up the next part just for youπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
Is this a fan fiction and are gonna complete it wud read it in a while and edit...Then we can have a name t this fan fiction!!

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Read it, really nyc.... but what happens in actual show needs to be seen better write the next part am curious!!

Luv,

Shagun
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Posted: 15 years ago
LOVED IT extremely cuteπŸ‘πŸ‘.........hope the creatives come up with some exciting scenes like dis
continue soon waiting for the next part dear......


*~VASUNDHARA~*

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Posted: 15 years ago

tht awsome!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ

its supper cool!

its so realistic.i wish it would happen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111

do continue!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Its beautifully written. The ending made me very very excited so pls continue soon 😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
ur a very creative person well done
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Posted: 15 years ago
really well written..  πŸ‘ i enjoyed reading it and how i wish that happened in the actual serial..
 
Please continue soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
I haven't read the whole part...!!! But it is FANTASTIC...!!! Great work...!!! Make it a FF...!!! You are MashAllah creative..!!! πŸ‘