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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey guys this is my first Fan Fic, tell me what you all think of it. I am just gonna post the chracter sketch as of now, but will start on the plot later its 3am and i'm sick and i need to sleep. Sorry ahead of time for any mistakes, i'll hopefully fx it soon. let me know if you notice something.

Takes place in California. In the Bay Area.

Characters are born and raised in America Unless otherwise noted.

 about a girl who has liked this one guy for like 7 years he happens to be the girls cousins really good friend and a family friend but he never really thought of her as someone he could like but looked at her like his friends cousin.. As soon as she thinks shes over him he comes back into her life and then she's likes him again. and they may or may not end up together is the basic love story part, but there are a lotta details in the story other than her "love story"

Riddhima: In 2008 she is 24 years old and is on the road to become a successful doctor a Cardiologist with a minor degree in Oncology. She is really nice, loving, caring, and totally selfless, giving. She is cute and can look really pretty when she decides to give herself some time. She has dark brown eyes which hold lot in them and are very hard to read, .She is very helpful.She stands up for what she believes in-but in her own style. She is very motherly, and very responsible (which has always anonoyed Kumkum and Raj because she "sucks the fun out of everyting") She is smart but wroks hard for everything she has. She appreciates everything around her. Popular for al the things hse has done in life school orginizations, sports, she is an all rounder. She is one of the best friends anyone can ever have, once she thinks of you as a friend she will do whatever she can to help you. She has trust issues, she doesn't tell anyone too much about herself. The only one who knows most of her secrets is Muskaan.She is down to earth and very family oriented. Not to forget she's Daddy's little girl. She's 5' 1"

Arman: In 2008 he is 26 years old. Is smart owns a few bussinesses. Sweet, charmig, handsome. He is rich and quite spoiled, but he is still very down to earth. He has really really nice eyes they are big and hazel colored. He is very nice, even though he has had many girlfriends,( but then again if you're rich and look like a hero i guess you get loads of girlfriends) He's a typical guy and loves hanging out with his friends. He's 6' 1"

Muskaan: In 2008 she is 24 as well. Her and Ridz have been friends for a long time they meet back when they were in the 9th grade. They both volunteered at a hospital together and became great friends over the next few years. They both went to different schools and never hung out other then when working together. Yet they were always really close, they would talk to eachother online and throgh text and share all their sorrows and happiness with eachother. They were eachothers support, and loved eachother a lot. After Ridz started medical school Muskaan finally decided to finish her nursing course she left in the middle due to some problems. But they soon joined the same hospital as interns (in different areas but in the same hospital)...and now are great at what they do in the hospital =)...they have been close since the 10th grade. She is 5' 6" Has a fair complection. Light brown eyes.

Kumkum: Is 25 years old in 2008. Is a well off lawyer. Ridz's cousin and "best friend". The two of them grew up together and lived together for the first 4 years of Ridz life, and then Ridz moved down the street. They lived in the same neighborhood til Kumkum moved about 10 mins away. Then Ridz moved and they were 5 mins away (driving distance). They were really good friends until something happened one day and they were no longer inseperable. They both still loved eachother but Kumkum no longer told Ridz anything really about herself, and seeing that Ridz Decided to do the same. Don't get me wrong Kumkum still loved Ridz, but was no longer able to tel her much about herself. This was back when they were 11, and 10. But they were still always together. She is very pretty. She has light brown eyes. She loves her family friend Sumit, but never expresses it. She actually isn' great at expressing love of any kind. She is 1/2 white because of which her features mixed made her light and her featured prominent and like her. She is 5' 6"

Raj: Ridz younger brother is 22 in 2008. He is on his way to become an engineer. He is annoying to her like all brothers and loves making her life miserable, but inside he loves her a lot. He is very protective of his sister, he never has let anything or anyone hurt her. Even though he and Kumkum always make fun of her and annoy her all the time. They don't think that hurts her. He is really really super naturally smart, but- he is lazy. He is so charming, and somehow gets around to everything and gets his way. He is mom's Shehzada. He is 6' 1"

Mom: She is very sweet, and always wants the best for her kids. She expects a lot and that gets really annoying at times. She raised her kids really well. And has done a lot for them.

Dad: Hard working, caring sweet. Has worked day and night to make sure his kids have what they need to move on in life so they don't have to struggle. Owns a few restaurants.

Anjali: In 2008 she is 17 years old, in high school. Ridz younger sister. She is a "fashion ki mari" She loves herself and is kinda self-centered unlike her brother and sister. She is sweet, but not like Ridz or Raj. She is the different one, she's mom's little baby. She is up to play any kinda sport. She is very skinny. She is 5' 6". She is miss popular, but in a good way. She has a good rep, and thats cause of her sibblings, she kinda has a lot to live up too.

Kripa: In 2008 she is 24 years old. She is Ridz school best friend. They have been friends since the 7th grade. They went to different universities. They talk to eachother all the time. Kripa is also very family oriented like Ridz. Both of their families see eachother and talk a lot because they have gotten close over the years, due to their kids friendship. She is a lawyer as well.

Riya: In 2008 she is also 24 years old. She is Ridz and Krips friend from 9th grade. She is very sweet, loving and caring. Ridz family loves her to pieces. She went to the same high school and university as Ridz. She is 5' 8". She is a hard working pediatrition. She is a very good friend and very encouraging. She is pessimistic towards herself, but always encouraging when it comes to others. But she has a heart thats can hold a lot in it.

Sumit: 29 years old. Comes from a well off family, but works hard anyways. He loves Kumkum, and his family loves her too. They are family friends with Kumkum's family. He owns a bank. He thinks about Kumkum and only kumkum, but is focused when it comes to work. He has told Kumkum he wants to marry her but she wants him to tell his dad to bring the rishta. (Its around the corner ๐Ÿ˜‰) *hehehe* but yes, they are some what of an item. They both love eachother but don't ever express it. A very shy and cute couple) 5' 10". fair complection, drk brn eyes.
 
Karan: 27 years old. Arman's cousin. Riddhima's friend. Nice sweet, Engineer. Family oriented. Fun to be around. Knew how to make ppl feel better in seconds. 5' 11". Not dark, but a nice tan color. Dark eyes.
 
Rohit: 28 years old Riya's boyfriend, to be husband soon. Has a car shop. Sells, repairs, everything and anything to do with cars he is in on it.
 
Angad: 27 years old. Kripa's "Best guy friend" They have strong feelings for eachother but don't know they love eachother...yet๐Ÿ˜‰. A sweetheart. Good friends with Riya and Riddhima. Nice, fun, charmin. Lawyer. Suits his personality. A great singer. 6' 0" Fair complection. Dark eyes.
Prem: A 26 year old Arcitect. Works for this great company that is owned by someone we may know. Is enggaged...to who?..you'll see. 5' 10" Tan complection brown eyes.
 
Rahul: Riddhima's co-worker...27 years old. Nice. Funny. Loves pulling his friends legs. Very profssional when it comes to work. A really good Oncologist. (cancer specialist). Great guy.
Is 5' 9" Blueish eyes. Light complection.
 
Heer: A 25 year old working at the law firm Kripa and Angad work at. Is enggaed to Prem?..maybe, maybe not. Read to find out... 5'7" Fair complection. Dark eyes
 
Naina: 28 years old. Karan's sister, Arman's cousin, all lived in the same house always, til she got married and left. 5' 7". has 2 kids. Sapna and Mayank. Light brwn eyes.
 
Sapna: 3 years old, Nainas daughter.
 
Mayank: 2 years old. Naina's 2 year old son.
 
Edited by Sabah - 14 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
wow sabah didi
i loved it sooooooooooooo much
plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
and remember i'm the first one u PM LOL
Posted: 15 years ago
OMG wow sweety..
ur FF rockss....loved it a lott...tooo gud..!!!..
plz cntinue soon...and ya do PM me..!!!!..
Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by swansea


wow sabah didi
i loved it sooooooooooooo much
plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
and remember i'm the first one u PM LOL
 
LOL...yes i remember! will do. but its gonna be a little while i'm. its 4:37am over here...but i'll post in hopefully sometime this weekend.
Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by ksdbstjodi


OMG wow sweety..
ur FF rockss....loved it a lott...tooo gud..!!!..
plz cntinue soon...and ya do PM me..!!!!..
 
No prob will do. I'm glad you like it so far. ๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 15 years ago
wow yaar very nice ff
plz continue soon...........
pm me when u will update 1st part
Posted: 15 years ago

Awwww Sana di! I am so Upset now! U didn't tell me that u started a FF๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Chill Chill! Just kidding๐Ÿ˜†..
 
Wow! Superb Concept di๐Ÿ˜‰!! Quite unique๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Im so happy that u started a FF๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜†
 
Continue soon & U have to PM me hun!!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
 
-Kanika๐Ÿ˜ณ
Posted: 15 years ago
plz p mme wen u continue its awesome..........
Posted: 15 years ago
great concept and charachter sketch
sounds really intresting
Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by cute_unknown_fr


wow yaar very nice ff
plz continue soon...........
pm me when u will update 1st part
 
For sure. Will do. thanks.

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