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@allseasonrain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Have nothing to say... truely touched my heart

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

There was some fantastically brilliant imagery in this!! Painful imagery is the toughest to write!

It sent an acute buzz passing through my head to imagine such great sorrow... Bravo!!

Yes it is the perspective of the other side of the coin. Of what Arohi would've said to Rahul if he had survived...

And "if" the most painful word.

Loved it Nidha...

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya
Very, very Well written.
Completely understandable. <3

Thank you😊

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: NonComposMentis
Firstly, the line mentioning me...gosh! It made me feel as if I'm some kind of royalty! :O
Which I'm not...
And secondly, Nidha, you're mad.
Calling this "crappy", you're absolutely, completely, honking mad!
Oh! Ohh!! Ohhh!!!
This was even better than Need You Now!
Indeed, you excel at penning down emotions.
And this, whoa, this was one brilliant piece of writing!
I read it as a general fic..and not on a specific couple..because truly, it could be anyone!
The ones left behind..are always..always the ones in more pain than the ones who have gone...
Because the ones who have gone..they're gone..they feel nothing..but the people they leave in their wake...they are the ones who truly suffer.
They suffer from the shock, the sadness, the anger, the turmoil..the emptiness...
It was painful, it touched my heart.
Some memories resurfaced, and they brought tears to my eyes.
And yet, I loved it.
Because there is pleasure in pain.
And the pain makes me feel alive.
Thank you so much for the PM, Nidha!
🤗
Lots of love,
Mugs.

P.S: Could you, possibly, if and when you have time, of course, write something on ViChi? A romantic piece, maybe?

You may not be a royalty but you are a friend and friends merit good treatment right?

I think we both know why we keep degrading our own works

😆

Even better in itself is a great compliment.

I am glad to see that people share my feelings.

I know that judging someone long gone is bad , but doesn't the pain of those left behind matter?

Why should they suffer? Weren't they loving or loyal enough? What was their fault?

I am sorry I made you cry , didn't mean to hurt anyone.

I just wanted this out of me.

Because no matter what , the ones left behind suffer a lot.

Pain is both boon and bane , it tells us we are alive yet almost kills us too.

As for ViChi , ones I get a good idea for them , I will In Sha Allah write on them.

Love you too dear.

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: pretty.doll
what a climax...superb!!! i wanted it to b like dis...nd thn a sequal of ashiqui 2

Thank you.

Me too😊

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: allseasonrain
Have nothing to say... truely touched my heart

Thanx , that is a great compliment😊

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: CoffeeAddict
There was some fantastically brilliant imagery in this!! Painful imagery is the toughest to write!

It sent an acute buzz passing through my head to imagine such great sorrow... Bravo!!

Yes it is the perspective of the other side of the coin. Of what Arohi would've said to Rahul if he had survived...

And "if" the most painful word.

Loved it Nidha...

Thanx Pree😊

Coming from a good writer like you that means a lot.

The sorrow of having to know that you may or you have lost someone , it's too great.

This is what Arohi should have done if Rahul came back alive.

If of course.

Thank you once again

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Mugdhaa

@NonComposMentis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

No, no need to say sorry about the tears, Nidha.

those tears have become a very important part of me...and shedding them..only makes it better..so no worries. :)

Hoping and waiting for the ViChi OS then! ;)

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tenzing

@tenzingchoden

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

nice work as this is the first work i read from u i loved it u r one of the best writer and by reading ur work i think i have a long way to go as a writer

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: NonComposMentis
No, no need to say sorry about the tears, Nidha.
those tears have become a very important part of me...and shedding them..only makes it better..so no worries. :)
Hoping and waiting for the ViChi OS then! ;)

Yeah crying does make us feel better.

After all no one promised us life would be fair.

In Sha Allah , I will give you one soon.

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