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Posted: 12 years ago
YES! :P PLEASEEE <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
kay, will read tonight! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adrienna

hey!!! i just read the story in one go y'day n i though m hvn trouble keeping up with all the spy jargon...this story is awesome👏👏

i was so glad you updated it today😃 best lines:
I swear to god, I will never let anyone kill him.
I want to kill him myself.🤣
"It's just not as good at detecting lies as I am at telling them."😎

Waiting eagerly for your next update...plz PM me😃





Thank you for reading it! h god, all that covert thingy in one go? 🤣
Thank you :D Spies forever 😎
Haha! Well, I wanted to add some humor.

And Mr. Saxena is just...gorgeous! 😆

Thanks you, will update ASAP. Add Prachi_TBP for PM =)
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Originally posted by: Mais

kay, will read tonight! :D

Mwah! I lovee you <3
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 0-Sata_rupa-0

Yo...I am back with my comment 😆
And tum mujhe update do mei tumhe comment dungi 🤣
Update was SUPERB... 👏
"Scientifically intelligent boys use their intelligence to make sure nobody figures how intelligent they are(according to kiya specially those boys with sexy arms)"
OMG kiya's analysis about boys is awesome 🤣 🤣
And yes it is "AYUSH"
Really excited for the next part...
And i am loveing your updating speed...
It is just fab 👏
Update soon... 😆
Love ya <3 <3 <3


Welcome back! 😆
Thank you!! Kiya's analysis are about boy's arms! 🤣 That was Neesha's analysis! :P
Thank you so much! I am trying to update ASAP! =D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shona_Mayur

I loved this part soo much!! 😃

Especially the one about her wanting to kill him. That line cracked me up.
I am loving Ayush's character a lot. Especially the way Ayush and Neesha interact. It's witty and entertaining. Esp. her thoughts!
And for some reason, I really like the ending for all of your parts. I know you leave us at a cliff hanger but even that is an art that you have to do it right. You have just right tension that adds to the curiosity.
Coming to the question asked, wasn't her first mission to evade the person who's tailing her. Meaning to be completely invisible, without being followed, and reach at the assigned place by Mr. Saxena? I am not too sure though. lol 😆


Thank you :D Lol! She won't kill him--maybe! 🤣
They are spies--so they HAVE to be witty! If they can't answer each other with challenges, they don't deserve each other! Well, not that am implying they do deserve each other. 😆 You never know, Kartik might just turn into Prince Charming! 🤣 I mean, Ayush is more like Prince Harming! 🤣

Oh, I am blessed! FOr the first time someone complimented me about a cliffhanger! It's not an art, it's a cunning desire! 😆

Plus, wrong answer. He first covert mission with Mr. Saxena was to lose the tails. I never mentioned him in my question. :) Better luck next timeee! :P
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: FeistySoul

Neesha is being outsmarted at every turn.
And that can be a lot frustrating. Lol.
Oh! And Ayush is fab.
Good job Prachi.


Let's wait and watch if she can outsmart him
xD Thank you so much! And I am not an anti-feminist! 🤣 I will keep Neesha the best ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 1.

what is their uniform? tell me :p

uhum, liked it how you just jumped into things. explanation is full of SPY things matlab I will need a dictionary :p Panchi is so smart I mean...really smart ... well for me even Piddi is smart because I am that dumb. I liked the informal narrative of it all. characters are refreshing :D Saxena made me go DAFFA!!! ab it can mean daffa dhoor wala daffa bhi and da eff wala daffa bhi :p

saxena and Neesh's mother ka angle I like :D

first chapter, I approve of :D
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Originally posted by: Mais

chapter 1.

what is their uniform? tell me :p

uhum, liked it how you just jumped into things. explanation is full of SPY things matlab I will need a dictionary :p Panchi is so smart I mean...really smart ... well for me even Piddi is smart because I am that dumb. I liked the informal narrative of it all. characters are refreshing :D Saxena made me go DAFFA!!! ab it can mean daffa dhoor wala daffa bhi and da eff wala daffa bhi :p

saxena and Neesh's mother ka angle I like :D

first chapter, I approve of :D


Why, thank you. I am but astounded by your appreciation of my work.

Kamini! Its not that hard! I tried putting spy terms int he simplest forms, and even gave the definition for some! And poor Neesh is a teenager! I don't think she has time to grab a thesaurus and use formal words for you :P
Lol, you're smart alright! Stop underestimating yourself! *Glare*

YOU THE BLOODY MARDOOD! Daffa hoja! Mr Saxena is the hottest thing everrr!! ^.^ Dhoor hogi teri... =l

Lol, kind of forbidden angle, but I will give my good explanation for them. I mean, I am against such love, but her father ka koi ata pata nahi toh... =/
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Originally posted by: CutielovesChocs

So, first things first. Neesha's first CoveOps mission, in THIS FF was about reaching a particular place without being tailed. Did I get it right? 😃


Dude, of COURSE she wasn't okay. Not that she'd tell anyone, most of all, Ayush. Gah, I really think she should start being more receptive towards him. How she can resist herself when she's around him is WAYYY beyond me! 😆

'No, you're not, Princess. But you will be' - YES Ayush, she will be. Especially if you're around to make it happen! Iff you know what I mean! 😉

Aw, Nia's a cute name too. But I like Neeshu more. Hahah, I can't believe the level of similar thinking between Neesha's mom and Ayush. I see a bonding in the future? 😉 I agree 100% about the Cheesy Pizza thing. NEVER EVER should you waste it. EVER.

Oh wow. I love the description of that sareee. I want. I've always wanted a black and red saree with sequins. Haayyee. OOOh, just imagine the look on Ayush's face when he sees her in that! Drat my stupid over imaginative brain. Ufff. 😆 The way you portrayed her insecurities in such a subtle way was brilliant!

'Avoiding Ayush' seems to be on her almost every to-do list. Someone's growing on Neesha. 😆 Therefore, obviously it doesn't work the way she wants it to! 😆

Have I told you how much I LOVE the name Ayush? Well, I do. I LOVE it. I'm gonna name my kid Ayush! 😆 Oh ho Neeshu, haven't you heard of the third grade rule? If he likes you, he annoys you. It's as simple as that! 😉

'I swear to God, I will never let anyone kill him. I want to kill him myself' - 🤣 Sure Neesh, whatever helps you sleep at night!

'He had loosened his tie and his hair messed up perfectly. His blazer hung behind him on the chair, books covered the table and he leaned back with his hands on the table. "Hello, Princess."' - Holy shit! *swooons* ☺️ Ayush is So damn HOT. WHY does he have to be so damn hot?! It isn't fair! It isn't fair that he doesn't exist! *goes and cries in a corner*

Yes, we're sad, crying over a fictional character. DAMN you Prach! 😆

Scientifically, intelligent boys use their intelligence to make sure nobody figures how intelligent they are (according to Kiya, specially those boys with sexy arms.). - SAY WHAT NOW?! 🤣🤣

19.03 to 19.05 made me 🤣. What did they think? Study date included what exactly? 😉 Naughty naughtyyy! 😆

'Note to self: The use of "swell" seems to be either an international sarcastic term, or a regional slang. Check the database for more information.' - 🤣 Dammit, why must you make me laugh like I'm mental? That too in front of a million people!?! 😆

My Ayush is SMART TOO!!! 😳 Okay, I don't know how they figured out about the bugs, but WOAH. WOAH. It's so clever. They're SUPER trained. They're super-spies! I want Ayuuush! 😆 What the hell!? The good-bad thing!? What was that all about? Ayush, can you BE more enigmatic!?

I LOVE how Neesha connects everything with Ayush now. NO matter what the reason is.

'The piece of plastic in my hands looked cheap-- practically worthless--but like most things at the Royal Institute, there was a lot more to it than met the eye.' - Beautifully penned. Loved that line.


I also love how Ayush is her partner in almost every subject! 😆 And yes, this should be funnn!


Nike Prach, NIKE! 😆

Kudos woman! 😳


Replying to this AWESOMEEE comment now :D

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