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Posted: 13 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: dmgfanA1

wow its sooo good yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thnx a loaddss

very nice!!!!!!!!!!👍🏼 again thnx
i really liked what was going on ohh I am glad dat u lyked it
u should really do more😊 well I will
congrats on this yaar humari choti umar ko tum bohot roshan kar rahi ho!😉😳😆 karna chahiye...hum chotte hai toh kya hua hum bade kaam ke hai
well waiting for the next one thx for the pm im glad u did pm me n plz do pm me again...sure sure

ur friend
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: keshiya

it is awesome for a twelve year old to write

plz continue with ur os and do pm me
it's awesome once again👏


thnx so much dear...😃for reading n cmmnting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -bornalee-

nice one..loved it
do update nxt p[art soon :)


thnx dear...will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashvikluverrr

heyy it ws superb..do update soon..waiting for kisha to meet..!!
pm me when u update ur next chapter..


thnx so much dear...will pm u for sure😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx to everyone who read n cmmnted...u all made my day...I had 1 thing to say...plzz add me in ur buddy list who wants me to pm dem for any of my kisha os...coz I cant add😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahashrabdidash


thnx so much dear...😃for reading n cmmnting

ur welcome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx a ton😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: muzzy_sk

M likey me likey!..sry ina hurry ..will comment later..
RES! :D


UNRES

Awee...this was so sweet. Both in love with each other and incomplete without the other...
Loved the concept. They both turning actors and now in the same show. An intriguing one!!
It was a really nice one. Do write more and PM us... :)

-shreya and kanishtha.

thank u thank u soo much...will surely pm you both...n I am glad u lyked da concept... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Aanchal_

beautiful OS 👏👏

hey thnx so much...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2

da next day came….it was fyn morning wid soft breeze blowing….a ray of sunlight fell on her eyes….n made her wake up…..

panchi-"gud mrng…kiya,,,,wake up…."

kiya-"gud mrng"

panchi-"kiya now go n get ready or u'll be late for ur shooting…."

kiya-"ohh..my god…9 baaj gaye aur main ab tak so rahi hoon….wah kiya wah…aaj toh peheli din hain iss show ke shooting ke liye n u"re gonna be late…very good kiya…amazing"

panchi-"ab yahan baithe baithe dailouge marti rahogi ya tayaar bhi hogi"

kiya-"ya going"

here,

KD-abbe piddi ke bachhe….aur kitne tarike apnaun…tujhe uthane ke liye….piddi…uth ja mere pyaare"

piddi-"ruko na bhai….aur ek minute"

KD den had an idea…

"piddi….dekh bobby aayi hai tujhe milne ke liye…."

piddi got up startled…."bobby….kahan hai bobby…"

KD-"ohho….main jhoot bol rha tha…tujhe uthane ke liye"

piddi-"bhai…aap bhi na"

KD-"actually tumhare paas mere car ke keys they….toh wahi do mujhe….phir ache se so jana….bobby ko dream mein dekh ke"

piddi-"ye lo bhai….aur jao…ek min…."

he dragged KD 2 da kitchen….

"ye lo bhai…dahi….aaj ke liye aapka din acha rahega…"

n put da whole spoon into KD's moth….

KD-ok ok theek hai…ab main jaun.."

piddi-hmmm….

den KD reached da shooting venue….

sir-"ohh hi keshav…."

KD-"gud mrng sir….every one has come??"

sir-"no…pata nahi…who kahan rah gayi….where r u??"

den a car came from behind KD….

den she came out of da car n walked to her sir…but stood alittle farther as she sensed him….

"kya ye wahi hai….no kiya…aise nahi ho sakta she's not him…"

sir-"hey she has come….kiya he is ur co-star…."

den slowly KD turned n both their eyes met…..

a small smile filled with happiness appeared on both their faces….

kiya to herself-"aaj ye jo mujhe mil gaya hai….ab main usse jane nahi dungi…till I clear all da misunderstandings"

KD to himself-"main aaj mere chicklet ko paa gaya hoon….I'll let dis chance go away…."

dey were thinking dis wen dere was a call from sir's mobile….

den after da call….

sir-"so keshav dis is kiya gujral n kiya he is keashav desai…."

den dey lostly shaked dere hands….

sir-"well I am sorry….but da shooting will be 1 hour later as dere's sum problem wid da camera man….so sorry..really sorry"

kiya-"its ok sir"

den he left….

KD-"chicklet hi.."

kiya smiled-"hi stoneface…"n she was about to say something wen he interrupted

"kiya…kya plzz tum mere sath….kahin bahar jaa sakte ho…"

kiya-"ye kya mujhse aise baat kar raha hai….kya ye woh baat bhul gaya….its ok…but I'll clear everything between us"n she replied yes….

den dey got seated in KD's car n went off to a park….

den reached n started walking on da soft grass….but dere were no people around as it was jut 10:00 am…

kiya-"KD….I am sorry for dat incident but actually mein kunal….."

KD-"s-"just stop it kiya…..dont be guilty…..actually I am sorry….I dint know da truth….I am really sorry kiya for hurting u….for all da wrong things I thought of u….u did so much for me but I…"

den tears came off his eyes….

kiya wiped da tears…."Its ok KD….it was just a misunderstanding between us….but now dat its cleared I'm so happy….."

KD-"toh kya tumne mujhe maaf karliya??"

kiya-"haan KD….par tumhe itna fark pada mujhse ye sab clear karne ki….u cud also have left it after knowing da truth….coz u hated me"

KD-"no kiya…I dint hate u….I wanted 2 hurt u….but infact I…."he stopped….

kiya wanted him 2 say it….so dat she wud know if he also felt da same….

kiya-"infact u….wat KD"

KD-"infact I….chicklet…"

kiya-"stoneface…"

KD-"infact I….I…"

kiya-"I…I karte rahoge ya uske aage kuch bologe"she knew wat he wanted to say…but she wanted him to speak it….

KD-"infact I missed u"

kiya's heart broke….she wanted sumthing else from him….but he dint have dat for her…..

suddenly KD blurted out…. "I love u kiya…."

da words echoed in her her ears…da three magical words dat she wanted 2 hear….she heard it from him….

kiya's eyes dropped a tear full of happiness in it…..

KD-"kiya..at happnd….y r u crying…ok if u don't accept it den…."

she dint let him complete da sentence……

suddenly she kissed him on his cheek n hugged him "I love u too KD from when I don't know….par yehi pata hai ki I love u dearly…plzz promise me….u'll never break my heart again"

KD-"never"n he kissed her on her forehead….

den he hugged her "and I'll never leave u…..coz I'll die…"

kiya broke da hug…"tym kitna hua…we"ll be late

KD laughed n saw da watch…. "we"re chicklet"

kiya-"bhaaggooo….."

n dey ran to da car KD drove fast…..

n dey reached…..

sir-"so u're 10mins late…its ok….par where were u??

kiya-"sir actually we're old friends of college…..

sir-"ohh….dats gr8…par sirf friendship…ya.."

kiya blushed…..

sir-"ok lets go onscreen…..

n da first shoot was a rain dance…..

dey danced n danced but not as a onscreen but in feelings offscreen also…….

so dats it…..how's it???plzz cmmnt n I hope it works out gud…..n yeah thnx for all readers for reading dis n cmmnting n lyking……

p.s.-I miss u jenny di n dis one is also for u….love u loadsss ….missing u very much….muaahh….

love ya

sahashrabdi….

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