Ending(Updated last chapter on Pg 30)(25.07.19) - Page 10

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Posted: 7 years ago
#91
Nice update aur bihaan ka apne baccho k liye pyaar bahut accha.poori family khush ho gai bihaan ko dekhkr pr ek baat hai please thahaan ko bhi kuch time do akele me taki kuch baat kr sake kitna time ho gaya hai ok
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update. So finally bihaan reunited with his family.
And who is unknown person and what happened to aditi.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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6:30

PN

Dhruv returned home. There was some problem in his office so he had to go there early in the morning. He did not even get the time to inform anyone. Even no one had called him to ask where he was and that made him anxious. However, when he entered the house, he could hear people giggling and making noises. It is when he saw Bihaan that it made sense why everyone was so happy and did not even notice his absence. As he quickened his steps towards Bihaan, the latter also noticed him and gave his brightest smile. He also hugged Bihaan. Then he questioned Bihaan about where he was to which Bihaan said the truth but skipped the part where Thapki came there and also his dream.

2:00

Thahaan's room

Thapki was alone in the room, still thinking about what Kosi had said. It seemed like there was something the others did not say to her or did not even know. Bihaan entered the room accompanied by Bani and Tina. Seeing Thapki tensed, he asked them to go and play with the others. He sensed that something was not right but right now everything was going so smoothly that there was no reason for her to feel worried about anything. He gestured her with his eyes to say what happened. Thapki just shook her head because she did not want to worry Bihaan, especially not when he has just returned home. Bihaan held Thapki by her shoulders and made her sit on the bed and tried to ask her again what was wrong. Thapki knew that Bihaan was not going to stop questioning her. Moreover, she needed to know what exactly had happened that day. So, she told him what Kosi had told her and asked Bihaan to narrate to her what had happened.

Bihaan told her everything he knew. Those painful eyes of Bihaan made Thapki realized that she should not have asked this.

Bihaan: Uske baad kya hua, hume nahi pata. (After that I don't know what happened.)

PN

Dhruv came home again to fetch some files. Recently, there were many things that were going wrong in his office but after last night it looks like everything is messed up. As he was about to leave, Vasu called him.

Vasu: Dhruv, kya hua? Itna pareshan kyun ho? (Dhruv, what happened? Why do you look so tensed?)

Dhruv: Kuch nahi maa. Bas office mein kuch problems hai. (It's nothing mom. There are some problems at the office.)

Vasu: Tum sab theek karoge. (You will make everything alright.)

Dhruv was about to go when Vasu interrupted him again.

Vasu: Dhruv beta, saat baje tak aa jaana. Aaj sab saath mein khaenge. (Dhruv, return by seven o'clock. Today we will eat together.)

Dhruv: Koshish karunga. (I'll try.)

Thahaan's room

Bihaan knew that even Thapki felt sad when she came to know about the details about Aditi's death. Maybe that is what Kosi maa wanted to do. So, he decided to change the topic.

Bihaan: Thapki, hum hospital kab jaenge? (When will we go to the hospital?) Thapki: Chaar baje. (4 o'clock.) Bihaan: Acha. Toh main tab tak so jaata hoon. (Okay. So, I'll sleep till then.)

Thapki: Theek hai. (Okay.)

Bihaan: Vaise tum bhi so sakti ho. (By the way you can sleep.)

Thapki: Abhi? (Now?)

Bihaan: Haan abhi. Hum bhi toh abhi hi so rahe hain. (Yeah now. Even I am going to sleep now.)

Thapki: Haan par tum.. (Yes, but you..)

Bihaan: Haan hum...(Yes, I...)

Bihaan pulled her naughtily on the bed.

Thapki: Bihaan! Chodo mujhe. Darwaaza khula hai. (Leave me. The door is open.)

Bihaan: Huh...

Thapki: Matlab koi andar aa sakta hai. (After a small pause)Kyun Bihaan Pandey? Apko kya laga? (I meant that anyone can enter the room. (After a small pause) What happened Bihaaan Pandey? What did you think?)

Saying so, Thapki tried to escape but she had only been able to get down from the bed when Bihaan held her hand, kneeled on the bed and made her face him simultaneously and then placed his arms on her shoulders.

Bihaan: Kaha tha na, humse kabhi door mat jaana. (I had told you don't ever go away from me.)

Thapki: Kabhi nahi. (Never.)

Their mood definitely changed, not as expected but it changed. However they were brought back to reality when Suman came panting in their room.

Suman: Kosi Devi hospital mein hai. Kisi ne usey zeher diya. (Kosi Devi is in the hospital. Someone poisoned her.)

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Posted: 7 years ago
#94
Another very well written part. Wat else is left to be solved? Who wants to kill Kosi?? Is Kosi hiding some truth?? Hmmm plz post the next part soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
superb update!
i didn't understand one thing...why Bihaan skipped that Thapki coming to the jungle part? Does it mean that other family members are also not aware of that?
Maybe ThaHaan have a good reason behind not sharing this with the family members...but i feel that PN members should know what all Thapki did to find her Bihaan.
let's see Kosi survives or not
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96
Read all the chapters in one go! Very interesting story! I can't wait to read what happens next! Keep it up
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kar_Nan

Another very well written part. Wat else is left to be solved? Who wants to kill Kosi?? Is Kosi hiding some truth?? Hmmm plz post the next part soon


What if it is Kosi's plan to escape again?



Originally posted by: dynamic_doll

superb update!

i didn't understand one thing...why Bihaan skipped that Thapki coming to the jungle part? Does it mean that other family members are also not aware of that?
Maybe ThaHaan have a good reason behind not sharing this with the family members...but i feel that PN members should know what all Thapki did to find her Bihaan.
let's see Kosi survives or not


Thapki lied that she went back to Agra. Unnecessarily, people would have asked her why did not she say Bihaan was alive. For the time being, let it be their small secret.



Originally posted by: Kowsi

Read all the chapters in one go! Very interesting story! I can't wait to read what happens next! Keep it up

Thank you for reading.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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14:25

Hospital

Bauji, Bihaan and Thapki asked at the reception where Kosi was. They rushed towards where the receptionist had pointed. It was not difficult to search for her room because there were two policemen already posted in front of her room who did not allow them to enter without permission. Fortunately, the police inspector himself was there. Bihaan asked him what exactly had happened. The police inspector answered that Kosi Devi complained about having severe pain in her stomach some minutes after having her lunch. Doctors said that it was a case of food poisoning. However, only Kosi was the one who was suffering. It was only after he said whatever he knew, that he realized that he was talking to Bihaan who was supposedly dead. He asked Bihaan to follow him to the police station to complete some formalities. Bihaan went with the inspector while Thapki and Bauji stayed at the hospital, waiting for Kosi to get consciousness.

15:30

Bihaan returned to the hospital. By then Kosi's condition improved. However, due to the tight security they were still not allowed to meet her. Even before the nurses entered the room, a police officer checked if they did not carry anything fishy.

When Thapki saw him, she went to the reception to ask where Dr. Vimal's cabin was. It was a coincidence that Vimal worked in the same hospital. Since he did not have any appointment before, Thapki and Bihaan did not have to wait. After 30 minutes, Bihaan's checkup was over and they went to Kosi's room to see if there was any new development. Since they still could not meet her, it was pointless to wait anymore. In fact there was no need to even get worried for her. Afterall if she could, she would have again tried to destroy them.

16:10

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Bauji, Thapki and Bihaan reached home. Bauji woke Bihaan who had slept during the journey and the three went inside. Vasu enquired about Kosi and Bauji told her that her condition is improving. After that there was no mention of her in the house. Shortly after, Ashwin and Sanjay also returned home. Ashwin gifted Preeti a CD but refused to tell what its content was. So she had no option but to play it to know what it contained. It turned out to be their wedding video. Ashwin had taken the video cassette to convert the video. The cameraman that was selected to shoot the wedding was still using his old equipment. That is why the video was not available on CD. As they were all watching the video and commenting about how some persons looked at that time, the children wanted to watch their parents' wedding video.

However no one knew where the CDs were. Probably, it was in the storeroom. They could search for them tomorrow.

7:30

Dhruv returned home still worried. Bihaan noticed this and decided to ask him about this. Just then Dhruv's phone rang and he attended the call.

Dhruv: I don't think I'll be able to go ahead with this partnership deal.

On the other side: ...

Dhruv: No Sir. Okay, I'll do something about it.

He cut the call.

Bihaan: Kya hua? (What happened?)

Dhruv: Tujhe Mr. Kapoor yaad hai? Uske saath mein ek partnership shuru karne vaala tha par...(Do you remember Mr. Kapoor? I was about to start a partnership with him but...)

Bihaan: Par kya?(But what?)

Dhruv: Office mein kaam bahut zyada bar gaya hai. Mere paas iske liye vakt nahi hai. Aur vo keh rahe hai ki vo company ko contract todne ke liye sue karega. (I have loads of work at the office. I don't have time for this. And he is saying that he will sue the company for breaching the contract.)

Bihaan: Main aapke kuch madad kar sakta hoon? Agar aap kahe toh main ye kaam sambhal sakta hoon. (Can I help you? If you allow me, I can do this work.)

Dhruv: Bihaan, ye ek new newspaper ko launch karne ka contract hai. Mr. Kapoor sirf paisa dega aur sabhi kaam tujhe karna parega. Bahut mushkil hoga ye karna. (Bihaan, it's about launching a new newspaper. Mr. Kapoor will only give the money and you will have to do all the work. It will be very difficult to do this.)

Bihaan: Main karlunga. Baad mein aap sab sambhal lena. (I'll do it. Later you'll take care of this.)

Dhruv: Ek kaam kar. Thapki se puch kya vo tumhari madad kar sakti hai ya nahi. Vo isi field se hai. Tum dono iss newspaper ki company ke saath ek nayi shurwaat kar sakte ho.(Do one thing. Ask Thapki if she can help you. She is from the same field. You can start afresh with this newspaper company.)

Bihaan: Theek hai bhai. (Okay.)

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Posted: 7 years ago
#99
nice update!
there's strict security at the hospital but i feel that either Kosi will escape or that person will try to kill her
The much anticipated ThaHaan office track was scrapped in the show...but you are giving us that in your FF...really looking forward to that 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh wow I guess now we can parhay likhay kamyaab Thahaan. Really loving how u have taken the tracks from the show and developed the story in a much better way.
Looking forward to the next update

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