TwiNj 2Shot:Yours Forever!LastPart pg4 30th Jan 2016 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

Oh my God! !!! How could you leave us hanging like this...

But really really amazing story...I loved it
Continue soon pls..can't wait

Thank you very much.
I hope I wont dissapoint you guyz with next chapter!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
awesome update
aww poor twinkle
plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
You know I loved it.
I always love your writing.
My heart is bleeding for Twinkle.
Bechari pura tut gayyi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Perwinkle

You know I loved it.

I always love your writing.
My heart is bleeding for Twinkle.
Bechari pura tut gayyi.

my heart too bleeds for her😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Great start
and poor twinkle scared for her
Do continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Oh my God.
Uh r an awesome writer.
I just loved it.
Ryt now m in my lecture and reading ur update. Uh can easily get idea how much i m liking it.
Plz dear plz continue soon. Plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
awesome ... pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Yours Forever-Last part


Kunj took her to hospital and quicky went to doctor,doctors admitted her in ICU and started her treatment.
After n hour or so doctor came out of ICU and kunj asked him how is twinkle.
Doctor:We have tried to remove the poison from her body,but her condition is still delicate we will be observing her for 24 hours if she dosent gain conciousness in next 24 years then she may slip into coma or she may die,I am sorry to say this but the dosage of slipping pills was high,normally after such high dosage the patient dosent survive but she is still hanging on,we are trying our best.
Kunj was devasted,how can she do it how can she leave him and why would she do that,leela,bebe,usha,chinki and maya were in hospital also everyone was cluesless as to why twinkle will do this but one person knew the reason and it was chinki.
Everyone was in shock specially kunj and leela,leela was crying uncontrollebly and bebe was consoling her ,kunj was sitting with his head in his hands,maya went to him and said everything will be fine kunj,twinkle will get alright.
Chinki sees this and the scene angers her afterall for her maya is responsible for twinkle's this condition but she keeps quite as she does not want to worsen the situation,kunj was still wondering why twinkle would do something like this.

Kunj:I dont maya,I dont know why she has done it,till yesterday she was soo happy we went for movie and dinner,then kunj remembered twinkle was not eating from 1 week he went to bebe and asked bebe you told me that she wasnt eating from a week,did she tell you why?
Bebe:Puttar mujhe toh usne kuch nahi bataya,but haan woh bahut pareshaan rehti thi.

Chinki was not able to keep quite now,she needed to tell everyone,
Chinki:Jiju she did all this because of you.
Kunj and everyone turned towards her and everyone had a questioning look on thier faces,kunj due to kunj.
Kunj went to chinki and asked her
Kunj:What due me to but why?
Then chinki told him about how twinkle saw the divorce papers,her insecurities,how twinkle thought kunj is going away from her and how she thought there is someything between kunj and maya,she told him twinkle's insecurities were reaching thier peak and that is why she stopped eating,and was in a depression like state,she said "I dont know what made her take this step,what was the trigger for this but all this has to do someyhing with you only,twinkle herself didnt knew that she loves you very much and the mere thought of you going away from her may have forced her to take this step"

Everyone was shocked after the revealation was made,kunj was not able to believe twinkle took this step due to this reason,he told everyone that divorce papers were of maya and her husband and there is nothing between them,He cursed himself for not telling twinkle about it,he was angry on himself and her too.
But everyone made him understand that twinkle's insecurities were justified as anyone would have thought the same.

Kunj was feeling guilty that twinkle was in this condition due to him and it made him feel worse,he is responsible for her this condition.

Twinkle was still unconcious it has been 18 hours out of 24 hours and still there was no sign of improvement.

Kunj was sitting beside her on a stool from hours he refused to leave her side and was holding her hands from past many hours,he didnt knew when he felt asleep but when he opened his eyes,twinkle was breathing heavily,her breathing was irregular,kunj got tensed and he immediatly went to doctor and asked him to check twinkle,the doctor came checked her breathing it was irregular,her heart was beating very fast and and then everything felt silent,the moniter made a sound of beep and the line representing her heartbeat became straight,world stopped for kunj,doctor was shouting for sister to give him an injection of adrenaline and to get the difibrillator ready.
The doctor gave twinkle adrenaline and then made the use of difibrillator lucky her heart starting beating and then doctor gave her another injection and she was stabalising.
Kunj became a little relaxed when doctor told him that They have saved her and she shoulf be fine in sometime,the doctor also told him that now she is out of danger and he should not worry now.
Kunj sat beside her and waited hours to open her eyes,finally twinkle opened her eyes and it took her sometime to adjust to the brightness she turned her head and saw kunj sitting there,she closed her eyes tightly and opened them again,and he was still there,kunj looked at her with eyes full of guilt,sadness,anger.
As soon as he saw her open her eyes he quickly hugged her,twinkle was a bit taken aback by this and he said
Kunj:Tu pagal hai twinkle,kyu kiya tune aise mere sath,kyu uthaya yeh step tujhe koi andaza bhi hai ki mujhe kitna darr lag raha tha tujhe aise dekh kar.

Twinkle hugged him and back and cried.
Kunj:Ab tu kyu roo rahi hai,rona toh mujhe chahiye,acha bus ab chup hoja,sab theek hai,aur haan toh na bilkul pagal hai tujhe laga bhi kaise ki mai tujhe divorce dunga and mere aur maya ke nich kuch hai,tu thodi pagala hai kya ek baar mujhse baat toh karti they were maya's divorce papers,and not ours and I was helping her with divorce.
Twinkle was shocked and hapoy to know that truth.
Kunj:Aur mai na tyjhse bahut naraz hun,how can you decide to leave me twinkle,leave me alone,kya tumne soch kabhi ki how will I live without you twinkle,kya karta mai tere bina twinkle,kyu jaa rahi thi mujhe chod kar.
Twinkle:I am sorry kunj,please mujhe maaf kardo.
Kunj:Saza toh tujhe milegi,you will have to agree to whatever I say and I will stay with you 24/7 till you will get alright,aur koi argument nahi.
Twinkle:Tum mujhe chod kar toh nahi jaoge na kunj?
Kunj:Haan Chala jaonga agar you will repeat such kind of an act again.
Twinkle:I wont ever do it kunj,please dont leave me,I love you kunj I love you very very much I cannot live without you thats why I thought to end my life if you wont be with me.
Kunj:I love you too twinkle,you are the light in my life,you are my jaan,I love you very very much twinkle and haan listen to one thing very carefully,I AM YOURS AND FOREVER YOURS!
They hugged and remained in each other's embrace for a long time...

Epilogue to come soon.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
YAY!
Such a beautiful update bhaiyya (I can call you that na?)
I wish there was an emtional convo like this in the show.
Twinj were just so emtional and and cute.
I loved there dialogues too each other.
Now I can't wait for the epilogue!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Perwinkle

YAY!

Such a beautiful update bhaiyya (I can call you that na?)
I wish there was an emtional convo like this in the show.
Twinj were just so emtional and and cute.
I loved there dialogues too each other.
Now I can't wait for the epilogue!!

Thank you thank you!😃
Yes you can call me bhaiyya😛

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