TwiNj OS: The case of Rainbows and Jealousy(UPDATE PG7) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: hailly

Awesome.os loved it. 👏 👏
Continue soon plz.

Thank you😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Amazing...
continue soon. ..

Thank you😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Haha. Seems someone is as naughty as me.

Though i didnt try this but i tried many other things.

BTW this was just awesome.
I myself is a naughty girl so i loved it and connected with it.
Kunj jealous. I so want to see him jealousy.
Continue soon.

Thank you😃
Really glad you liked it😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

awesome update love how Kunj is fighting the jealousy

Thank you...really happy you are enjoying this😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
it was awesome...
i loved it ..
poor kunj jealousy ma mara..lol..
loving it yar your updates specialy the text msg part was awesome...hope ik or chal hoga..
i want more...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: .Ragini.

Yay!!! There are gonna be more parts!!!
I'm unable to write just now...I'm totally incoherent right now...😆 My scream right now was so deafening, the neighbours came across to check who was being slaughtered... Or some such thing....🤣
Okay, can't think right now, mind processes have shut down...am in Twinj heaven...okay, will be back to comment when i have calmed down and retained my equilibrium...which might take a while (considering how absolutely wonderfully this update has been written)...Love from an utterly dazed ragini😉
Okay i am back.. Have been in a daze( a good one) and have been wandering around the house giggling helplessly. Kunj was super jealous and it made him super cute. I loved his angry outburst too.. It was all so adorable. And twinkle is so different here. Loved the change. Lol, kunj's reaction to dhanush and twinkle's rapport was rib tickling. I thoroughly enjoyed it.. 😆
I just re-read this for like the hundredth time. Yes, i know it by heart now. Wake me up in the middle of the night and i can repeat it..
Dhanush was amazing too. The text he sent kunj at the end made me laugh out loud.. That did earn me quite a few glares from my brother and mom but they are pretty used to it by now.
I just loved this update so much.
One question, is it possible for a ghost to palpitate and die again? *ragini's ghost dies*

Oh Lord...hahahaha😆😆
This made my day😃 Don't die on me yet buddy...there are more chapters left.
But I am really really happy that you are enjoying this. Ill try to incorporate more Dhanush and jealous Kunj maybe even😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: 17.sonal

Please be rest assured... Keep writing as many Shots as u.like...

And keep Giving us Such wonderful treat everytym...
I jus loved to imagine tht confident Twinkle i always imagine in my stories...
This 2 shot was Also amazing...
U.knw i can.sense tht Energy...tht ambience tht commotion and tht High of the Club...
And Jealous Kunj ws A Cherry on The Cake.. loved it...😉😉😉

Dhanush is one i'll fall for... 😆

Hahaha😆😆 Thanks buddy...I'll keep the chaps coming😉
Glad you are enjoying this.
PS: I am already head over heels for Dhanush😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: hailly

Awesome update. Loved it.
Ah poor kunj 😆 burning with jealousy.
Do continue writing please.

Thank you😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: .MysticalWaters

Amazing part!
Update the next part soon!

Thank you😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Perwinkle

I loved it.

Then again, I've always loved you writing.
Jealous Kunj is just amazing.
I mean, I just really like this side of him.
I wish there was a track like this in the actual show.
Dhanush is actually pretty funny.
I loved the text convo.
There's another part right?
Cause I really want another part.
I should stop ranting now.
Anyways, I really liked it.
Update soon.
Love ya

Thbak you...thank you so much😳
I am really glad you are enjoying this😃 PS: I love Dhanush a lot too...glad you liked him😊
and thanks for the lovely comments, you make my day😃

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