TwiNj OS: The case of Rainbows and Jealousy(UPDATE PG7) - Page 2

Originally posted by: .Ragini.

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Hayye i loved it! And the name is super cute..

The entire scenerio was written really well--totally realistic and very descriptive enough to see it in my head! That itself speaks volumes about what an amazing writer you are.

This was so much fun to read...loved the interaction, loved the emotion and the entire feeling, superbly written and a total pleasure to read! 😳 👏👏

This was so cute that i died reading it. See, I finally died properly!!!!No more revivals!!!!! And yes, you killled me.

Coherence is something I'm struggling for...As a human, it would have been hard enough!!! As a ghost...well! And it's so difficult to focus with reading about jealous kunj...everything is out-of-focus.😆😆😆

I love it when guy's get jealous. I know i am one weird person. 😃

I have lost me senses after reading this. I am useless now.

See the effect this story had on me? 🤣I know i sound totally crazy, insanity thy name is ragini. 😃

But i seriously loved it and you already know how much i love you right?

Heres a big bone crushing hug 🤗

Originally posted by: Perwinkle

I think I've said this before, but I really love your writing.

There's a certain amount of depth and emotion you put into it that really attracts me.

I'm so glad there's a part two because I really don't think I ever wanted this too end.

Did I mention I liked jealous Kunj? No? Well then I did.

I love it when guy's get jealous.

Yes, I'm extremely weird, I know.

Anyways great OS.

Update the 2nd part soon please!.

Originally posted by: priyanvs

nice os dear

loved it

Originally posted by: zaara610

Awesome os..Loved it

Enjoyed reading...jealous kunj was so cute..

Please continue soon

Guys this part was done in quite a rush, so it might be a little abrupt but I hope you enjoy it anyway. Thanks😊

PART TWO

"I think ab yeh Dhaba' ke liye rady hai. Na?" Dhanush says, he turns towards Twinkle who was now in the front passenger seat and then at him, through the rear view mirror.

Dhaba? They think we can't handle dhaba food? What kind of rich spoilt brat do they think he is? It's insulting to think that they think he won't like dhaba food. Is this what his first impression on Dhanush was like? A stuck up man who doesn't know how to have fun?

Twinkle was surfing the radio channels. She stops that activity and he can imagine the way she is biting he fingers in hesitation. "Actually, yaar, aaj ke liye bas hogaya. Dhaba ka plan phir kabhi kar lege." Okay, so he knows her enough to know that she was cancelling the plan because she thought he wouldn't be comfortable with it.

Dhanush was ready to argue but then Twinkle lays her hand against his on the gear clutch and for some reason Kunj feels his blood pressure rising. Maybe it's all the adrenaline and thrill because he absolutely refuses to call this jealousy. He is not the jealous type, dammit! He has to clench his teeth so that his voice appears normal and his fingers balled into a fist to conceal the rage racing through his veins.

"Arey! Phir kabhi kyu? Danush ne abhi hi toh kaha Raat abhi baki hai'. Chalo, maza aaye ga."

"Kunj, are you sure? Yeh Dhaba woh nahi hai jo tum sooch rahe ho."

He cuts her off rudely, tired of being treated like a fragile kid. "Haan! Haan. Chalo. Dekhte hai, aisa kya hai, yeh Dhabe mein." He can feel the tension in the air, the tension he created and he feels slightly guilty for it but come on, they weren't being fair with him. He knew how to enjoy too. He is thankful when Dhanush blasts the music to a volume that almost drowned all his thought. The windows are rolled down and Twinkle does what only what Twinkle can and pokes her head out of the window. Her hair whips past her face and she looks back at him, giving him a smile.

As the song changes she rolls the window back up and the duo in the front seat look up at each other. He doesn't like it. The song hits its peak bass and they start dancing in their seat. He wants the song to end right now. They are synchronized as if this was practiced a hundred times and ten. He was wrong before. He wants this wretched night to end now!

About two dozen excuses come up in his mind, he could lie and say that he was feeling sick, they all could just call it a night and head home. He opens his mouth to utter the words along those lines when Dahnush announces their arrival at The Dhaba'

And here Kunj was expecting a small restaurant, perhaps eating on those Khats, having a tumbler or two of lassi even but this wasn't what he had imagined. The establishment before him was huge. It was a two storied building, white but fairy lights blinking up at rapid speed.

"Club?!" he yells. Dhanush bought them to a club? At this hour in the night? No! Dhanush was going to bring Twinkle to this Club in his absence! White hot rage blinds him. He grabs Dhanush by the neck and roughly shoves him up against a tree. "Saale! Meri Biwi ko clubbing le jayega tu? Teri himmat kaisi hui, Kamine!"

"KUNJ! Kunj chodo usse. Kunj!" She comes up running between them and pushes him back. "Kunj! Yeh kya kar rahe ho? Pagal ho gaye ho kya. Chodo usse." She says forcefully, putting in all her strength to drag him away from her so called best friend.

Dhanush hadn't put up much of a fight but the sly smile he gives him as Twinkle drags him away is enough reason for Kunj to want to knock his teeth out.

"Nahi aana that oh bol dete! Maine kaha tha koi aur time aa jaate." She tells him sternly quite put off by his attitude towards Dhanush. "Aur rahi baat, yeh Dhaba ki, yeh koi sharab ka adda nahi hai. Samjhe?"

She walks the little distance over to Dhanush and places a hand delicately along his jaw. Great! Now Kunj wants to fracture his cheekbones too. "Tum theek ho?" her voice so full of concern, "Humme ghar jaana chahiye, sara mood kharaab hogaya hai." Kunj hates the way her shoulder slump down in dejection. He eagerly does what he doesn next with the small hope of lifting her spirit back up again. He is willing to do anything to make her smile again. He wants to be the reason behind her smiles. He wants to be the reason behind all her smiles and joys-not Dhanush. So he apologizes to Dhanush first and then to Twinkle. "Look I am really sorry guys par please plan mat cancel karo. Chalo andar."

"Koi nahi buddy." Dhanush being the one to forgive first. He then proceeds to make weird hand gestures and Kunj automatically knows it's some inside joke when Twinkle breaks down in a fit of giggles.

"Oh haan! Mujhe yaad hai. Bechara admi, tu ne toh uski adhi jaan hi le rakhi thi."

"Toh phir? Kiski himmat mere hote hua tujh pe line mare!"

On the way inside The Dhaba' Twinkle narrated the entire story to Kunj, how a drunkard had commented on her while at the mall and Dhanush had beaten him black and blue. "Dhanush ke martial art classes finally kam aaye."

"Oi, Jhalli, kam bhi aaye the aur ab main black belt bhi hoon."

There was this sick feeling of failure pricking Kunj in the sides. He wanted to be the one to protect Twinkle. Of course he hadn't even known Twinkle when the said incident took place but that didn't stop him from wishing that he would have been there.

The Dhaba' contrary to his assumption was not a club or bar after all. Well it was a club of sorts but not the one a normal person would expect. It was more of a high end Gaming Club. The huge building was divided in to parts. A glow in the dark themed bowling alley in the back left corner, Foozball and air hockey tables on the front right and the middle was a dance floor. Music blared through a gigantic speakers making Kunj's heart thump along with the tempo as they made their way upstairs.

Now this floor was mainly the dining area. It gave them a good view of the activities below them and Kunj had to admit the place wasn't bad. It wasn't bad at all. They selected a table at the back and he could see Twinkle and Dhanush both occasionally waving at people here and there. So they were well known around here. Once, thankfully at their table, Kunj looks around to get a proper look of the crowd. He gathered so much so far that it was quite a decent place with quite a decent crowd. He hadn't seen any one consuming alcohol so far which was always an added bonus.

"Twinks and Dhano! Oh my god! It really is, I can't believe it. Twinks and Dhano are back!" He hears before he sees a lady in black pants and a white and red stripped shirt at their table. The name tag told him that she was a waiter here.

"Kari-kari!" Twinkle jumps and hugs here. "I know na! Twinks and Dhano are back"

Dhanush too pulls the girl in a hug addressing her as Kari-kari too despite her name as Kunj read being Karishma. What he couldn't get past however was the fact that Dhanush was called Dhano here. Kunj internally smirked. Dhano?' like Basanti ka Dhano! Finally, some blackmail material.

"Oh! Kari yeh Kunj hai. Mera husband." Twinkle introduces Kunj to Kari-kari.' He extends his hand formally calls her Karishma which has her scrunching her nose in disgust.

"Kya yaar! Apne pati ko bola nahi tha. Any way forget it." She syas to Twinkle first as she shakes his hand. And then turns her attention back to him. "Call me Kari, Karishma bahut un cool hai." And then pulls him into a hug. "Yaha hum aise milte hai."

Kunj decide to have the Tahiti Cocktail and a club sandwich to go along with it. He looks up to see Twinkle gazing down at the dance floor, not even slightly interested in the menu while Dhanush is nose deep in it. Kari comes back ready to take their orders. Dhanush politely asks Kunj to go first and so her does.

"Okay!" Dhanush rubs his hand after Kunj finishes placing his order, "Chipotle Burger for me, Rueben Sandwich for Twinks. Oreo blast milkshake for me and Black forest milkshake, extra whip cream for Twinks. Also a side order of fries as always." Twinkle didn't even hear what Dhanush had decide to order for her, her whole attention being on the dance floor beneath them. He waits patiently until Kari repeats their order with a smile and leaves before attacking Dhanush. "Aur agar Twinkle ko kuch duusra chahiye hota toh?"

The man opposite to him just shakes his head. He elbows Twinkle in her sides to grab her attention.

"Haan? Kya hua?"

"Kunj tujhe se kabse tera order pooch raha hai."

"Oh haan, okay. Ek Rueben sandwich aur ek Black forest milkshake extra whip cream. Aur hum sab ek plate fries share kar le?"

Kunj is appalled, he switches his gaze back at Dhanush who meekly pops the collar of his jacket up and mouths a told you so'. The urge to punch the man is back with a raging intensity. Not wanting to create a scene and more importantly not wanting to make a fool out of himself in front of Twinkle, Kunj settles back in his chair and tries to figure out what was so damn intriguing about that dance floor that Twinkle kept staring at it.

It takes about 15 minutes for Kari to bring them their food during which none of them had passed a word to the other. The thundering noise of the bowling ball smashing in to the pins accompanied by the loud music was enough to fill the silence between them. Kari named their food as she positioned it in front of the respectful owners. The extra order of fries went in the middle of the table. "So tum dono competition mein part lene wale hona?" Kari asks

"Of course darling. Trophy bhi hum hi le jane wale hai." Dhanush winks and replies. He has this way with the ladies that was annoying to all other men but charming to the girls. Maybe it was his attitude, half parts of sexy confidence and half part of respect towards women that made him a hit among the women. Either way he needs to stay away from Kunj's wife.

As Dhanush predicted, Twinkle reaches for the fries first and dips it in the whip cream of her milkshake before eating it. She goes this with five other fries before moving on to her sandwich. She squirts ketchup directly on her sandwich rather than on her plate, as Kunj had predicted and takes two bites before repeating the process. Before long Kunj was grasping at straws while Dhanush could yet predict a million more things Twinkle would do exactly as he said.

"Ladies and Gentlemen welcome welcome to the 74^th Annual Hunger Games." Kari says over the microphone earning a laugh from the crowd. "Okay! Okay! Jokes aside. Are you guys ready for the Dhaba wala Dance competition?" A huge around of cheer goes around the crowd. "Great! So Pair up guys and register. What are you waiting for?"

"Dhaba wala Dance?" Kunj questions Twinkle.

"Nothing Kunj. Sirf ek dance competition hai. Nothing special."

"Nothing special?" Dhanush places his hand against his chest, feigning hurt. "Tu kaise Dhaba wala Dance ko nothing special' bol sakti hai. Humari saari trophy ki collections bhool gayi."

Kunj wanted to butt in and ask Twinkle if she would like to pair up with him but unfortunately fate had other plans. For as soon as he opened his mouth, Kari interrupted them. "Okay, toh maine Twinks aur Dhano tum dono ko already register kar liya hai. Kunj tum part lena chaho gey?"

And that boiling feeling is back again. Twinkle was supposed to be paired with him first. She was his wife so he was supposed to be her priority. And to make matters worse Kunj sensed that Dhanush was intentionally stealing Twinkle's attention. That nuisance of a man was trying to impress his wife. Kunj decided he cannot under any circumstances let that happen but he can't sabotage their relationship either so he keeps mum.

Three pairs go ahead and dance before Twinks and Dhano' are requested on the floor. Twinkle sheds her jacket to reveal a black crop top and Kunj isn't entirely sure if he wants Dhanush near his wife anymore, especially now when she is looking this beautiful. She smiles nervously at him. "Wish us luck." She says.

"All the best Twinkle." Just Twinkle. Dhanush can go ahead and break his leg.

The lights dim and the song starts out slow. Kunj prays to every lord above them that it isn't the form of dance that would require Twinkle to be in close proximity of that devil named Dhanush. He prays it isn't a ballroom dance, she prays it isn't salsa and he prays it isn't the tango.

His prayers are answered...almost.

The song picks up the beats and spotlights focus on the pair. And then Twinkle starts breaking her moves. He quickly recognizes it was Hip Hop. The way she was locking, popping and dropping her moves had him awestruck. It was by far the most unexpected thing he had encountered this evening, well night. And one should know, it had been a crazy night.

Dhanush joins her on the second beat and off they start performing together in perfect sync. She comes up in front of him, drops low in to a crouch and they do this inconceivable robotic step that has everyone in the crowd going wild. Kunj could hardly take his eyes off of Twinkle. Her expression, her steps her everything was perfect. The song comes to its climax and he can sense that they were about to do something incredibly dangerous or incredibly stupid when Twinkle runs a dozen steps away from Dhanush on the opposite end of the floor. The beat picks up again and she is running back at him in full force. What happens next was too unbelievable to miss. Twinkle jumps and puts her feet on Dhanush's hand, he hoists her up so what her feet on his palm and his arms above his head. He then gives her a push her cue to jump and Kunj is almost screaming because Twinkle is doing this flip in the air and he will positively murder Dhanush if he doesn't catch her properly. Kunj swears if Twinkle falls and hurts herself, then this would be Dhanush's last day on planet earth.

But Dhanush catches her. They are both safe and sound and on the ground. They take a bow, wave to the crowd. It's obvious really that they have already won the competition. With a move like the one they just executed the judges would have to be blind not to award them.

Half an hour later and all the participant are lined up on the dance floor, awaiting the results. Of course Twinkle and Dhanush win, and yes he is happy for Twinkle but he wished he would have been the one down there with her. He wishes he was one she danced with, wishes he was the one that caught her. But most of all he wishes Dhanush wasn't the one. Really the way he was hugging his wife was right now being infuriating. They hold the trophy between them and pose for a picture with the judges.

Twinkle decides to drive them home. Kunj sits in the passenger seat and Dhanush at the back. Kunj has his mind racing with all the events of the night and most of them had to do with the level of ease Twinkle and Dhanush seemed to share. He was enjoying the silence in the car when his phone beeps, alerting him of a message.

From Dhanush: Jealousy looks cute on you.

From Kunj to Dhanush: I AM NOT JEALOUS!

From Dhanush to Kunj: Ooo...CAPSLOCK! I am scared now XD Buddy aage aage dekhete jaa hota hai kya.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Okay soo I know I mentioned that this would be an OS but I am having too much fun writing this. So maybe I can be a 3S or something, I am not completely sure yet...

But anyways Thank you for reading. Please comment and let me know what you thought about it.