Need a little help and feedback about new OS

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StarySKY

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello everyone ..

I am here again , this time to truble you a little with me ..

Yeah I know .. you are waiting for my updates, but

I have been living in this empty circle ..

Writing-drafting-saving-no posting

And start again ..

I some how lost confident in my writing everything I write is not good enough ..

Actually it kind of ridiculous ..

I write and seem so good and when I decide to post it .. I ended up not doing it , why ?!! Because it is not good ..

It is a mess and I need a way out of it ..

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I have this OS .. it is about SwaSan moving on in life , you know I was upset with Swara in this track and still ..

And I am hesitating to post it or not ..

Actually it has some different and weird thoughts ..

A mixture of dreams and high level of mind connection i.e when 2 souls become very close and aware of each other ..

It simple yet so complicated ..

( did I just confused you with my talking ?! )

I don't know if I am able to make it reach you all ..

If you are interested ..

Please help me out of this mess that I am in ..

And give your feedback about this OS ..

Love

Khushi

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

Dear Khushi,

Do not hesitate, just post the OS, but if you still need a positive go ahead, then post a short extract or a synopsis, then when the readers ask you to post the OS you know that they are aware of what could be the plot and yet are interested in reading.

Even a TS of mine is pending because, one I still have to crystallise the vague idea and two because I am aware that most readers will not accept Sanskaar / Swara moving on, but I am still upset with Swara, so maybe I can focus on it. I am also stuck on what the possible title could be 😆

But I want to read your take. (we do seem to have identical ideas😊)

Looking forward to your OS

love,

Nyna

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StarySKY

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Khushi,
Do not hesitate, just post the OS, but if you still need a positive go ahead, then post a short extract or a synopsis, then when the readers ask you to post the OS you know that they are aware of what could be the plot and yet are interested in reading.

Even a TS of mine is pending because, one I still have to crystallise the vague idea and two because I am aware that most readers will not accept Sanskaar / Swara moving on, but I am still upset with Swara, so maybe I can focus on it. I am also stuck on what the possible title could be 😆

But I want to read your take. (we do seem to have identical ideas😊)

Looking forward to your OS

love,
Nyna

Nynu .. 🤗

I think this is our 4th time to be having the same ideas .. 😆

I have to reasons why I am hesitating to post the OS ..

1. Because it about SwaSan moving on ..

Well last week I spend a whole night writing ( which it is nilot this OS by the way ) a story which it is quite long .. about Swara and Sanskar moving on falling in love again ..etc

But the next morning I felt guilty as I am a SwaSan fan and I should be keeping them together, so I deleted it ..

But I want something of them moving on so I end up with this OS ..

2. It has a different type of concept .. in this forum no story came across may with a similar idea ..

So I am worried that me be no one will get to understand this ..

Nynu thanks for the positive energy ..

I will try to post a synopsis for the OS tonight or tomorrow morning ..

Love

Khushi

Edited by StarySKY - 8 years ago