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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh no..this is so incredibly tragic..especially after that stupendous melting moment of bliss !
Res until eod..and in the meantime a big hug again for this full platter of DK😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res


Un res😊

Shruthi!!👏
You did just what I wanted all along. I was hoping all along that in this chapter they will address the obvious and finally things will get a lot more complicated for them. Remember we all wanted them to be separated to realise the depth of their feelings in the original plotline. It was just like that for me. But here I trusted you more than I trusted the cvs then. I read the update right from my bed and
it was such a good way to start my morning. Thankyou :)

All through the update my mind somehow knew what was coming next. I knew that she would break the routine waking pattern. That she would play a sleeping beauty to find some reason in her confused state. And innocent as she was she didn't know that her ever blushing skin would give her act to the ever attentive Sanskar. She is really naive the girl. And thats just perfect. I thinking giving the archaic touch to the story kind of toned down our swara that it is making the story more and more perfect.

I expected her to walk to him in that outfit, but I didn't expect her to actually do it. She really pulled some courage there. Choosing out an outfit from the bag ,just the one he happened to have liked, and wearing it to emphasise her feelings as silently as possible while meekly asking him if she should go away. I kind of expected Sanskar to go down on his knees but i realised that it's 1800 but then you just surprised me. A kiss. Right away. Snap your fingers and they were kissing. It was so incredible. I was literally swinging between two couples one dressed in your medieval clothes and the other our own Swasan from the screen. 😳. From the picnic. Where we still ponder on the thought if they have kissed on have not. The mystery of first kiss still stays unsolved there.

Adarsh and his troop!! God mm wasis always are their enemies when it comes to such scenes. But here too. But everything happens for a reason. And it's your story. So I was back to saying "swasan end game" .

I'm guessing pawan to play Cupid here. Oh he will. I know. The guy is just made for that. Unless you are planning to stick him to Uttara. 😆..would love to see Sanskar playing the protective brother. Confused yet happy that it's his friend. But that's for another time.for now I'm so sure he will clear sanskar's head off that guilt and confusion. And ofcourse he will also make swara see sense. But how is that going to play with the jealousy bubbling inside Sanskar.. I'm so excited for the next ones. I care the least about raglak..or shekar for that fact. And I'm sure once they are back manaki will be playing a huge role for Swasan.

Thankyou so much for the early morning treat
Hope you are back in good health 😊 take care.

Lots of love
N
Edited by bennetlizzy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 22

Omg omg this sooo different then I thought would happen and you have managed to surprise me quite well... aawww poor Swara I felt soo bad for her when she heard those two talking but maybe that was kinda reality check of the soceity they live in

Also I agree with Adrash that they live in a society where no mistakes from a man might be noticed but a small tarnish on the woman's reputation and even if she is right she will be looked down to... and thank God now the Maheshwari's also believe Sanskaar to be innocent...

And the sindoor part how I wish he had just filled her maang no matter the protest from her side.. but I can understand where Swara is coming from she thinks he is doing this solely because he thinks he is responsible for all the mess and believes him to still be in love with Kavita but she does not know the he was doing this for his love as well as respect he holds for her

Waiting eagerly for the next update... one question - are we nearing the end or this still has a lng way to go??

Love,
Manasi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mindblowing Update..
Their first kiss..so blissful..
Hope everything sort our soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh God, what a roller-coaster ride! The high of the kiss and low of the misunderstanding between them! Awesome chapters! Loved it how Swara realized her love! The bangles, dresses, puppet performance...Sanskar is treating his Princess royally! 😳 I love Pawan too!
They are so much in love and yet not able to express their inner desires to each other! So much angst. Loved it! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi shruti...chapter was so good yet heartbreaking...when I was reading initially I thought wow finally they will confess and everything will be alright...but u gave twist in the tale...but I like it... as more heart breaks and pain...so beautiful will be the reunion...and I have full faith in you...that will make your all updates better than the previous like u always do

hope u well now and will be fine soon...

love..
kirti


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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Shru🤗

I just knew it when in chapter 21 we were riding the tides of exceptional joy, the abyss of angst is somewhere near-by. It was so well executed that I felt myself engulfed in a trance of the story. I'm not sure if you'd believe me or not, I read chapter 22 as soon as I woke up and then still lost in thoughts of the most recent obstacles went to freshen up...and almost (My senses return before that!) applied toothpaste on my face instead of face wash! 🤪

Coming back to chapter 21,

Can I love this guy more? He is living up to the title of prince charming isn't he?😳 The lengths to which Sanskar goes to make sure Swara comes out of her trauma is just...Wow!

So unlike in serial, Swara realizes her feelings! Good for her...bad for Sanskar...now that she thinks its her responsibility to worry about his name and fame!

Talking of chapter 21, how can someone not say anything about Pawan. Whatever his other qualities are this man reads his friend so well...and his lady to a certain level too. And that puppet show! my my...it was a pure bliss to read!

Mohan and Mohini😆 Just love them both!❤️\

Then comes chapter 22,

As I said before, I knew these are the last golden hours of happiness when that kiss happened. I knew it, when Sanskar didn't get the chance to voice his feelings then and there. Oh, couldn't Adarsh come a moment later?

Then, I'm glad Adarsh and Sanskar sorted out their misunderstanding. But then again...I hate those men! Did they have to go gossiping in the presence of Swara...thinking from that angle Sanskar's men are angels!

Then Swara, as I know she would ended up making a milkshake of her and his feelings. I loved how you played a parallel to that Sindoor marriage on the serial here...but did not let the actual thing happen. It was obvious Swara is now doubtful of Sanskar's actual feelings...whether it's love or guilt. She should be. But I wish she wouldn't.

Just hope this dark night of agony passes away soon and the misunderstandings are solved. I can't tolerate my favorite royal couple pining this way

Then coming back to Adarsh. I want to trust he is good natured, fair intention-ed at the moment. But I am unable to do so. For some reason I feel weary of him and then again he seems far too concerned about the whereabouts of that key. Please lord, don't make him a traitor, my prince has enough trouble to tackle at the moment.

All in all, please, please get well soon Shru. I will personally pray for your health. And do update the next part quickly. This anticipation is playing with my sanity. I might end up brushing my teeth with soap next time😆

Love you loads,
Saku
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Shruti! Hope you are feeling better now and wish you a speedy recovery🤗 And Ouch! That last part hurt😭 I knew things wouldn't be as easy as it was portrayed at Adarsh's entry, but this hopeful heart *sigh*... Everything was so wonderfully written.. The depths of their emotions, their insecurities mingled with hope, the heights of respect both have for each other, its just so perfect.. Aaa, stupid ppl, they are perfect for each other n stillFabulous update as usual.. I also love the bonds of loyalties you have portrayed throughout between Sanskar and his men.. It's fairly touching..👏 Chapter 23 is gonna be harder to wait for😛 Get well soon🤗
Love,
Akshata😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww shruti
wonderful update
I just loved it...
Swasan Kiss is so blissful
Loved the whole part
Swasan argument
Swara's turmoil and insecurity is fair as well as sanskar's feelings too
Hope u make them sort out everything soon pleass!!!
do update and pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
You know what you should have stopped with 1st part or him about to fill her maang😭 I was having FB of Swasan sindoor wedding and you brutally broke it with your remaining update💔😭😭 I hate you Shru I hate you😭😭

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