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Monica_Suhasini

@Monica_Suhasini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

darrling unres kia😉

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Firstly a big thanks for this OS 🤗 You actually quoted me😆 and then followed my request to the T XOXOX

Great quotes by Khushro & Rumi

Awwiee little Varun!😳 I cant even...A child a truly blessed when it has parents who love each other & in this no one can be more lucky than Varun 😳

Swara is really fortunate to have a husband as involved as Sanskaar. And now even Varun is blessed to have such a person as his Dad, steadfast & dependable.

OK when Sunny was taking Varun out to the balcony & Swara stopped him because of his "clothes" I had imagined something completely different 🤣

And how cute is it of Sunny to hum sports commentary to Varun😳

That ending with the little family standing together on their balcony wrapped in the warmth of their love...Ahhh Viji I am gonna dream of this scene tonight Blake's lines end it all perfectly👏

Love you for this 🤗 And once again a big thanks!!!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Monica_Suhasini
viji🤗 🤗
omg omg its tooo cute dearie
loved it loved it loved it
swasanlicious cute sweet os
overwhelmed yar after reading this
babys name varun😉 awww
very delighted to see our swasan in their parent hood
such a caring husband he is
love you

Thanks so very much Suha dear. 🤗 🤗

So very happy that you liked it yaar. Yes, this one was intended to be cute, warm, SwaSanlicious and light hearted. No angst, and not much intensity and emotions as I normally put into my longer works.

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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Pearl

@pearl.16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Awww !!! That was sooo sweet and beautiful...

Really Hats OFF !!! 👏

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APUDEEP

@Apudip

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Unres

Viji I have just come to my senses after that "date pics". Wow , it is really nice and light hearted one shot.I❤️it.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: pearl.16
Awww !!! That was sooo sweet and beautiful...
Really Hats OFF !!! 👏

Thanks so much, Pearl. Glad you liked it. 🤗

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Monica_Suhasini

@Monica_Suhasini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Thanks so very much Suha dear. 🤗 🤗

So very happy that you liked it yaar. Yes, this one was intended to be cute, warm, SwaSanlicious and light hearted. No angst, and not much intensity and emotions as I normally put into my longer works.

Loads of Love,

---Viji

u never fail impress me viji

wheather it z light hearted or thrilling or mythological

whatever

always perfection...👍🏼

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Viji,

You dedicated it to me☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ - I am in seventh heaven - WOW - coming from you that is beyond words 😭😭😭 (tears of joy).

The story - such a lovey dovey one - truly one which tugs at all the heart strings in a warm way - such a beautiful story for a beautiful couple - only SwaSan and the natural progression of their love story and you linked the aviary scenes from the earlier OS so well. (thank you for not having anyone else in this story 👏👏)

And Sanskaar, being Sanskaar - does believe that one cannot be too prepared! (the entire volume of What to Expect)😉

Varun (the baby) appears to be a cutie pie - just wish I could leap into the story setting and pull his cheeks (cutchie cutchie cooo). I appear to be having a serious bout of 'gigil'

Truly, the story does make the lovely couple think:"Sometimes one has suffered enough to have the right to never say: I am too happy." - Alexandre Dumas - The Black Tulip.

Nyna

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

aww!varun-swasan's love...

its so soothing,freshning,peaceful story...

love it..🤗for ths story...

👏👏awsome

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Viji yaar thanx a ton for the pm
emotional, touchy and lovely os
baby varun is too sweet and blessed with such lovely parents...
love the way u potrayed the maturity of swara-sanskar relationship post maternity angle.
as always awesome yaar.its just sooo good.

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