SwaSan MiniShot: after the injury

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

This is the third time I'm trying to read this. First it was network problem, then, an e mail popped up and then Mom wanted to do gardening! Finally finished it.

WOW Medha!

Please continue to loop it until she loses all so called sense and confess her love! Swara deserves this!

It's good to see her showing some sense and caring for Sanskar for a change. I really like the tone you picked up here. Wonder if, something like this happens for real in the show! It would be like rain on desert!

I'm at peace after reading this. I guess i could cope up with another episode's torture!

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

It was awesome. I loved it.

I don't want to get my expectations high for the bomb blast track but reading your post I really wish to see such Swasan moments. I can handle Lakshya if we atleast get a two minute scene like this every episode.

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piccola1

@piccola1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Delicious !😊

Keep looping us in on those thoughts too..we need them to survive.

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Medha :)

This was something I want to see. N trust me m cursed with such an imaginative mind DAT I could actually picturise certain things in mind. Nd it soo annoying at tyms. Usually wen I want a gud sleep ..this imaginations want afilm marathon :P

Tere har zakhm par aah meri nikalti hai

Teri har shikan par saans meri thamti hai

Tadap bhi hoti hai aur wajah ki talash bhi nhi khatam

Tere paas hone ke sukoon se bhi na bekhabar hum

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Anya

@Three.Broomstic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Medha 🤗

I truly love your one shots.. It's like reading a small cute part of an otherwise huge romance fiction...such a relief...stress busters

Though he's hurt and all he's also healing in a way with all the care from her.

And she is so much-"Main tumlog nahi chodungi"- Hehe.

Awe the force-feeding bit was so apt and cute 😳

It's so nice and laid back, totally calm and collected.

loved it

Xoxo,

Anya

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1005068

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

lovely os:) hoping to see something like this in show also.

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer
I wish we could get this in the show!!
This is so awesome

thanks sakshi..

me want this too.😭

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: samiya.059

Awww that was so cute
Yaar why don't u supply some ideas to CVz.
I so dread that they might ruin the show for trp race by showing crap
You ,Viji & shurti should be writing the story.It would have been a success
It was a good remedy for me considering that I have started to skip the epiz till they don't show somethin useful
you have become that tinka of dhoobne k waqt tinke ka Sahara wala tinka
thanks a lot for writing this

thank you Samiya...

ab what to do...they too do not want their show to go off air🤢

I have often wondered how do the dayaan nonsense and a dumb female lead with

comprehension problems and greatness genes help trp?? i mean who watches that??

but still..keeping my fingers crossed for something like this.😭

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
Idk y but i had tears in my eyes when i finished reading 😭 sanskaar is being such a baby, and swara is uthaaoing all his nakhras. U show that much nakhra only to that one person u know who will tolerate it. U tolerate so much nakhra only of the one person who matters!

Like always...daily life at its most beautiful in your work 👏

yes, after all sanskaar ko bhi haq hain usse pareshan karne ka.😃@bold

and be indulged too.😊

By now Swara really should be getting started on these feelings...😭

I suppose when u are married to someone..u need to take up their responsibilities.

and anyway..I and dad show so much nakhra to mom whenever we get sick.😆she uthaos them all...and then goes amar hare dubbo gojiye gelo(a bengali idiom meaning my bones have crushed with ur nakhra jheloing and become bone-dust..and crops have started coming out of it)😆

thanks Shruti.😊

Edited by medhasankar - 10 years ago

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Sakura24
This is the third time I'm trying to read this. First it was network problem, then, an e mail popped up and then Mom wanted to do gardening! Finally finished it.
WOW Medha!
Please continue to loop it until she loses all so called sense and confess her love! Swara deserves this!
It's good to see her showing some sense and caring for Sanskar for a change. I really like the tone you picked up here. Wonder if, something like this happens for real in the show! It would be like rain on desert!
I'm at peace after reading this. I guess i could cope up with another episode's torture!

me too Saku. Me too. me three.🤢

and looping toh..wait nah...if it was in my hands..I'd loop it for

continuous 12 episodes instead of devar bhabhi screenspace.

yes, this was a tonic for the daily 9.30 battle.though i watch it now on video.🥱