SwaSan OS 'Rain' - Page 6

Originally posted by: gayu6

Nice os preet. I like <font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">this "she wasso ziddi.'Like you'said a voice inside his mind."😳 And they playing with rain super. Pls do pm me preet whenever u r writing new os r any pls</font>

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

beautiful one-shot..👏

Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer

Preet its beautiful yaar seriously!
Even i love the rain immensely.
And ur OS is fabulous.
I can relate to Swara here (Not forgetting the fact that i love Sanskaar😳)
and it just made the OS more lovely!!

Originally posted by: suhasini2727

preet its wonderful

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Preet, thanks yaar!!

When i saw the title i was expecting a rain dance and i got it.. and that too thoda hatke..

I literally melted at this line

'I wish i were a tear so i could roll down your cheek, drop on your lip and die in your heart Swara'.^^

Originally posted by: Messi2

wow wondering when will dis happen nicely penned down

Originally posted by: Nithya.G

wow beautiful os preet 👏

lovely update 😳

Originally posted by: SONAL30

cute os preet

loved their rain romance

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8

Very nice. Keep writing

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Really romantic OS dear..

You just kindled the romance in all of us Preet😳

loved the way Sanskaar played guitar for Swara..he truly loves her 'ziddi' trait😊and fulfils her every zidd.how sweet😃

and finally he started loving the rain all because of his Swara😳Awesomely written yaar