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Posted: 10 years ago
roli is in a very big danger...where is sid???
didi update fast...i can't see roli in this much pain
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Posted: 10 years ago

archana dear,I feel like I'm also working at TECHSEARCH along with ROSID n watching them daily, so closely...ur narration is such beautiful...& very happy to get back to back updates after ur long break...

& I really want Roli to move away from that atul & give her attention to her true love, that's SID...can't wait more archana...

pls send SID ssooonnn to save his ROLI...can't see my poor ROLI in this condition

1 small doubt- When can we expect the beginning of chemistry cum physics cum biology between ROSID!!!😛...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: its_prasanna

archana dear,I feel like I'm also working at TECHSEARCH along with ROSID n watching them daily, so closely...ur narration is such beautiful...& very happy to get back to back updates after ur long break...

& I really want Roli to move away from that atul & give her attention to her true love, that's SID...can't wait more archana...

pls send SID ssooonnn to save his ROLI...can't see my poor ROLI in this condition

1 small doubt- When can we expect the beginning of chemistry cum physics cum biology between ROSID!!!😛...


Thank you dear.

It's going to begin in a few updates😉 In fact, it's already happening without their own knowledge.
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Posted: 10 years ago

WARNING: The following update may contain scenes which are disturbing for some readers. I do not intend to offend anyone; rather my only intention is to portray at least some of the horrors of real-life sexual assault and the aftermath of the same. Please proceed at your own risk.


UNDER THE SKY LANTERNS - PART 36

An original story by Archana Vinod

BACK TO SID AND ANAND

Siddhant and Anand wait helplessly in their car amidst an unbelievable traffic grid lock.

The air is filled with the furious honks of impatient motorists. Some of them stick their heads out and scream cuss words.

ANAND: What's going on? Why's this happening now?

Siddhant is tongue-tied. He clenches the wheel nervously, his knuckles pale. He picks up his phone and tries Roli's number again. But...

"The number you're trying to reach is either switched off or not reachable. Please try again later!"

He hangs up with no clue what to do. They can't go on like this.

SIDDHANT: Uncle, you take the wheel. I'll go and check out what's happening.

ANAND: Alright.

Sid steps out of his car and trots through the traffic all the way to the front. On his way, he passes by a loaded ambulance. The patient fights for his life in it.

SIDDHANT: (to a man on a bike) What's going on? Is it an accident?

BIKER: (frustrated) No! Some minister is passing by, so these buggers have blocked up the streets.

Siddhant hurries to the front and finds the road blocked up to motorists. Five hefty police men guard the gates as they wait for the minister to pass by. Siddhant struggles his way to one of the cops.

SIDDHANT: (to the police man) Sir...

The man just glares at him.

SIDDHANT: Sir, my friend is in trouble. She's been kidnapped by someone and anything could happen. I need to get to her soon.

POLICEMAN: (rudely) Just get back!

SIDDHANT: Sir, please try to understand. If I don't -

POLICEMAN: I said get back!

SIDDHANT: I just need to get past. Please under"

POLICEMAN: Just get back! Now!

Siddhant is dumbfounded and helpless. Looks like they're going to be stuck up for a while! There's only one way...

He pulls out his phone and rings up Anand as he shoulders his way past the traffic.

ANAND: Hello?

SIDDHANT: Uncle, trouble. Some minister is passing by in a while, so police has blocked the streets. I'll do one thing. I'm going to cross the street and hail a cab or auto from the other side and get there.

ANAND: Cross the street? Do you think that's safe?

SIDDHANT: That's the only way.

ANAND: Not a good move Siddhant. Those cops...

SIDDHANT: I'll explain to them.

ANAND: I'll bring the car there.

SIDDHANT: (hurries to the gate) Thanks Uncle.

ANAND: Just keep me in the loop. Let me know if anything's wrong. And be careful.

SIDDHANT: Okay. (hangs up)

MEANWHILE

Roli is kneed flat to the mud by Prakash. She puts up a mighty struggle, sinking under his weight as she does.

Prakash is on fire! He jumps onto her belly and wildly rips off the remaining bits of fabric off her already battered frame.

Roli shrieks at the top of her lungs and tries to overthrow him. But her assailant clamps her mouth shut and grapples her arm to pin her in place.

She bites his hand fiercely and almost chews it off!

PRAKASH: (pulls off in agony) Awwwrrrghhh!

He checks out his bloody hand. Roli's lips are smeared with his blood. She spits at him furiously.

PRAKASH: Arrrgghhh! You bitch!

SMASH! He hits her viciously across the face. The second time, he punches her with his iron-hard knuckles! Roli's cheeks are almost battered from the blow!

Raman gets a bottle of cheap whisky from the cab and begins to gulp it down neat. He's ready for some action.

Meanwhile, Prakash has already begun to drive brutally into Roli, ramming hard into her pelvis in the process. Her spine and hip joints begin to crack and pop under pressure. The man's weight on her chest and belly is unbearable! She's breathless and in horrendous pain!

A desperate whimper of fear and pain escapes her bloody lips as he enters her mercilessly, driving in deep and tearing through the tender membranes... ripping the skin off her pristine inner walls.

She still fights with all her remaining power and dignity, screaming and clawing fiercely at his face and hair with the hope that he'll spare her. But he is ruthless.

He slaps her hard across the face and bores in harder and faster. Her cries of pain and plea are muffled out as he twists her face and buries it in the mud. She wriggles with all her might, desperate to be free, but...

BACK TO SIDDHANT

Siddhant walks a good distance away from the policemen and begins to cross the street but he gets noticed.

POLICEMAN: Hey! Hey you! Get back!

Siddhant is confused whether to stop or go on. He doesn't stop and continues to cross the street.

The policemen sense trouble and quickly bound to him. Siddhant holds up his hands in defense.

One of them grapples him savagely and forces him to his knees.

POLICEMAN: Where do you think you were going? Huh?

SIDDHANT: (breathless) Sir, I told you. My friend is in grave danger. I have to get to her soon. But my car is stuck back there.

POLICEMAN: Do you think I'm a fool?

SIDDHANT: Please try to understand. It's the truth. If I don't get to her soon something terrible might happen.

The other cops join the former.

POLICEMAN 2: What? What is it?

POLICEMAN: (to Siddhant) Put your hands up and turn around!

SIDDHANT: (stunned) What?

POLICEMAN: I said turn around!

Things are beginning to take a nasty turn. He does as he's told.

The policeman hastily runs his hands over Siddhant's torso, arms, down the legs... His hand comes to rest on his hip pocket.

POLICEMAN: What's this?

He digs into Sid's pocket and pulls out a Swiss army pocket knife.

POLICEMAN: (glares suspiciously at Sid) Why were you carrying this?

SIDDHANT: (realizes that he's in trouble) What?

POLICEMAN: Why were you carrying this?

SIDDHANT: But- I always carry it.

POLICEMAN: Really?

SIDDHANT: It's always comes in handy at the office. It's always in my pocket.

POLICEMAN: You're under arrest.

SIDDHANT: What? But why? No"

Siddhant is forced on to his feet and cuffed.

SIDDHANT: No listen. You can't do this. My friend's in trouble. Please listen to me.

But the policemen pay no heed. They lead him to one of the jeeps to take him away.

... TO BE CONTINUED

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Posted: 10 years ago

WARNING: The following update may contain scenes which are disturbing for some readers. I do not intend to offend anyone; rather my only intention is to portray at least some of the horrors of real-life sexual assault and the aftermath of the same. Please proceed at your own risk.

UNDER THE SKY LANTERNS - PART 37

An original story by Archana Vinod

Prakash's grind slows down. He moans in intense pleasure and seems to be in high heaven as he reaches climax.

Roli is still under him, bruised, battered and broken. She has finally given up the fight. All what can be heard from her are faint whimpers.

Prakash finally shoots in his load and crumbles onto her breathlessly.

Roli moans painfully at the end of it all.

RAMAN: (impatient) Aren't you done yet? Hurry up!

Prakash's world reels and falls back into place. He had just died, gone to heaven and back. He rolls off her and lays flat on the gritty earth, taking in deep puffs of air. A satisfied but eerie smile spreads across his face.

Raman closes in and checks out an almost unconscious Roli. She's fully stripped now, but scratched, bitten, bruised and bleeding at several places. Her once smooth, silky skin and perfectly gorgeous curves give Raman a raging hard-on.

But he feels a bit mischievous and decides to have some fun before he starts his game. He opens up his whisky bottle and sprinkles some of the liquor over her wounds.

The flaming spirit burns her bare and makes her want to writhe in pain, but she just can't. All what she can do is utter a barely audible whine.

Raman laughs wickedly.

PRAKASH: Don't waste it you bas***d.

RAMAN: Who's wasting?

This time he pulls apart her legs and pours the spirit down her bare and tyrannized groin.

ROLI: (whimpers helplessly) Hey Matarani!

Raman breaks up into peals of laughter.

Prakash pulls himself into a sitting position, grabs the bottle from Raman and takes a huge swig out of it.

Raman: (laughs) Matarani? Where is she now? Huh? (kicks her in the rib) Where is she?

Roli breaks down into a helpless sob. More than the pain, what haunts her is the horror of the entire situation. She has been beaten, mistreated and humiliated. She has been treated like scum. She's not even sure if what's happening is for real.

Raman pulls her off the mud and throws her face down a few feet away.

Prakash snickers at this.

But Roli feels nothing. Her mind wanders off to her parents. Her heart breaks as fleeting images of the love of her father and mother flash in front of her eyes...

- "Be careful," warns her father.

- "Keep your phone with you at all times," reminds her mother.

- Roli hugs her mother happily as she prepares her favourite sweet.

- Roli playfully plucks a few hairs off her father's hairy chest and makes him yelp in pain.

Her eyes are bloodshot. She feels spaced out as she lies face down on the sand.

Raman forces Roli onto her knees and clamps his arms tightly around her waist.

She feels him bore in from behind, clamping her waist shut and cutting off her air supply with each hump.

ROLI: No... no... stop...

He sodomizes her savagely, humping wickedly like a dog desperate for lust, like there's no tomorrow, like there's no judgment awaiting him at all!

BACK TO SIDDHANT

Siddhant is dragged to the jeep.

SIDDHANT: Sir, trust me. My friend really is in trouble. You're free to check my phone. She had tried calling me! I -

POLICEMAN 3: The minister is coming. Take your positions!

Siddhant is left under the first cop's custody while the others return to the gates.

The minister's car finally closes in with an Indian flag fluttering on a post welded to the vehicle's bonnet. The car is escorted and followed by several police jeeps.

SIDDHANT: Sir, she's in trouble! Please try to understand.

POLICEMAN: Be quiet!

SIDDHANT: We have spoken to commissioner Nitin too. He knows about this!

The name Nitin' seems to knock some sense into the policeman. He looks at Siddhant curiously.

SIDDHANT: Here, take my phone and talk to Anand Thackeray. He's my relative. He had spoken with Nitin sir. Please...

The policeman begins to feel that the boy is serious after all. He pulls out Siddhant's phone from his pocket and picks out Anand's number and dials him up.

ANAND: Hello Siddhant. Where are you?

BACK TO ROLI

Raman collapses to the ground with Roli under him. She gets almost buried in the earth under his frame.

He lays there for a moment to recuperate from his workout' while Prakash stares blankly into the distance and gulps down the whisky.

Raman finally pulls himself off the poor girl and puts on his clothes.

Roli's mind drifts off to Atul:

- Back in college, Roli sits under a tree with her classmates, laughing and talking. Her attention falls on a very handsome Atul making his way in through the gates. He catches her eye and smiles.

- At a party: Atul finds Roli returning from the restroom and holds her back. He pins her to the wall.

ATUL: I saw you looking at me a while back.

ROLI: (nervous) What? No... I-I...

ATUL: What did you think? That I like you?

Roli watches him with a sinking feeling.

ATUL: You've got it wrong then.

His words almost shatter her.

ATUL: I don't like you. I'm crazy about you...

Raman spits at her and prods her in the side before walking off to Prakash.

RAMAN: (takes the bottle and swigs from it) What are you thinking?

Prakash is quiet for a while. The neighbouring river can be heard rumbling threateningly.

PRAKASH: (looks towards the river) We must get rid of her. Without a trace.

... TO BE CONTINUED

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow man...this is the real stuff...the real world...sad but truth...very well written 👏 😭
In real life there r no heroes only villains...n u r bold enough to show that...hats off...the scenes r realistic n roli's pain evident...super keep it up...
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Originally posted by: nilman

Wow man...this is the real stuff...the real world...sad but truth...very well written 👏 😭
In real life there r no heroes only villains...n u r bold enough to show that...hats off...the scenes r realistic n roli's pain evident...super keep it up...



Thank you dear. To be honest, I was a little scared to put it up. Had to chose my words carefully. It would be wonderful to show Sid saving her in time but that would be too filmy. In the real world it doesnt happen.

Anyways I decided to take the risk with a warning.
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Thank you dear. To be honest, I was a little scared to put it up. Had to chose my words carefully. It would be wonderful to show Sid saving her in time but that would be too filmy. In the real world it doesnt happen.

Anyways I decided to take the risk with a warning.

Thank god Archana you took the risk. I am totally blown away with your style of writing . It seems all so real . as if one is watching the scene played in front of ones eyes. Keep up the good work.👍🏼 👏 Looking forward to more updates 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Archana_Vinod



Thank you dear. To be honest, I was a little scared to put it up. Had to chose my words carefully. It would be wonderful to show Sid saving her in time but that would be too filmy. In the real world it doesnt happen.

Anyways I decided to take the risk with a warning.


well done that u've decided to take the risk...
more than a ff its a real story happening all around us...really feeling sad for the victims who felt the pain as roli felt in this ff...nd i'm really praying for a better tomorrow...bcoz nw i'm with my parents nd they will always come along with me where ever i'm going bt when i'm looking forward i'm really afraid to go anywhere alone...
wat u said is right ...if sid comes to save roli, it would've been looked too filmy nd that will never ever happen in this real world...
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Originally posted by: justloverosid

Thank god Archana you took the risk. I am totally blown away with your style of writing . It seems all so real . as if one is watching the scene played in front of ones eyes. Keep up the good work.👍🏼 👏 Looking forward to more updates😛



Thank you dear 😃

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