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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: vari3241
So beautiful ...thanks for writing ... It filled d void:)

aww thanks for ur appreciation too 😊

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

awesoem
very nicely written
i hope u turn this into ss
thx for the pm

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.HookandHybrid.

@.HookandHybrid.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

that was an awesome oS...
Thanx for the pm...
I really love both your SS...

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Archita

@ITV_Loverr

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Wow...di, la jawab update. Superb! Just awesome as always. I know it's not dek forum but still I want to know, when will u update Wheels of fortune? Thanks for the pm.

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saneha85

@saneha85

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: shana0127

thanks mandy will try to write more if something inspires in current track filhaal tou working on the ff 😊

which ff do let me know... by the way... great..os...

u have something in ur wrighting shana

that can attach people with story…m not fan of saraswatichandra but I read the full update and want to read more…

and reminder for my kismet ka pahiya….please update soon

love

smita

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: saneha85

which ff do let me know... by the way... great..os...
u have something in ur wrighting shana
that can attach people with story'm not fan of saraswatichandra but I read the full update and want to read more'
and reminder for my kismet ka pahiya'.please update soon
love
smita

Hi Sneha😃

well i was talking of my new FF named When Past Comes Calling ... here is the prologue have a look ...dont worry u dont need to be fan of the show to read it...coz it is wholesome in itself

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/79379528

btw do watch Saraswatichandra that guy Gautam Rode the male lead is damn good

as for Wheels of Fortune ,I will update its final chapter very soon 😊...its final chapter so i have to work hard on it ...but dont worry I promise u all magic this new FF named When Past Comes calling ...do read its prologue and tell if u like it

Love u a lot
🤗

Shana

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TheMogambo

@TheMogambo

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

...i have nothing to write...

have to read it again...and once out of the trance..will write...

you are a hell of a writer...

next time..i want a PM...pleezzz

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

awesum...
this serial is my fav one and this os was just lovely...

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Jjoshim

@Jjoshim

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Lovely! Loved the rain part. I could visualise the bogenbalia on their terrace ( where he has seen kusum bringing in tea) and rains ! Would have loved to have more of inner turmoils of Kumud in that scene!

The idea was so good of surahi thing, rain, she in kitchen their talks. Very fresh!

I thought I could have done without the physical part so much in the beginning and would have wanted it later. But I know some people found it romantic, it's all individual choice, so no complaints.

Over all I could visualise it happening in front of my eyes. It was so good! Waiting for more!

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Jjoshim
Lovely! Loved the rain part. I could visualise the bogenbalia on their terrace ( where he has seen kusum bringing in tea) and rains ! Would have loved to have more of inner turmoils of Kumud in that scene!

The idea was so good of surahi thing, rain, she in kitchen their talks. Very fresh!

I thought I could have done without the physical part so much in the beginning and would have wanted it later. But I know some people found it romantic, it's all individual choice, so no complaints.

Over all I could visualise it happening in front of my eyes. It was so good! Waiting for more!

well its an OS and i wanted it complete in itself like a short story therefore i tried to bring in all the ingredients ...thoght the prayshchit part and how kumud lost her waist band were the unanswered question in the os for those who dont watch the show😕

when i write i try to be wholesome as i have few of my special die hard readers who dont even watch the show 😆

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