Without You - A SanDhir OS 'Last part UPDATED'

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CastleOfDreams

@CastleOfDreams

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

awww !!!thank you !!
i wanted you all to feel sad ! and i love writing sad stories even though i love happy endings !but i like to think of myself not a sadist !
i 'm so happy you liked my writing style !
yes !! i'll definitely pm you !!
i'll continue soon dear !!
thanks for reading :)
it really means alot to me !! satyamaayittum !
atte njanum malayaaliya !😃😛

Nice to meet u mallu...🤗

Pettannu update cheyyanam ketto...😃

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: DEVU46

Nice to meet u mallu...🤗
Pettannu update cheyyanam ketto...😃

pinne !!!
njan pettannu update cheyyam !!!
ente school works vegan theerukayanenkil vegam updateum kittum !
nice to meet you too dear malayali !!

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

finally updated the last part :)

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Himani Aggarwal

@anki08

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Hey Kikki,,It is beautiful and touching to the core,,to say the least...I feel like 'satisfied' after reading this,,i dont think that it could have been more endearing and spellbounding...You have beautifully captured the strings of human emotions..We all somewhere are so engrossed in big losses that we hardly recognise the small happy waves,,it was nowhere overdone..Just enchanting the way it was...

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Aisha

@RandhirHolic

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

I absolutely looovvveeeddd this :) it was really heart touching...specially the last para

Pls write more😛

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Anshika

@MainPareshaan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

*mouth open in shock*
Did?
Did?
Did I?
Did I?
Did I just?
Did I just?
*screams* DID I JUST READ THE MOST BEAUTIFULLY PENNED OS?
Oh yes I did!!
Trust me!
I have read many romantic sandhir os
But this wasnt a sandhir os
This os was entirely dedicated to Randhir and his little princess ZARA
A total put of box idea
Which I truly loved!!
The flow of emotions
The penning of facial expressions
The sadness
The sole reason for Randhir to live, his daughter ZARA!
Okay! Since I am totally in love with your writings
You seriously gotta write more and more
And congratz you have earned a new stalker for your writings
Now I am really looking forward to read your other works
Keep writing more and more

Love
Anshika

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sparky

@sparkling_gems

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Sanyukta gone from his forever but left a part of her with him in form of Zara, their daughter and now she is light of his life... very touchy.. very beautiful..