Without You - A SanDhir OS 'Last part UPDATED'

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CastleOfDreams

@CastleOfDreams

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Kiki...

Ur OS made me cry...😭 *No probs* Such an heart touching os.😊

Very well written...Each nd Every thing was perfect...👏

I loved it very much... The way u written was just awesome..👏

I also loved d name Zara..😃. Feelling bad for Randhir..😭

Update soon... am really waiting to read d nxt part..😛

Keep writing... Continue soon...😊 If u cam plz pm me😉

Nd i want ask u sum thing... 😊R u a malayali???😉( if yes am also a malayali!!!)😃

With love❤️

Kathika

Edited by DEVU46 - 11 years ago

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Kiki!!!🤗
Thiss was so awesommee !!
Mazzaa aa gaya!!😃
Very very emotional!❤️
Well a kuch kuch hota hai scene😆
My fav movie❤️
Why did you have to give this a sad ending?😳
Rahul ke liye anjali thi par Radhir je liye?😳
Pleej second part mein Sanyu ko zinda karde! Pleej🤣

Luv Ani❤️

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shreya

@....ShreyA....

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

dis is da frst os i read of sandhir ...

n da frst oly an amazin one ...

so cute ... a perfect emotional one ...

so carin randhir ...

n da name zara was catchy ...

loved da os to core ...

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: DEVU46
Kiki...
Ur OS made me cry...😭 *No probs* Such an heart touching os.😊
Very well written...Each nd Every thing was perfect...👏
I loved it very much... The way u written was just awesome..👏
I also loved d name Zara..😃. Feelling bad for Randhir..😭
Update soon... am really waiting to read d nxt part..😛
Keep writing... Continue soon...😊 If u cam plz pm me😉
Nd i want ask u sum thing... 😊R u a malayali???😉( if yes am also a malayali!!!)😃

With love❤️
Kathika

awww !!!thank you !!
i wanted you all to feel sad ! and i love writing sad stories even though i love happy endings !but i like to think of myself not a sadist !
i 'm so happy you liked my writing style !
yes !! i'll definitely pm you !!
i'll continue soon dear !!
thanks for reading :)
it really means alot to me !! satyamaayittum !
atte njanum malayaaliya !😃😛

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: aniiee
Kiki!!!🤗
Thiss was so awesommee !! thanku thanku !!!!😆
Mazzaa aa gaya!!😃 sad things padke sirf apko hi maza aayega !!🤣
Very very emotional!❤️ well i meant to make it that way !!! " patts myself "😆🤣
Well a kuch kuch hota hai scene😆 hehehe !!! my filmy Ani di !!😆
My fav movie❤️i love that movie too !!!
Why did you have to give this a sad ending?😳 it's not the end Di !! it's the begining !!! don't worry the ending's not sad !!
Rahul ke liye anjali thi par Radhir je liye?😳uff aap bhi nah !!! it's simple !!😳randhir ke liye Zara hai !! 😆
Pleej second part mein Sanyu ko zinda karde! Pleej🤣
what the !!!
diii !!!!!!!! you are really something !!!😆
how can i bring a dead sanyu back ??? i can bring a zombie sanyu !😆
how's that for a change !!😆🤣

Luv Ani❤️love you more !!

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: shreya_VD_AJS
dis is da frst os i read of sandhir ...
n da frst oly an amazin one ...
so cute ... a perfect emotional one ...
so carin randhir ...
n da name zara was catchy ...
loved da os to core ...

ohhh !!! i am so so glad that this is the first OS you read on Sandhir
i'm so glad that you liked it :)
thanks alot for reading dear !!😊
it really means alot to me !!
thank you so much :)😳

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Anshika

@MainPareshaan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

*runs and gives you a big hug*
Diii(hope u dont mind me calling u di)
This was perfect!!
Those emotions
Those moments of love
Those smiles
Those tears
Those sad smiles
Those tears of happiness
Those fears of losing
Those teases
Were perefectly penned down
How can you call this beautiful piece of writing crap?
We want an update as soon as possible!
The idea pf the story is perfect!
Hope u update soon
Pm me when u update
And keep writing more and more os ss and ff!
Love
Anshika

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Avni

@avni775

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

u made me cry 😭😭

it ws awesomeee!!!!!!

plz part 2. 😭

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: MyLiFeMyRuLeS..
*runs and gives you a big hug*
Diii(hope u dont mind me calling u di)
This was perfect!!
Those emotions
Those moments of love
Those smiles
Those tears
Those sad smiles
Those tears of happiness
Those fears of losing
Those teases
Were perefectly penned down
How can you call this beautiful piece of writing crap?
We want an update as soon as possible!
The idea pf the story is perfect!
Hope u update soon
Pm me when u update
And keep writing more and more os ss and ff!
Love
Anshika

"sees your comment and jumps in joy !!!
then come and envelope you in a tight bone crushing bear hug "
you can definitely call me Di !
i don't know you but i love you already !!!
yes i'm serious !!! you don't know how happy with this comment of yours !!
i never thought a stranger will make me this happy !!
and i hope to know you more !
you just made me feel soo sooo good about my writing with your comment !
i am soo flattered !
i'm glad you found my os good !!
thanks alot for reading dear !!
really means alot !
and i'll definitely pm you :)

love
-kiki😳