I thoroughly enjoyed reading dis story.
D story begun wid a shy couple but ended wid... *ahem*
The intense nd divine moment of luv shared by Randhir made my heart pound faster.
Ur descriptive writing made d moment more tempting. No doubt my cheeks have a crimson hue... *blushes*
U hv brilliantly personified both Randhir nd Sanyukta.
I hv never read such a passionate and sizzling OS.
I admire ur creativity nd ur radiant writing.
The entire story ws perfectly portrayed nd d flow ws flawless.
It ws such a lovely nd sweet OS but it ws so very short...!!!!!
Do write more SanDhir OS...
I want u to write a lengthy one next time.