FF:- Saathi Re(updated) part-15- page 79 9th feb - Page 53

fantabulous shaina...its the most wonderful update i've been waiting for...lovely scenes...both for gohem and raji...to be really honest i am kind of liking goji / jipi...it feels awesome to get them together...😳they are both wonderful ppl...if not going by the looks...i would love to see gopi and jigar together...jigar is most understanding and lovable person ever...both onscreen and in fan fictions ...rahem...they both look good as friends ...and lovable friends...but lot of attitude eh!!...gopi and jigar need no words...going by ur ffs...characters...they really compliment each other..and understand each other...well...i want gopi to be more stern to ahem and make him realize that he too loves her...may be jealousy track...😳...really waiting for ur update...pls PM me...lovely lovely!!!...lovely as ever...

shaina i love your ff u did wonderful i dont have word to say just wow i think ahem will be jelous of jigar more now has he love gopi thanx for pm come soon

fabulous update shaina...👏

hello guys.. i never thought i could make it but some how i did..here is the maha update..hope u love it as i dint complete the entire story yet...

the maha update story wil continue for another two updates...

part-13

"dont u know.."kinjal shouted excited. "kaki have decided to get jigar married with gopi...they are getting engaged...!!!"


"WHAT!!"rashi and ahem shouted together. "how?"rashi asked. "when?"ahem asked. "dont know nothing about those details yet..i heard kaki speaking to gopi" "did she say yes?"rashi asked "dont know..mom came at the exact moment..but my bet is she wil.. i mean whats their to reject jigar bhai..they know each other very well. both have similar mentaliites...and" "Ahem!!"rashi shouted..but ahem went off like a bullet fired from the gun leaving rashi frightened and kinjal confused.//Freeze


1 hour back...

"My..My...some one became a hero!!"kinjal teased. gopi smiled. "are u still upset over moms words" "no i am not" "i know u are...i am sorry..u know mom is not bad..its just her temper speaks at times." "i know"gopi smiled. "i know u know!!"jigar smiled at the door and gopi looked and smiled at him. "so how is my little sister" "happy..happier..happiest"kinjal laughed. "so how come kaki noticed we are mising" "er...i told her that u all four went to movie" "whats wrong in that" "i said a hindi movie name"kinjal bit her tongue..and gopi and jigar looked at each other and said "ahem!!"

it was a open scecret to all that ahem hated hindi movies. "my mistake"kinjal said and left. gopi laughed and jigar looked at her curiously. "how did u know?" "know what?" "that ahem hates hindi movies..." the smile vanished off her face..."kinjal told me"gopi said promplty keeping her eyes down. she could feel jigar gaze on her and after some time he relaxed and sat on the bed. "How are u doing?" "what happend to me?" "u know..after what kaki said..." "its not koki auntie mistake" "yes i know"jigar said bitterness filled in his voice. gopi bit her lip. "i think we should leave this matter right now"

"why do u always support him?"jigar opened up fuming with anger. "i dont.." "gopi look at me"jigar ordered and reclutantly she turned towards him eyes streaming with tears. "why dont u tell me his name?"jigar pleaded again "afterall he have done...how can u let him go free" "even u cant do anything after knowing his name" "try me" "jigar...i want the past to be remained buried forever..i dont want it to come to me always" "u were never like this..u used to accept the pbm before..now u are running from it" "No i am not" "yes u are..i can see that..thats why u have planned to stay in abroad for studies

and i know u are not planning to come back too. gopi u cant run away from this pbm...after all these years..u have ignored it and lived ur life..but always its coming to u...this can mean only one thing...the fate wants u to fight..i want u to fight...live ur life again, i want my gopi back who can challenge anyone for a righteous path than this gopi who bends infront of everyone so easily." "saying a lie..means i dont accept defeat jigar." "thats what i mean gopi..lieing to get saved..is not ur behaviour..its some one else" "sometimes...a lie is much better than the worse truth." "not matter how hard u try

the truth comes out anyday" "if i am keeping back my scecrets u are doing the same too. Unitl now u have never mentioned why did u left the house so suddenly, leaving everyone behind. why did u spent 5 years in exile jigar..and i know the moment i leave..u wil leave too" "i have my bussiness to handle" "u have ur bussiness to handle here too" "this is not my bussiness it belongs to someone else." "it belongs to ur family" "sometimes to win ...we have to make some sacrifices.." "a win is not considered to be anything jigar..until u have some one to share with" "people wil come to me if they like me"

"how would they know if u keep so much distance from them...the only key to clear misunderstanding is to open up" "some pbms are much more than just misunderstandings...neither is urs..nor is mine..."and jigar left.


"Hai Hai..what are u saying bhabhi..."urmi wailed. "my rashi getting married in some other house..how would she do..how wil she live...she got so much hopes on ahem" "urmila...even we gave chance to ahem aand rashi but they dont want to come out of their friendship maybe..we are seeing things wrong..maybe we are seeing their relation wrong..so its best to get them settled before the matter gets out of hand and people began to talk..it would be bad for ur daugther"parag explained. "But but..." "urmila this match is good for rashi. they are similar like our family with traditional values and the boy would be in states..

so rashi wont have any pbm in houshold works as they wil be only she and her husband in states, easy to manage."kokila said "and also...its not like rashi would leave us forever she wil keep in touch with us..or we can tell the family that u would accompany rashi to the states to help her out intially"hetal explained and urmi face lit up hearing the last lines. "if u say so bhabhi..i want my daughter to be happy..thats all" hetal turn towards koki and said "time to tell ahem!" "he can be handled...all i pray is to keep him silent during the meeting" "ha dont worry...i know ahem is not that irresponsible" "i doubt that hetal

he can be really mean when it wants to come things done in his way" Hetal laughed nodding. "hetal..i wanted to ask u something.." "say kokila" "all the children are geting married..its only jigar left in the family..dont u think we should get him married too..i have a real nice family in view" "kokila i wanted to speak to u about this too...actually i have a girl in mind too" "who?" "Gopi" "what!! hetal have u gone mad..that girl..u already saw what she have done yesterday" "it was a misunderstanding which was cleared" "and do u buy that jigar asked them to go to disco?" "Our children might respect us but they are not the same outside and inside kokila"

"they have their own world and scecrets hidden from us" "it depends on the upbringins and i know our children dont have such secrets hidden from us." "maybe..but sometimes...its good to make some mistakes and learn from them." "its better to have a flawless life than to rectify the flaws hetal" "i wont argue with u because i know u nevr give up, but i think gopi is not the girl she seems to be and she is hiding something from us." "really hetal..i cant see why u like her, being modern is not a issue but though being modern some values are to be maintaind too, arguinng with elders, saying lies, not beliving in god,

and who knows i bet she dont know the kitchen spelling either too." Hetal smiled "i always told u stop assessing people at the first look, sometimes situations and sometimes even our own look misjudge us. u saw gopi argued with u but u dint saw the affection she had for kinjal, u saw she lied to u, but u dint saw the concern she had for our family, and coming to her opinions..its not compulsory that everyone should pray god and all...its her opinion and coming to kitchen work..come on kokila which girl learns everything now a days before hand." "i told what i think hetal..but if u still think that gopi is a good choice for jigar then i cant say anything"kokila said and turned to leave.

"did u ask gopi about the proposal" "not yet kokila..i wil talk to her now. i hope she wil agree" "dont worry she wil"kokila said and left and hetal dint miss the sarcasm in her voice.


"can i come in?" "of course auntie...what a thing to ask" "what to do..staying with my disciplaned son i ofteen forget to act normally" "Auntie u too!!"gopi complained shaking her head and hetal laughed. "its good that he got such a lovely friend in u who understands him really well" "auntie jigar is really a nice person, and not boring at all"gopi added eyeing hetal. hetal laughed again "achaa baba..sorry..ur friend is not boring at all..happy" gopi smiled. "i see that he is really happy being with u dikra..and i want this happiness to be in this house forever" gopi looked at her confused "of course he wil auntie...he have u all,,he have u!!"

"sometimes parents love is not enough for the child at a stage dikra...they should get much more affection than a parent should give and that affection will come with a true patner only" gopi looked at hetal slightly confused..realization slowly begining to enter her brain. "gopi...i want u to be my daugther in every sense and every meaning..gopi...i want u to get married to jigar" slowly shock replaced the bright eyes and the smile vanished from her face. "Auntie...me..but..." "what happend dikra...dont u like jigar?" "no auntie..i like him but..." "wow"kinjal shouted and hugged gopi dashing at her. "wow..wow..wow...congrats gopi..i mean..gopi bhabhi..."

"Kinjal!!!!"koki shouted and both the girls jumped in the air. "where did ur manners go..cant u see that ur kaki is talking something imp here...and where did u learn the habit of snooping around..go out" "ji maa..sorry"kinjal said and left at high heels and gopi hoped that she shouldnt meet ahem at any cost right now. "dikra..what happend, dont worry...no need to get tensed...say whatever u have in mind" "auntie...did u ask jigar about this" "whats their to ask jigar for"kokila said "in our house..parents decide childrens future...no need to take permissions from everyone." "No auntie i dint mean it..i..jigar never said about this anything"

"ha..i wanted to learn ur opinion first later i wil talk to jigar...and i know he wont say no for u.." "auntie..first talk to jigar pls.." "arrey dont worry dikra..take ur own time and both of u think well and say k"hetal smiled and left and koki gave a top to bottom glance at a nervous gopi and went away and gopi collapsed on her bed.

"WHAT!!"jigar shouted totally offguard. "what happend dikra...dont u like gopi?"hetal asked worrying. "nahin maa..woh..sorry...woh,..i mean i never thought about it and i never expected gopi to be the one" "ha ha..both of u are unique pieces..she was saying the same too that she dint expect u to take intrest in her. i mean which world u are in...u think alike..both ur mentalities are same..u are happy being around her..if someone would have been in ur place then he would have already jumped to marriage by now" "But mom!"jigar argued "its that i dint think of marriage yet..and.." "Jigar..all ur cousins are getting married and its time for u to settle down in life too."kokila said entering in the room.

"Hetal thinks that gopi is a good choice for u..and i see that u spend a lot of time around her too" "kaki..even ahem spends a lot of time with rashi..it doesnt mean that they should get married too" "thats what i am saying jigar..before marriage and after marriage situations changes. This family wont repeat the same mistake again. we thought that ahem would marry rashi and delayed her marriage, and the result was full of choas...whererver we go all are asking only 1 question to us that why are they not getting marrried? we dont want the same situation here too. when ur own mother thought that u and gopi are a good pair then obviously the outsiders wil talk too.

so before they get the chance i want to declare the news sooon...and maybe we can get u engaged with ahems engagement too and then we can prepare for rashis engagement fastly" "Rashi engagement?"jigar questioned. "yes..we have talked rashi marriage proposal to the mittals..." "But i dint know anything" "since when did elders started to take childrens opinions in this house jigar"kokila scolded and jigar bent his head down"sorry kaki" "i dont know what ur choice would be jigar but i want to say one thing as final..whoever the girl u choose she have to abide by our rules and traditions and their wont be any exceptions to anyone. So think well and let me know soon."kokila ordered and went away.

Hetal came near jigar "i thought u liked her"hetal said in a appolozy tone. "maa..dont be sorry..i do like gopi but...its so sudden..and" "dikra..sometimes some decisions are left to the time...if u have someone in life then tell me..i dont mind" "Maa..i..i wil speak to gopi first.." Hetal smiled.."i know my son would not dissapoint me"and left away happy. Jigar took a sigh and sat down thinking. //Freeze over.



"U!!"ahem thundred on gopi making her jump from the bed. "what do u think u are doing?" "ahem..what..are u" "Now stop playing dramas...its over..the game is over...how dare u play with my brothers life." "ahem what...i dont understand" "why are u acting so innocent..u proved exactly the kind of girl i thought u are. First u tried to trap me, when it dint work out then u went after my brother and his family. All u cared was a guy with money who can fulfill ur every desire so until u get that u dont care about anyones feelings. " "ahem stop it..its not like that..listen to me"

"why would i listen to u...u wanted everything u planned..now i am getting everything...u dint come here to neither to trap me or my family..u were right it was not about me it was about jigar. All ur planning was to impress jigar, playing innocent..acting as if ur helping kinjal is to prove that ur worthy of him. even yesterday u lied to prove urself and the result is u are selected as a modi bahu of this house..wow..i should have seen that coming...best friends..thats what u were saying right...do u know the meaning of friendship..dont ever use that word again because people like u bring a real bad name to a pure relation"

gopi eyes hardened with tears and anger "Friendship...u said i dont know the meaning of friendship...but tell me ahem...do u know it? Friends forever!!"gopi said tears streaming out looking at him sadly "this was what u said to me...friends forever...what kind of friendship did u maintain ahem.? u said i played with ur brothers life...then is it fair for u mr.ahem modi to play with my life.? U were the first person i trusted completley. U were the first person i loved completely. U were the only one in my life..and what did i get in result. Mockery , insult and humiliation...so tell me ahem modi...if i am playing with ur family then what did u did with me?"gopi shouted and ahem took a step back.

"was a tiny slap value is much more than my own life mr.modi. all those days, all those words dint mean nothing to u.Was everything dint mean nothing to u at all. I never came close to u ahem,...U did..i never asked for ur friendship...U did...i never crossed my line.ahem...U did.. I never proposed u ahem...U did...Everything.. was planned by u then why are u blaming me today. Did i asked u to love me? Did i ever showed any signs saying that i love u. Even after what u did i accepted everything and kept moving with my life..u are the person who came into my life..before and even today. I never came into ur life ahem..never.

U said to me to move on right..so when i am doing it then why are u stopping me? " "I told u to move on ur life..not to destroy my brothers" "and why do u think that i would do that" "Because u Love me..which girl will marry her ex boyfriends brother until she have a motive. Tell me gopi..if u really are planning to move on ur life..so i ask u one question today..do jigar know about us?" Gopi remained silent looking down. "See.."ahem exclaimed truimphly. "If u really wanted to move..

then u would have said everything to jigar and would then let him decide. U hid this so that he wont reject u, and u can become the modis bahu and take revenge with me." "i dont stoop so low like u mr.modi" "GOPI"ahem raised his hand to slap her and a firm girp stopped him. Rashi came down hurrying and kinjal behind her. Jigar stepped between ahem and gopi fire blazing from eyes. "Leave my hand"ahem thundred. "u dont have any right to touch her."jigar warned.

"so do u!"ahem said. "No mr.Ahem modi..i do..because she is going to be my wife soon and i have every right on her, and only I DO!!"jigar thundred and shock filled the whole room. Silence filled the entire room all of a sudden and ahem and jigar glared at each other. "u dont know anything"ahem said. "Not anymore"jigar said and left his hand and turned towards gopi. "so this is the reason u wont say his name"gopi looked away. Jigar turned towards ahem "i know everything about u two, ur friendship,, ur betrayel everything except ur name..which i know now..mr.ahem modi.

do u know the reason why she never told me ur name..because she dint want to ruin our broken relationship more, if she was a real true vixen then she would have told everyone what u did..but she dint..only to save u..and this family honour. Instead of being thankful to her, u are blaming her for everything like always. why do people always have to suffer for the mistakes u make Mr.modi. if u dont know how to maintain ur life..then why are u spoiling ours." "I know how to maintain my life and my family..no need for ur great advice mr.known it all. I came here to save u being trapped

but if u like so much to go and get trapped, then why do i need to care. it was my duty to warn u and i did...now its upto u to decide." "thanks for the concern bhai..but i can take care of myself and my family too" "So do i" ahem said and turned. "Bhai"jigar called and ahem turned. Jigar landed a hard blow on ahems face and ahem staggered back stunned. kinjal shouted and rashi left forward catching ahem. "U deserved that"jigar said and Ahem rushed like a bullet at jigar grabbed his collar. "AHEM!!"Parag shouted and rashi and gopi struggled to pul the brothers apart.

Slowly ahem relased jiggar collar and stood a few feet away. Kokila nd hetal came inside along with Parag and chirag. "whats going on here?"parag ordered and all remained silent.


"Jigar what happend?"kookila asked. "kaki woh..."jigar started and gopi pullled his hand slighly "bhai and i got into some heated argument," "Jigar what happend to u lately, u are behaving really strange, this is not the way u behave..i dont know whose influence is getting at u"kokila said looking at gopi. "Ahem..u are the elder here...u should control the situation but instead u started to fight."parag questioned. "He started this" "then u should end it"parag said "Fine..support him like always..i always wonder am i really ur son or not" "AHEM!"kokila thundred and ahem left away in anger and rashi followed him out.

Jigar left to the other side and gopi followed him. "what is happening here"hetal worried and koki fell into a deep thinking.


"ouch..." "sorry"rashi mutttered and put the ice pack on ahems face again. "that son of a ..." "Ahem!"rashi warned and ahem stopped himself. "Why do they always support him..its like i am the one who is to blame...i was just trying to save his life..why do i care anyways..is it so wrong to think about ur own family..whatever i did...i did right,...right rashi" rashi looked at him and remained silent. "do u too think that i did wrong too?"ahem thundred. "i wont say that whatever u did was wrong ahem..but i would say that u dint did right either" "what do u mean by that" "why cant u let her go"rashi questioned throwing ahem off the balance.

"what do u mean...i dont care for her...i dont even care her presence" "If u dont consider her as nothing in ur life..then why her presence is bothering u?" "What nonsense is this rashi?" "No ahem..u have to listen to this, u said her to move on her life, u said to her that u hate her, u said her that u wont love her then why are u getting angry when she is trying to forget u. when she is moving on her life." "she is going to marry jigar" "so what!!"rashi shouted.."so what if she marries jigar, why do u care?" "what do u mean..why do i care..she wil leave with me in this house as my brothers wife" "so what if she does this"

"she is my ex-gf for god sake" "can u really say that ahem..i mean..u people never dated, never planned ur life together, all u did was to say 3 words which u dint mean it at all. so how come she actually became ur ex-gf. just by knowing someone wont become ur ex-gf ahem." "she is playing with us" "when jigar dont have any pbm with that..then why do u have it" "why are u supporting him today?" "do u love her?" "what!!" "do u love gopi" "what nonsense..u know i dont..what is her status and what is my status..how can u even think like that" "then why are u bothering her?" "what..now i am bothering her"

"yes u do ahem...u tease her and expect her to play along, u try to come close to her and expect her to accept u, u behave like u own her and expect her to accept that..why should she. i am seeing this a long time ahem..since jigar entered gopis life..all ur concentration is focussed on her. Did u remember when u called anitha, did u remember what u did at office, did u atleast remember what we were talking about. no ahem..u dint remember anything . what if they laugh togehter, stay together, talk together, what wrong in that. why are u so possessive ?..it is enough ahem...its time to let her go now"

"out of all persons i thought u would understand but...i dint expect this from u...What do u think that i am still in love wih her and hence doing all this. i am jealous seeing her with jigar, i am creating a scene to see that she is getting married with jigar. So let me make this clear for once and for all, the reason i look at them constantly is to see what is she playing at. To see how comfortable she forgot me, and moved on her life and remebering her previous so called innocent nature. To all u..u might think that i was stalkng her but the real reason is i was watching her every move. My engagement is just two days away.

what do u think that gopi would remain silent on that day. it would the exact opportunity to her to open our matter. if she really wanted to go out of this house then she would have done it the moment kinjal pbm was solved. no need to stay until today. she could have helped us being away from this house. All the reasons i tried to be close to her is only for the reason because i wanted her help. i needed her help to keep kinjal mind off the matter, i needed her to make a plan, i needed her to recognize the man, i needed her as a albi to save us. This was the reason i dint want u to get involved in this,

If anything would have come out then i could have thrown the blame easily over her, keeping kinjal away from this matter, hence i never included u in this plan. i have never cared for her, not even today. All i cared for was jigar, i was waiting for an opportunity to expose her true nature. I wanted to put a final stop to this gopis character in my life overall so that she would never come back again. all those observations was not about her, i waas observing how she behaved so friendly with jigar and how she made him play to her tunes. But i never expected that she would backstab me with my family."

"Ahem...u are doing the same mistake again...even before u judged a person wrong and we know how worse it hit us, now u are making the same mistake again. u are not seeing gopi as the person she is but seeing her the person u want her to be..stop it ahem..u are doing wrong again" "Ahem modi.never does anything wrong...i dont blame u rashi..u trust people easily but i know what she can be upto..i thought she was to take revenge on me..but today i realized that she had a complete different motive. i know her very well more than u...i did my best to save jigar..but i cant do anything if he dont want to be saved...but one thing i am telling u rashi...dont ever say that i love her again...ever"



"i think some one is angry"gopi teased and jigar looked at her seriously. "how do u take this as a joke" "ur brother made my life half a joke and u comepleted the remaining" "meaning" "meaning what was that..gopi is my wife dialougue, i dint said yes yet" "will u say yes to anyone" gopi remained silent. "its was a nice thing that u dint told me before...now its really difficult to imagine him as my elder brother." "Dont hate him" "why do u still support him?" "its not what do u think, jigar, it dont matter to me what ahem says to me, some or other time we wil get seperated but u have to stay with him. u are a family"

"what kind of family do u think we are. Just staying together is not called a family gopi, a family means much more than that. we are just two families sharing a house, Thier no caring or sharing..its all about winning and only winning." "what wil u tell hetal auntie now" "i was not asked about anything particular decision..the decision was given to me" "so is it means i cant decide too" Jigar smiled "u may have a exception..what wil u say" "sometimes some decisions should be said at some particular times. can i ask u one thing?" "what" "promise me that u wont bring this topic to ahem again..behave as if it never happend" "why should i do that" "For ur family!!"


"Nervous...?" "Little" gopi smiled and rashi looked at her. "How did u know that jigar was the perfect match for u" "How did u know that ahem is the perfect partner for u" rashi smiled. "u divert the topic very well" gopi smiled. "is ahem k?"gopi asked tenatively. "well...after a lot of cursing and blaming and ice..he is normal now...how is jigar?" "After a lot of lecture, anger and pouting..he is k too" "are u really ready to move on" "sometimes time decides for us." "u still love him dont u?" "some relations have no meaning at all...once ahem told me that no one wil accept kinjal after the truth is out...it can be applied to me too."

"Rashi!" "Ji badi mami.." "their are here..come" "All the best" "dont let ahem hear u"rashi smiled and went down.


"He looks like a monkey, how the hell did he land in states, do u think he bribed the passport manager, what is he doing anyway, do u think he would lose his job in recession " Kinjal banged her head, jigar controlled his temper "what are they doing..why are they taking so much time...idiots..." "Bhai...stop it pls..i cant bear this anymore"kinjal shouted. "what did i do?" "eating our brains" "so" "since half an hour"jigar said "they came"kinjal exclaimed and rashi was taken upstairs and rakesh sat down with his parents. "so ...beta..what do u say"parag asked. "uncle i like rashi a lot..she is really a sensible girl..i dont have any objections"rakesh said

all the family beamed and congratulated one another. "why are they feeling happy as if the match is set" ahem asked. "it is set"kinjal explained. "but what about rashi?" "our family dont have the traditon to take children decision "jigar said. "Nonsense"ahem stormed out to rashi room and jigar and kinjal followed him immediaely. "so..how is rakesh?" "nice.." "just nice" "hmmm.good" "only good" "Gopi!!" "so is it a yes" "our family dont give decisions to us." "thats unfair..i mean its ur life..u should decide with whom u want to spend ur life with" "exactly"ahem shouted coming inside and jigar came and stand beside gopi.

"i wont eat her"ahem said and turned towards rashi "say u dont like him and i wil stop this marriage in seconds" "ahem" 'i knew u wouldnt like him..i wil tell them in this instant.." "Ahem...i dont have any pbm!!"rashi shouted and ahem turned at her shocked. "what!!" "i said...i dont mind marying him..he is really understanding and easy to communicate" "thier no compulsion" "no one is doing that" "u said u wil reject him" "i said i would if i dint like him..u have ur life..now let me lead mine" ahem looked at her hurt and pouted and rashi sighed "ahem listen to me...mami was right..we have to accept this day today or tomorrow

so its better the faster we do..the much happy it would be...and if i marry someone who understands me..then we can continue our friendship even after our lives are settled." ahem turned away pouting. "i promise i wil mail u everday" "make it 3 times a day..and i wil think"ahem said pouting and rashi turned him around and hugged him, ahem hugged back pouting like a child. gopi smiled and jigar looked at her, she dropped her gaze. "seriously..what happend to u all"kokila asked from door step. "is talking a crime too"ahem asked. "we have guests at the down and u people are chit chating here, jigar, ahem u are the sons of this family.

go down and farewell the guests and rashi, kinjal change and come to the kitchen, we have to prepare for the diwali puja." "ji" All left and rashi went to change. "Auntie can i help too"gopi asked. "u still have time for that"koki said and left.


"Happy diwali..." all hugged and eat sweets. "lets play crackers"rashi shouted. "come on"jigar dragged gopi with him. Gopi noticed that ahem was no where to find "where is ahem?" she asked rashi. "ha..he wont come down" "why?" "he is afraid of crackers" "WHAT"gopi smiled. "shh..i dint tell u k" "k" "namaste auntie.." "anitha dikra come, come umang" "happy diwali auntie.." "thank u same to u"koki said. gopi saw kinjal being nervous and left her alone. she saw jigar busy with the new guests and slowly went inside the house and collided with ahem. "watch where u are going" "ur heartbeat came to see u" "whos that" "anitha"

"so what...go and take aarti of her" "she is ur finacee..ur going to get engaged tomorrow..show some affection to her" "i dont need to learn love lessons from u" "fine..then go and play crackers outside.."gopi said and turned to leave and ahem blocked her path like a flash. "what did u say!!" ahem demanded and gopi bit her lip. "nothing"she said backing down. "did rashi told u something?" "no" ahem looked closely at her face and gopi tried hard to stare back but out of habit she dropped her gaze."i knew it.."ahem shouted..."Rashi!!" he turned to leave and gopi stopped him "i wont tell anyone...not even to anitha too..please"

"why do i care if she knows or not" "then why are u cared about me knowing now.." ahem remained silent. "why are u stalking me..go stalk my brother or did u got bored of him so soon" "i came to take crackers out...unlike u..i know how to lit crackers." "what are u trying to say that i dont know how to lit crackers" "obvisously" "then come i wil show u" ahem said and dragged to the mandir.

"ouch..idiot watch where are u going" "sorry donkey" jigar said and rashi grinded her teeth. "give respect to me now... i am not the same rashi from today" "oh right i forgot..u are the rashi who are going to ruin a poor boys future forever" "and u are going to ruin poor gopis future forever poor thing" "poor rakesh" "he liked me" "he must be having sight" "everyone is not as dumb as u are"

"oh yes...some are much much more dumber" "why are u eating my brain go and eat ur gopis" "thats what i am doing..searching her and u dropped in between...obstacle of the millenium" "did she ran away from u so soon"" "well not everyone fate is doomed like rakesh right" "Jigar"rashi shouted and by accident his cracker hit her hand and rashi cried in pain. "rashi!!"jigar cried and caught her hand and dragged her inside.(he he. i think u got this scene)


"thats cracker..." "i know"gopi said. "i was not telling u"ahem snapped. "so this is cracker." "oh god"gopi muttered. "shut up"ahem said..and took the cracker in his hand "this is cracker"he said again and gopi looked at him carefully. "are u nervous"gopi asked fighting back the laughter. "no i am not..ahem modi can do anything" "except ligthing a cracker" "shut up" "whats the big deal ahem..just lit it and keep it far." Ahem remained silent and gopi noticed that he was muttering something concentrating hard.

gopi went closer to him and heard him say "lit and keep it far..lit and keep it far." "dont u tell me that u dint lit a cracker at all in ur life?"gopi asked shocked and suprised


"mummy!!" "shut up.."and rashi remained calm. jigar caught her hand and washed it looked closely and took out a anti burnol cream and started applying it. rashi looked at him pouting and jigar gently finished applying the cream and looked at her seriously " alaways gets burned...u can never change girl, cant u escape one diwali safe without harming urself" "but what did i do..." "shut up..not a word anymore...if again u say that u want to burn a cracker again on next diwali i wil beat u this time"

"what..but ..." "shut up...not a word more..now go and get some rest..no need to come down..again..go" "but..what about.." "shut up...i told u to go na..so go inside." "hmmm..."rashi pouted and turned to leave and turned back "jigar"she called cutely "now what.." "hungry..."rashi said and jigar looked at her suprised. "go and lie down now"he said and rashi stormed off angry. "go and sleep..go and sleep..thats all i hear..idiot.. and a knock came on her room "enter"rashi shouted and jigar arrived with a plate.

rashi eyes became wide with suprise. "food!!"she shouted getting up and jigar looked seriously at her "i told u to sleep..lie down" "its just a burn"rashi muttered and lie down on her bed, jigar sat beside her on a stool. "k open ur mouth" "aaah" "eat" jigar said and made her eat with a spoon. "nice" rashi said eating. "now another one.." "wait..wait.." "what.." rashi looked at him shyly and made a best cute puppy face.."story" "what..rashi dint u leave the habit yet" "please..." "it was maa mistake..everytime u get hurt..she used to make u eat telling a story..now it became a habit to u"

rashi moved her head to one side "please..." "Fine..what story u want" "prince and princess" "and the evil witch.."jigar completed smiling. "yes..." "fine..so once their was a king..and.." jigar continued making her eat and teasing her fav prince character.


"i can do this..i can do this.. i can do this..."ahem repeated not moving an inch and gopi sighed. "its simple...just take a cracker lit it up and see..it got lit.." Ahem saw her and tried to copy that..but couldnt take the courage enough. gopi sighed and caught his hand and ahem looked at her suprised but gopi dint notice him "Take ur hand"she said taking his hand "place it near the fire" she said putting the cracker on fire and waited for it to burn and "then lit it" she exclaimend seeing the cracker started burning in his hand. "see...simple"gopi smiled and started rounding the cracker unaware that she was still holding his hand.

ahem looked at his hand and first he looked suprised and scared and took a step back. Gopi held his hand firmly "no need to worry ahem..its just a cracker..see.."she said rounding his hand at top speed. ahem came in close again and took another cracker in his hand and lit up with his free hand and broke into a smile enjoying it. "hey its fun"he said and gopi laughed. he rounded it, twisted it, circled it and what not in those little minutes and looked at gopi who was smiling seeing him. a naughty smile crept on his lips. he brought the cracker near her and shouted "booo" "ahem!" gopi jumped away from him and immediately took a cracker and lit it up.

and both started fighting with the lighted crackers. "ha...3-1"ahem shouted. "thats not fair.. u are pushing..my crackers out of my hand.." "weakling" "bull dozer" "what..now say"ahem said and ran after her with a cracker and gopi ran away from him shouting ahem to stop.. both dint notice that the cracker put off but keep on chasing until ahem caught her hand and pulled her towards him and both start to laugh looking at each other. slowly the smile dissapeared from gopis face looking at him and her hand in his grasp and ahem realized the tension soon too. Both looked at each other faces and ahem saw slight tears in her eyes. the kept on looking at one another

until anitha called ahem searching him and gopi realeased her hand and went away at top speed.


"what happend?"anitha asked coming to the terrace. "i dont know"ahem said truthfully for the first time. "be careful mr.modi..its our engagement tomorrow.." ahem smiled "i wil never forget that...even in my dreams..tomorrow it wil be a memorable day in my life foever."


CUT...


Ahem's engagement day...Time...5 o clock...Modi halll...

"AHEM!!!...what did u do" kokila shouted. All were stunned and shocked. Everyone looked at jigar and ahem. jigar was too shocked to say anything...and gopi was too lost to say anything looking at the large diamond engagement ring on her hand which was actually belonged to anitha until 5 min back.

sorry for cutting in so fast...actually thier was much more to the twist and a second major twist but i couldnt fit everything in the maha update

so wait for more mystery to be revealed...

i wil comment back to ur comments later...so if i missed anyoen from pm..i am sorry..

let me know if i missed u...

suggestions are welcomed whole heatedly

coming to story

what happend that changed ahems decision so suddenly.

did he realize gopis value or did the brother rivalry kicked agian..

what wil jigar do now..

and most of all...what happend before 5 o clock in the mm mansion...

Catch it on the coming friday or saturday....

and yeah...the shocks are not over yet...its just the begining

yay...yay...yay...me first ...me first...

Shaina wooo!!!! such a lovely update?9y dont our CV's get such kinda updates)... now it is very clear that, Jiger loves Rashi( think he had a some flash back), Ahem loves gopi(may be his hearts wins over Ego).. but what about kinjal??

Thanks for bro's fight(small & Cute)

that was really funny,(deewali night).. Gopi is teaching dare&Dashing Ahemji how to lit crackers... wah wah what an !dea(thought)..


and teaser is so good.. waiting for that.. please update soon

wow shaina👏excellent dear...giving such wonderful twists again and again
ur such a fab writers wow amazing dear😊
so ahem just could not see gopi moving on with jigar...i feel that the way he acts with her like he owns her and all i think he loves her...but is not able to admit it coz he does not want to lose and also maybe due to his hatred towards jigar too...
but i'm really out of ideas her cant guess dear coz ur giving such twists its hard to guess what ur going to write next...
and rashi agreeing to marry rakesh...not bad ahem handled it well
and such a sweet moment between raji...they both have feelings for each other i guess...
and awww gohem so sweet😃 stupid anita😡 if she had not come in the middle wonder what would have happened between the two...
and omg shaina dear seriously left us hanging again...but wow ahem put the ring on gopi cant wait to find out if he did it out of love or he didn want jigar to marry her...
and how will the family anitha and everyone react especially koki...and will gopi accept this??
omg cant wait to find out...waiting for ur update
and shaina dear love the update
thanks for the maha update sweetheart🤗

Reserved..

Thanks fr d PM...

wud read and Unres soon

UNRES

loved the update dear!!

U are seriously a magician when it comes to playing with words... loved the mega Update and its hooked me to ur FF...

Please continue soon..

shaina u weave magical stories...it was absolutely awesome👏...loved jigar and ahem's confrontation...the dynamics between the characters keep changing in a wonderful way...waiting to see how gopi got ahems ring... ...thanks for the pm..

fantastic update shaina...i am loving the scenes..every one of them...i liked that tight slap which jigar gave ahem...he really deserved it...awesome scene of raji!!!...seriously i am falling in love with jigar...he is the perfect gentleman and only speaks when needed and this shows why korag support jigar and herag support ahem in ur ff...nice to see this relationships growing on the characters and story...the diwali scene is awesome...though jigar is clearly hurt with rashi/rakesh rishta but he is kind of accepting fate...loved gohem scene...playful and romantic at the same time...wat is with the precap dear..i was expecting a long jeolousy track...i know u can never ever dissappoint us with ur nice and long updates..but the twists seem to me utmost dangerous 😕..god i dont know how i will take it...wat is happening to our ahem dikra 😉..lost in gopi after the chase ...and ring landed on gopi's hand 😕..i will surely go mad...pls pls update fast...btw thanks for the pm dear...