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Posted: 14 years ago

urmila dreaming ...

wow ... waiting to see wht u are upto in the next update


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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice part waiting for next part
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Urmila's dream will remain as a dream forever
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PART 24

Aham and Gopi will have the lunch with Hetal and Kokila, Aehem will tell his mom that the food was very tasty, and he will go to his room for rest, Kokila will ask Gopi to go to her room and rest as she would have got tiered travelling, Gopi will tell she will rest later but before that she would like to meet Rashi ben, as she was missing her, Hetal will try to tell her, But kokila will tell gopi to wait gopi bahu, first you go and rest in your room, rashi is gone to your maamis house, she is not in the house, we will talk later, gopi will nod her head saying ji maaji, ,,,,,

Hetal will remember Rashi, and she will make sad face and will go to the room, Kokila will follow Hetal to her room, upon seeing Hetal sad, she will confront hetal, Kokila will tell hetal y she is so sad for Rashi, everything will be alright between jigar and rashi, as Rashi will never stay in her mothers house longer, she will come running and will ask forgiveness from jigar, and will beg everyone, to live here,

Mota bhabhi please don't hurt yourself, by thinking about of Rashi, when she has left the house, by herself she will even return back on her wish itself, but y are u wasting ur tears for that brainless girl, who only knows to trouble others, please Mota bhabhi don't cry...

Hetal on hearing this from Kokila, will tell Kokila,

Kokila u said so easily not to worry about of Rashi, i know my Rashi is not like Gopi, we cannot except Rashi to be like Gopi, Kokila i know she is bit lazy, and not serious of doing the house hold things, and she have childishness, but kokila there is no one in this world who is good in all the fiels or good in everything, or there is no one in this world who is perfect, i know u always dreampt of getting a perfect bahu, and i know u got gopi as ur bahu for Aham, but i never even imagined that Rashi will be my bahu, but it was fate that brought Jigar and Rashi together, i know she is not 100% perfect as a bahu, but Kokila she is my bahu, and Jigars wife, she is not any furniture she too have life, she have her feelings, if she does any mistake it does not mean we will throw her away from our life...

Today Rashi is not here with us, i know Rashi left the house on her wish, i know she is responsible, but kokila don't u think, there is a reason behind this, don't u think kokila that we are also equally involved in this act of Rashi, Kokila u never understood Rashi, U took Ahams rishta for Rashi, but u choosed Gopi over Rashi, but than also Rashi did not discriminate ur act, since she loved gopi, she always supported gopi in all her work, she helped gopi in all smaal matters, i have seen kokila whenever u punished gopi, or Ahem hhurt gopi, Rashi was the person, who was there to support gopi, and more than gopi rashi was the one who use to be hurt for gopi, and suddenly on the day of Gopis marriage with Ahem, she was made to marry without of her choice to Jigar, they did not had time to think of each other whether they are suitable for each other, but when she enterd the house along with gopi as a bahu of modi's u stepped in between always trying to insult Rashi at every moment, Rashi did not had a single moment where u appreciated her, u always tried to differentiate between Gopi and Rashi, but Rashi took ur act as a blessing and always respected, although she din't know many things, she has put her 100% to prove u that she is a good daughter in law, but u never understood her.

Tell me Kokila if in place of Rashi, if Gopi would have been, if i have told u not worry would u have agreed and stayed quite, No kokila u would have gone to Gopi and brought her back, since its a matter of my bahu, u are saying, like this...

I know devarji could not be successfull in life, that is his matter, but what i and chiragji could do for that, we never asked Devarji to not to earn or build his own career, but u always insulted us, and wanted to have the control of the house, that is the only reason u made ur son a great business man, and u always underestimated Jigar for the whole life, and u even insulted Jigar in front of Rashi, think of the position of Rashi Kokila she was new to the house, and u always insulted her husband, which women could bear such an insult, but my rashi beared all the insult but than also she never complained anything against anyone...

I always treated Aeham and Kinjal as my own children, but u always treated Jigar as just as a cousin of Aeham , Kokila i don't want to say this, but i cannot stop my self from saying this, if my Jigar and Rashi are being split today, even u have the equal share in it Kokila,,, on saying this Hetal will go out of the room, Kokila will be left to stand ... and Kokila will close her eyes with sorrows in her eyes will call for kanaji's name ...

Kokila will go to Mandir and will sit on the steps of Mandir praying Kanaji, and will ask Kishan bagwan i never thought mota bhabhi will think in this towards me, i know i was always upset with Paragji since he could not support our family financially, but whatever the act i did till toaday was in support of this house reputation, i always wanted good for the family, even though i knew about Rashi's intension i always kept quite thinking that Rashis evil Plans should not break her relationship with her husband, may be i am rude to Rashi, but i always did that thinking that she will learn from her mistake, if a mother wont be strict with the kids the kids will never learn thinking this i was always tried to be strict, i always though mota bhabhi as my sister, if she had such a hatred towards me she would have told me, iwould have corrected my mistakes but... i did not think this will end like this, Kokila will have a tears in her eys and will cry, she will hear a voice from behind calling mom, when she will turn back she will see Aham standing, Kokila will try to wipe her tears and hide her face, but Aham will know all the things, and will tell he knows everything, he heard Kaki speaking to her, Kokila will breakdown and will hug Aham...

Aham will ask her to calm down as everything will be going to be alright...and he will do something regarding this...

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Edited by bhavya - 13 years ago
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nicely done ...


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felt bad for kokila.great update
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PART 25😛.

Aham thinks of his mother and feels bad to see tears in her eyes thinking that he promises himself that he will never let his mother to drop a tear from her eyes once again...

Gopi as usual enters the room with the green tea for him in the night, and places in the table, while Aham will be in the deep thought of his mothers sorrow,

Gopi calls his name Ahamji , Ahamji, he wont answer her, so gopi goes near him and touches him and calls Ahamji, kya huwa aap baath kyun nahi kar rahe hain?

(Ahamji what haapened why are you not speaking anything?)

Aham will be irritated with Gopi as he is in frustration, he shouts on top of his voice at gopi...

Tumhe samaj maein nahin aatha ki maein kuch soch raha hoon, jab dekho Ahamji Ahmaji, tang aagaya hoon maein tumse...

(cant you understand , i am thinking something, everytime Ahamji Ahmaji, i am really fed up with You)

Gopi will have tears in her eyes and she closes her eyes and will move out of the room on seeing Ahams angry face...

On seeing Gopi running out of the room Aham will feel bad for her, and lifts his hand and calls up gopis name but it will be too late since gopi will run out of the room at Rocket speed...

Aham will realize his folly and sees green tea on the table and he feels bad for his behaviour towards Gopi and bangs his hand against the wall...and says to himself i hurt her once again,

Maein kisi ko kushi nahi de saktha naahi, mom, naahi gopi naahi Anitha...

(i cant give happiness to anyone neither mom, gopi or Anitha)

I am the reason for gopis tears i have to ask for her forgiveness, but before that i need to think of my mother, i don't want my mothers head to bend infront of anyone... whether it is Hetal kaki or anyone...

Aham will sit on his bed and will think of a solution so that his mothers proud wont be hurted infront of anyone.

He remembers Hetal Kakis word where she targeted Parag Modis weakness that he never earned anything for his family for whole life, and Aham realizes that the reason behind his mothers insult was none other than their dependency on Chirag Kaka's business, and financial support for the family...

I know papa never supported the family financially, it was Chirag kaka who looked after the family business, who stood as a backbone of the modi empire once Grandfather parted away from us, that was the reason behind Mom being so strict and interested in bringing me up and made me an eligible buisinessman so that i will fulfill the place of papa in supporting the family financially, so that we never depend on Chirag kaka for our basic needs.

She has taken care of me for the whole life, and she has tried to fulfil all my needs, and today she has made me a strong enough so that i can take care of my families needs, that was the reason behind her intensions... today i understood the reason behind my mothers behaviour with papa, she made me a business man, because she knew it one or the other day this problem will arise in the house where anyone can point the finger on papa's weakness.

I respect kakiji from the bottom of my heart for the support she has given to our family but today her words are pricking my heart, the tears has dropped from my moms eyes but it is paining in my heart,

God please give me a strength, and show me a way, so that i can bring happiness in my mothers eyes...

Gopi will come to the room in the night, aham will be still in a deep thought, Gopi will be too scared of Aham and she will be walking very slowly trying to make less noise as much as possible so that it wont let his anger to raise on her once again... Aham sees Gopis scared look and both their eyes meet, Gopi will immediately escapes from his glance and goes to cupboard to takes her night saree, before he opens his mouth, she will run towards the bathroom, and changes to night saree and she slowly opens the door and moves toward the bed slowly...Aham will be waiting for her, Gopi will be scared still and will take her blank sheet andimmediately tries to sleep without even looking at Aham on the other side of the bed and on seeing gopis behaviour, Aham calls up Gopis name but Gopi will close her eyes, and pretends to sleep, Aham tries to touch her, but he thinks he will talk to her tomorrow, ... and sleeps on the other end,... Gopi will have tears in her eyes and thinks to talk to Aham and wipes her tears and tries to turn towards Aham...

Aham will immediately switch off the light without seeing Gopis hand moving towards him , again she gets scared of him and closes her eyes, Aham will not be getting sleep, he will turn towards gopi, and sees her back and again tries to wake her up and when he was about to touch her, he hears the sound of crying in the dark,,,,

he immediately have a bad(confused) expression on his face and switches on the light, and syas , kya ye ro rahi hai ? (is she crying?) and calls her name and asks Gopi to get up and to look at him, and asks her, why are you crying, and on hearing this gopi immediately gets up and hugs him, Aham will hold her, and tries to calm her down Gopi's head will rest on his chest and she will be snobbing very highly with a heavy breath Aham will ask her not to cry and takes his both hands and places them on gopis cheeks and wipes her tears, gopi's tears will stop, and he asks her sorry for hurting her,\

Gopi will tell him Ahamji aap mujhse gussa kabhi math hoyiyega, mujhse bardaash nahin hotha, aisa lagtha hai, meri zindagi mujhse naaraz hogayi hai...(Ahamji please do not get angry on me, i can't tolerate it, i feel my life has become angry on m e)

On saying this she hugs him so tightly, Aham too will hug her tightly, Aham will calm her down and he promises her he will never be angry, if he repaeats this mistake she can punish him, on hearing this Gopis eyes will be widened up, aham will hold Gopis hand and will get a tight slap on his cheeks... and will make aaah aaah sound,

Gopi will be in confusion and scared and worried position

Ahamji please leave my hand what are you doing, please do not punish yourself from my hands, on hearing this Aham will tell her you don't want to punish me from your hands which means you want me to get punishment from others hands, ok alright my own hands, he himself will give a tight slap on his cheeks, Gopi will close her mouth by having a scary expression on her face,

And by calling his name holds his hand Ahamji please do not do like that please do stop it ahamji, i am so sory i hurted you by crying but please do not hurt yourself, see in my eyes there are no tears at all...and shows her eyes to him like a kid , Aham will examine her eyes, and says haaa i think there is no tears in your eyes but promise me you will not cry, Gopi laughs and places her hand on Ahams, and says promise and both will laugh and she will rest her head on ahams shoulders...

(You will have RaJi in next Part, will Rashi will come back to MM, what will be ahams solution to the problem in MM)

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Edited by bhavya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Realy nice Update so whats is ahem goning to do
Can't wait to read the next part~!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Bloem123

Realy nice Update so whats is ahem goning to do

Can't wait to read the next part~!

thanks,
Ya Aham will do what , i have two to three ideas not knowing which one will be best...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neetisagar

thanks,
Ya Aham will do what , i have two to three ideas not knowing which one will be best...


it will be good i thinks can't wait to read it😃

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