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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update Shilpa! I like the way you are developing the story.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
thanks for the update hun....

atleast people are able to get their part out unlike in SNS where people don't listen to others....

i really want to know what Ahem will do now.... i hope Koki doesn't pressurize any of them

please write soon dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
Wonderfully written shilpa.. I had tears in my eyes reading about what Gopi went through.. Please continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great update..............want to know what aham will do now?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sorry friends for the late update, but here is the next part. I hope you enjoy it.

Part 7


Next morning everyone is at the dinning table eating breakfast. Koki looked worried and tired

Kinjle thinking now I won't have to worry about marrying Elesh, they will break engagement themselves and she can marry Umang

Rashi smirking, thinking now they can plan to get Kinjle married to Dhaval and she won't have to leave MM, and she can rule MM, badi kagdi will do anything for choti kagdi, and rest of the family won't let anything happen to their one and only daughter of the house.

Parag is worried about Koki, she looked worried and tense and he knows she didn't sleep all night. He decided he would have to talk to Gopi himself, since Koki has decided not to force Gopi to do anything.

Ahem also worried about his mom. He know he needed to do something but he did not know what.

When Ahem was ready to leave Parag asked him to drop him at the shelter. When they are in the car, both are quiet, lost in thoughts. Ahem thinking why did papa want to ride with me today? Parag was thinking about how to bring up Gopi to Ahem. Finally he just decided to ask him how he feels

Parag: Ahem, I am worried about your mother she did not sleep all night, and she has decided not to force Gopi to come back for the family's sake.

Ahem: surprised his father is talking to him about his mom, but listens quietly.

Parag: How do you feel about Gopi coming back? Even if its temporary, will you be able to handle it?

Ahem: stops the car on the side and looks at his father and says what are you saying?

Parag: I have decided to ask Gopi to come back, for you mother and for our family. I know you don't think I care for any of you, but the truth is I love all my family, and I would do anything for our happiness.

Ahem: touched by what his father said just waited for him to continue.

Parag: Gopi has changed so much in the past 3 months. She has been through a lot. I don't know if this will make a difference to you, but she knows how to read and write now.

Ahem: surprised and curious tell his father to continue.

Parag: but if you agree, and I ask her to come back, you will see for your self she is not the the same scared, timid, afraid to speak. She is still shy and traditional but she has more confidence in herself.

Ahem: thinking about what his father said and finally says to Parag to talk to Gopi. He then pulls the car into traffic and drops Parag off at the shelter. On his way to the office, he is still thinking about what his father said.


At the shelter, Parag take Gopi aside and tell her what is going on at the MM and KInjle wedding plans. He tells her the Mehta's want more time to get to know us. They are suspicious about how you left home that night. How Koki had collapsed hearing this and more, but she does not know what to do about it. She does not want to put you thru anymore pain by asking you to come back.

Gopi listens to what Parag is saying. She gets worried for Koki's health and MM family reputation. She says to Parag, Papaji I will come back for you and maji, I owe you so much for supporting me on that night, but before I come back I have to speak to Ahemji first.

Parag: agrees and tells her he will ask Ahem to stop by that evening.


Precap: Will Ahem be surprised by new Gopi. Will Gopi be able to stand up to Ahem and ask for what she needs from him. Read it all in the next update soon.




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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Shilpa, what a place to stop, just when Aham in pondering in his mind, whether he can live with Gopi as she is now, the first meeting after 3 months too, well i guess you need to make it really good. Will be waiting eagerly for the next installment. .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this is just awesome!! I read all your updates together! please continue soon!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was a wonderful update please continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i just cant wait for the ahem-gopi interaction....u left me hanging on a cliff shilpa...update soon..else i'll go nuts...and u are takin the story forward smoothly..nice transition...gr8 job😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi friends, sorry for the late update, was working this weekend and my Monday is not going any better as you know from my post I am fed up with this show. Originally I wrote a different version of the next part, but I changed my mind, so I hope you like this one. Even I am not sure where I am going with this story, but this is how I wished the show had showed Gopi, so I hope you enjoy her. Thanks for all the wonderful comments.

Part 8


Ahem is in his office thinking about what his father has said, he has not come up with any conclusions. As far as Gopi is concerned, his thinking, she will only be there temporarily, his feelings for her have not changed. It is a good thing if she has made changes in her life, at least this will not worry his mom later when she leave. As for him his going to put his life on hold until Kinjle gets married, then he will think about what to do, meanwhile he will concentrate on his work, and keeping his mom worry free.


Later his father calls him and tells him to stop to see Gopi because she wants to talk to him, and if she agrees to bring her back home with him. He hangs up the phone, thinking now what? What does she want from him? His thinking at this point he does not care, he will make her come home, and make it clear it will be temporary, for his mom's sake and for Modi reputation. In his mind his thinking that's the least she could do, after all his mom was there for her all those month when she was living there. He decided to leave work early to talk to her and take her home that night.


Gopi is thinking about going back to MM, she is little fearful of getting too involved again. She knows this will be a temporary stay for her, her mind knows that, but there is always hope in her heart, she know it will never happen and resolved to control her hear little more firmly. She knows its not health for her to hope for anything, but she wants her temporary existent to be peaceful, even if she get treated like a common household furniture that is fine with her, but she know that she doesn't want Ahem to loose his temper, and take his anger out on her for something she has not done. She will decide what to do with her life after this temporary setback. But she will do everything in her power not to get trapped in the love and affections of the Modi family.



Later that evening one of her friends at the shelter come to get her because someone is there to see her. Gopi know exactly who it is and composed herself. Told her friend she would be there in few minutes. When she is alone, she takes a deep breath and gathers her courage and thinks if he gets mad, she will not go with him, nothing is worth putting up with his temper. After few minutes she walks out of her room.


Ahem is standing by his car watching the activities around and impressed with the shelter. There were kids playing in the play ground, some were sitting with their books studying, he looked around when he heard someone call Gopi's name and he froze in place. He was watching her talking to one of the ladies, she looked so serious and reserved, even at a distance he could tell she was holding herself back. She was dressed different, no gujarati style sari, but bengali style, her hair was not tied back, they were parted to side, she looked more slender, as if she has lost weight in recent months. She looks like she hadn't smiled in a long time, and does not intend to start anytime soon. Her face was devoid of all emotions, she was more reserved, she didn't look innocent or naive anymore. His thinking she doesn't look afraid or timid anymore, like his father had said that morning, she was more confident.


Gopi has noticed him looking at her from the corner of her eyes, but she did not look his way, she was telling one of the ladies in charge that she may be leaving that evening and what she would do with the little things she had in her room. She did not want them to hold her room, there may be someone who needs it, finally the lady left and she started walking toward where Ahem is standing. She comes near him she stops, they both look at each other for a minute.


To Gopi, Ahem also looked different, he was still handsome, but there was a change in him that she could not describe, even to herself, but she could tell something was different. She lets it go and thinks I shouldn't worry about him, he knows how to take care of himself. She thinks to her self, bit bitterly, this is Ahem Modi an arrogant man who doesn't want or need anyone, except support from his mom and to be left alone to run his business empire, those are the only things he care about, oh and the love of his life Anita. Damn, why is she thinking this way, this is only temporary and remind herself to think with her head instead of her heart.




Hope you liked this part, will be back shortly with the next part. Again thank you in advance.


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