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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one.
welcome back Diya missed u

🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
English Translation (to the best of my ability)

RAW EARTH

I was waiting for that pure love of someone

Which didn't need a reason whatsoever

Love, not because I am a earth that can be molded to any shape

But because I too have an existence in this world


Used to think I would get such acceptance

But who knew it was stubbornness of someone

To prove oneself and their decision right

What does it matter to them, if someone's life becomes a joke

They never thought that they had the power to hurt someone

And a fool I was, I bowed to their acceptance

When i got disappointed in this fake acceptance

I started searching for support, in my own destroyed yard

Got that support, from someone it wasn't accepted from

A strong tree was standing in the hurricane

Of whose existence I had no inkling

Became my support in this world

Who kept me safe in its shade

Who knew my heart without my expessing it

Who faced all the trials for me

I pray, that it doesn't become a net of acceptance

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: fanbidaai

nice one Diya welcome back 🤗


Thanks for liking the poem and the warm welcome Suk...
i was writing the translation so didnt see your message
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ayesha_78

nice one.

welcome back Diya missed u

🤗


Thanks Ayesha Dear...
missed you guys too...
i am glad you liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank was really good 👏and the themes were things that almost anyone could relate to, keep it up!
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Posted: 14 years ago
There you go finally! MRS. Diya Umang.. Awesome work. Loved it. Keep posting or will you be busy😉 with umang
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Posted: 14 years ago
First, welcome back Diya, it's great to read one of your poems again.
Second, thanks for the translation.

This was awesome, you summed it up nicely.
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Posted: 14 years ago

That was such a beautifully told poem. I could imagine it either being recited or sung.

Based on the history of this forum you were here then you left now you are back - so welcome back, I'm Swasthi.
I hope you are planning to complete your FF Karuna. It is such an interesting piece of writing.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Caramelxx

Thank was really good 👏and the themes were things that almost anyone could relate to, keep it up!


Thanks a lot dear... it was quite a while since i penned something...
am glad you can relate to it...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Jake-neil

There you go finally! MRS. Diya Umang.. Awesome work. Loved it. Keep posting or will you be busy😉 with umang


Bhai... ab bas karo ye Umang wali tang khichai... find something new...
Thanka lot for liking the post... will try to post more.. have a couple of them in mind, got to give them shape

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