Group Fanfic 'Pyar Huva Tumse' e.15 P 65 - Page 2

Originally posted by: desi chic

Rakshaji,

You can always be counted for bringing people together can't you? Wonderful idea and ff. Loving it already!!

May I write for this as well...

Would also like to congratulate you for keeping this forum alive. You are a great asset to it!!

Cheers,
dc

Thanks Nitu I know I am a great asset. to SP forum. But I have got a lot in return too. I have met a wonderful ppl like you from all over the world. I have touched many hearts and many hearts have touched me.

For you writing this fanfic you are most welcome. I already have queue of 4 right now including you and I am in process of getting more writers. I love for teens to get confidence about wrting for them selves. I had big problem with writing and no one helped me. So I can understand. My husband just did the work for me but never sat down and took time to help me. So I understand how hard it is to write without any help.

So I want more and more ppl to come forward and I will try my best to make them write on their own. This will help them in their school and college too once they get the confidence. Not every one is gifted in writing. Trust me I was not. I had struggled a lot.

So I am awating for your turn and your story

Love raksha di

Originally posted by: punjabi_kuri36

hahhahh me neither😆😍

oh well lets dream that our loving and caring nahar(well when he was loving and caring😊)cums to one of us 😃😳

Originally posted by: naz_u54

thank you i will try my best to write good please dont hate me if its bad lol

cant wait to read your episode nazia! dont worry im pretty sure it'll be great!😃

good start raksha....

and good luck 👍🏼 ...nazia....

If need help...just PM me....will be gladd to help you 😃 ....

raksha, I will be next...as promised 👍🏼 .... neetu, get in line 😉 😆 ....

Originally posted by: shali

good start raksha....

and good luck 👍🏼 ...nazia....

If need help...just PM me....will be gladd to help you 😃 ....

raksha, I will be next...as promised 👍🏼 .... neetu, get in line 😉 😆 ....

thanks😆

Episode # 2 A Truth Comes Out

Nahar was very angry while saloni was trying to calm him he feels like beating the guy up who's name is Sanjay, Saloni takes Nahar outside after the movie ends. Nahar grabs Sanjay's collar but Saloni intervenes. Nahar tells her how grateful he is and he thanks her. He couldn't believe Janki did this to him.

Nahar- the least I can do is to drop you home.

Saloni- No its ok my brother is going to pick me up please understand.

Nahar- Yes I understand. They both say bye to each other.

SALONIS HOUSE-

Ambika- Saloni beta phone

Saloni- ji mama. Saloni picks up the phone. Nahar is calling.

Nahar-Saloni I'm picking you up in 10 min to go to a restaurant be ready bye

Saloni-But Nahar but I ca…..

Beep………………..

As Nahar already hung up, she decided to go with him after all he has been through.


RESTURANT-

As the waitress gives them menu, Nahar sees janki and sanjay. He got furious, Saloni also saw them, and told Nahar to calm down. As they order their food Nahar sees them kissing. Nahar goes to Janki and tells her he could not believe he loved someone like her. He made a big mistake and he never ever wants to see her face again. Saloni takes him to their table.

Nahar- Waiter 1 beer please.

Saloni- What are u doing?

As Nahar gulps down the beer Saloni stares at him, Nahar ask for 2 more beer and now he is totally drunk. Saloni gets scared and asks him if she could drop him home

Nahar- no I can't go home my parents will be angry

Saloni- But where are u gonna go.

Nahar- I don't know .

Saloni- I will take you to my house.

Saloni gets a cab to take him to her house. But she is scared thinking what if mama and papa see him, oh no…. he will sleep in my room and I will sleep in Shubhra's room since she is out of town.

Nahar-Saloni please stop spinning , your making me dizzy

Saloni- oh no, Nahar listen u will sleep in my room. I will sleep in Shuhbra's. I will wake up early in the morning then I will take you home. .

Nahar-ok where are we going? And STOP SPINNING.

Saloni- close your eyes.


As they reach her house Saloni gets Nahar in without making any sound. She takes Nahar to her room and she goes into Shubra. That night she was thinking of Nahar, she closed her eyes but all she could see was Nahar's face. Is she in love? Saloni says no to herself and says he is just a good friend.

Saloni wakes up in the morning as it is 6:45 . She goes in her room and wakes up Nahar.

Saloni- Nahar get up

Nahar-huh why are u at my house this isn't my room

Saloni- you got drunk yesterday and I brought u here

Nahar-oh no Saloni im soo sorry. It is very hard to get over a person.

Saloni- yeah

Nahar- well I got to go.

Saloni- ok bye. Are you sure you can go by yourself..

Nahar- Yes I am fine . Bye, and thank you.

As Nahar left saloni kept on thinking about him, and Nahar thought that Saloni is a very nice person and a true friend.


NAHAR'S HOUSE-

As Nahar reaches home is family is very angry with him.

Sujan Singh- (Nahar's father) Nahar where were you last night ? Don't you know that we all been worried.

Savitri - (Nahar's mom) where were you?

Nahar- I was………………………….

Stay tuned to hear Nahar's answer

Only next writer can tell

Thank you ramas for helping me

that was very good!!!!
good job!!!
cnt wait for what the next writer has in mind!!!
continue soon!!!

Nazia very well written episode. 👏 I told you you can do it. It gets better and better. Trust me. keep up the good work.

Great Job Nazia, u r an excellent writer 👏