FF:Pyaar Tho Hona Hi Tha Ch-32, Pg-104 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
😊nice ff dear keep posting more waiting 4 nxt update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow fantastic ff of Surabh. I loved it. I am happy that it is totally different from the show. And please continue this ff. Waiting for the next update. I love Abhay in this. Different rude charecter.👏👏👏👏👏👏. Weldone Deepa. Next time make it as longer dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Krithikaas

Wow fantastic ff of Surabh. I loved it. I am happy that it is totally different from the show. And please continue this ff. Waiting for the next update. I love Abhay in this. Different rude charecter.👏👏👏👏👏👏. Weldone Deepa. Next time make it as longer dear.

Thanks Krithikaa for your lovely comment. Will update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Don't take much time yaar..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fantastic start Deepa.👏Surabh first scene itself a fight 😆and soon it will turn into a romance😳.Continue your work with some Surabh romance too.😳😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Today I will update next chapter. Thanks to everyone for your lovely comments. All are asking romance. So much of romance will be coming after few episodes. It will just entertain you.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Today I will update next chapter. Thanks to everyone for your lovely comments. All are asking romance. So much of romance will be coming after few episodes. It will just entertain you.[/QUOTE

u are a very beautiful writer.........👏
plz continue.......😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28

Chapter-2

Abhay is driving to the bar for a few drinks.

He's thinking: 'what hell is going on. I can't believe I'm married to that Surbhi….oh how she is gonna regret marrying me.' His eyes flared up in anger just thinking about her. He enters the parkinglot and dangerously swerves his car in a parking spot. He walks into the bar and spots his friend Ajay. Abhay sits next to him and tells the bartender to get him a whiskey on the rocks.

Ajay: whats up man? Enjoying life?
Abhay: kya kaak enjoy kar raha hoon….uss Surbhi ne to meri zindigi barbaad kardi.
Ajay: I still can't believe you married her….i always thought you would marry a sexy girl, but you ended up with a girl who reminds me of art films. Aacha ek baat baata….tum dono kya ek hi bed pe so ge….bechari Surbhi…usse kya paata ke humare Abhay bed par ladkiyo ke saath kya kya karta hai.

Ajay laughs when Abhay playfully punches his arm.
Ajay: ok ok I'm sorry, ab yeh baata ke tu Surbhi ke saath kya karne waala hai.
Abhay: usse to mein itni duk doonga ke woh khud mujhe chor kar chali jaye gi. Woh nahi jaanthi ke mein kaun hoon.
Abhay looks at Ajay and gives him an evil smirk.

Back at the in Abhay and Surbhi's room.

Surbhi is still crying when she hears a knock on the door. She quickly wipes her tears and goes and opens the door. It is none other than Pari.

Pari: hi Surbhi I just came to check if you are comfortable.
Surbhi smiles: I'm fine thanks, just a little tired.
Pari notices that Surbhi's eyes are red from crying.
Pari: I can tell how fine you are….what did Abhay do?
Surbhi: woh…kuch nahi..i'm just….i'm just missing home.
Pari walks in the room and makes Surbhi sit down.

Pari: dekho Surbhi….i know on what conditions you and Abhay got married. I also know Abhay very well since I'm his childhood friend. But let me tell you something….Abhay is a very stubborn man….he may seem rude on top but he is a nice guy at heart. You need to have patience with him and sooner or later he'll accept you. Plus I am always here to help you.

Surbhi smiles: I have a feeling that we'll be great friends….tum bohut achi ho.
Pari: who to mein hoon. (They both laugh.) ok go to sleep now and I'll see you tomorrow. Good night.
Pari leaves the room thinking:'mujhe iss bare mein Abhay se baat karni hogi'

Abhay was driving back home when a thought suddenly came to his mind: 'how am I going to sleep in the same bed as Surbhi?' that thought made him very uncomfortable as he entered his room. To his surprise he didn't see Surbhi sleeping on his bed, a look of confusion appeared on his handsome face. He walked further in to the room when he spotted her sleeping on the floor. Without realizing it Abhay's eyes softened at the sight. But that look disappeared just as suddenly as it had appeared. He quickly changed into his night clothes and went to bed planning on how to get Surbhi out of his room, this house, and his life.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Loved your update Deepa.👏

Hope to see Abhay starting to love Surbhi soon.😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Haila Abhay's eyes softened, that itself gives us a hope to future romance. OMG sry deeps meri one track mind.😆. Deeps your FF gave me a warm feeling about the whole thing. The saddest part is that it is brief. You see the FFs is so sweet that we want more of it. Again a you have done it yaar, Awesomeeeeeeeeee👏👏👏👏

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