Random Shot -*The Burning Desire*[Completed]

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Misnomer

@Misnomer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

A/N: Thanku everyone for such an overwhelming response. I was not suppose to update toady but i did :P

Just a small thanku gesture

PMs LATER

Cheers

Preksha

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Niki

@luvzindagi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

That was amazing
Please update soon

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Suzaina

@Manyata5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

It was beautiful and wanted

Awesome

Cont soon

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Rashnayak

@Rashnayak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Ahmazzing update! Next time, let him lose his control.. Bwahahahaha

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ShadowHearts

@ShadowHearts

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Fantastic!
I badly want a KaYa dance sequence now... 😔
PM me when you update the next part! =D

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yoginisahakari

@yoginisahakari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Amazing
Wow 👏

Love and prayer
Yogini

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LaviDovey

@Lavi_dovey

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

ur RANDOM SHOT is all ready to set my phone screen on fire.

nothing intimate but the sizzling and hot gaze and thoughts of kabir and ananya and amazing description of urs made it awsome.
m in love with this part.
update soon nxt part.
pm me whenever u update.

Edited by krazykaju - 10 years ago

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

awww as expected editor saab did danced with his junior reporter...& set the floor on fire with his hot gazes 😳😳😳 ...

Lolz ...Mr kabir went back alone... I had thought he gonna drag Miss Kashyap along too 😈😆😆😆
not fair Mr.sharma akela chod kar chale gaye 😆😆😆 we wudn't minded if he did something beyond limit 😆😆😆 but must say quite in control mr.sharma 😆😆😆